Le Jacquelope
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Ok hiddenself suggested I should put this here...
The draft of Chapter 2 is online at my website.
You'll find Chapter 1, and the RTF versions of these stories as well (for offline reading).
It's a biggie. I'm thinking of cutting it into two parts, but I can't find a proper place to split it. I know it should be split, though, perhaps into two or even three parts!
Any ideas?
What do ya think so far?
I plan to submit it to Lit AFTER I've taken some outside opinions into account. (It would be kind of counter productive to get opinions AFTER I've submitted it, and the flaws are there and unchangeable LOL)
Thanks in advance!
The draft of Chapter 2 is online at my website.
You'll find Chapter 1, and the RTF versions of these stories as well (for offline reading).
It's a biggie. I'm thinking of cutting it into two parts, but I can't find a proper place to split it. I know it should be split, though, perhaps into two or even three parts!
Any ideas?
What do ya think so far?
I plan to submit it to Lit AFTER I've taken some outside opinions into account. (It would be kind of counter productive to get opinions AFTER I've submitted it, and the flaws are there and unchangeable LOL)
Thanks in advance!
