Ladies, a little help please.

[JimmyHartley]

I'm writing a scene where an Angel gives a young lady mind blowing oral sex and I really want to make sure I do it from her perspective, her feelings, her thoughts, her reactions.
I've already made sure to include a substantial amount of foreplay being the new-age guy I am, but for that authentic touch I've decided to ask the ladies here about some of their real life experiences (About their thoughts and feelings while receiving mind blowing oral, not about their thoughts and feelings while receiving mind blowing oral sex from an Angel [Although if any lady HAS had mind blowing oral sex with an Angel their input would be greatly appreciated!])
So, ladies, what have been some of your more abstract thoughts while being eaten out? Have you looked up and noticed he still has a "Stone Cold" Steve Austin poster on his wall?
Has his (Or her for that matter) Cat walked in and distracted you?
The ones I find most interesting I'll put in the story, just for a touch of realism, call it research.
Thanks in Advance.

 

[kitkat88]

I'm writing a scene where an Angel gives a young lady mind blowing oral sex and I really want to make sure I do it from her perspective, her feelings, her thoughts, her reactions.
I've already made sure to include a substantial amount of foreplay being the new-age guy I am, but for that authentic touch I've decided to ask the ladies here about some of their real life experiences (About their thoughts and feelings while receiving mind blowing oral, not about their thoughts and feelings while receiving mind blowing oral sex from an Angel [Although if any lady HAS had mind blowing oral sex with an Angel their input would be greatly appreciated!])
So, ladies, what have been some of your more abstract thoughts while being eaten out? Have you looked up and noticed he still has a "Stone Cold" Steve Austin poster on his wall?
Has his (Or her for that matter) Cat walked in and distracted you?
The ones I find most interesting I'll put in the story, just for a touch of realism, call it research.
Thanks in Advance.

Sweetie, if it's that mind blowing I'm not thinking about a goddamn thing, but how hard I'm going to cum.

FWIW this would go over better in the personals or maybe the playground. For a bunch of erotica authors there is very little dirty talking going on over here, they're to busy arguing.

 

[3113]

there is very little dirty talking going on over here

There's very little dirty talk going on here because we save it for our stories, which, I presume, you appreciate. If we talked it here as they do elsewhere, it'd never make it into our stories and what reason would anyone have visit Literotica?

 

[mynameisben]

If we talked it here as they do elsewhere, it'd never make it into our stories and what reason would anyone have visit Literotica?

I just come here for the wine and automotive reviews.

 

[lovecraft68]

I just come here for the wine and automotive reviews.

I come here for the always witty banter.

And ignore "kat", she is used to the personals where her inbox is flooded with pm's every time she says a dirty word.

 

[Sugary_Comfort]

Yeah, if the act is mind blowing, then there's not much thinking going on except when the chick is about to cum.

I don't know what even great oral sex is like but I do know when whatever other forms of sex I've had are just out of this world amazing, the only thing I can do is make noises and then I usually end up cussing for a few seconds before I can manage to get a thought strung together enough to cry out, "I'm gonna cum!" And even then, it's all choppy and stuttered and whatnot, lofl!

There's usually also a lot of squirming going on because, for me, clit stimulation is way different and my body has no freaking idea how to react to it. So the guy is usually holding my legs still and apart so I don't end up kicking him, my hands are grabbing at the sheets, and my head is either thrown back with my back arching or uncontrollably turning from side to side.

 

[mynameisben]

Yeah, if the act is mind blowing, then there's not much thinking going on except when the chick is about to cum.

I don't know what even great oral sex is like but I do know when whatever other forms of sex I've had are just out of this world amazing, the only thing I can do is make noises and then I usually end up cussing for a few seconds before I can manage to get a thought strung together enough to cry out, "I'm gonna cum!" And even then, it's all choppy and stuttered and whatnot, lofl!

There's usually also a lot of squirming going on because, for me, clit stimulation is way different and my body has no freaking idea how to react to it. So the guy is usually holding my legs still and apart so I don't end up kicking him, my hands are grabbing at the sheets, and my head is either thrown back with my back arching or uncontrollably turning from side to side.

Yeah. Every woman I've ever met responds exactly the same way.

 

[JackLuis]

Perhaps a better question is what the build up to MIND BLOWING SEX, should be?

 

[fuckwaffle]

Yeah describing awesome sex from the cummee's point of view is not really a good idea. They tend to not think coherently.

Now describing it from the one make them have a mind blowing orgasm, now you can be very descriptive and if the giver is an angle then she/he? could probably see into the mind of the cummee and narrate the incoherency going on in there.

 

[JimmyHartley]

Well, ok, maybe I worded this wrong.
In the build up to any good orgasm, what have some of your thoughts been?
Now when I say build up I mean anywhere from the first time a hand was laid on you right up until you knew that this person knew what they were doing down there.
The thoughts in between.

 

[JimmyHartley]

Yeah describing awesome sex from the cummee's point of view is not really a good idea. They tend to not think coherently.

Now describing it from the one make them have a mind blowing orgasm, now you can be very descriptive and if the giver is an angle then she/he? could probably see into the mind of the cummee and narrate the incoherency going on in there.

I see where you're coming from (No pun intended)
But I just thought I'd try something different.
She's blindfolded and I thought I could try and make it interesting so only what she feels, hears and smells is in the story, just to be different.

 

[Sugary_Comfort]

Haha um...I'm usually thinking of "more" as things lead up to a really great orgasm. I'll say it, too. No harm in giving the guy a little help if he's not meaning to tease me. Though, usually moaning works instead of telling them to do more of whatever it is they're doing. I don't do faking it. If it feels good but it's not the greatest, it's a little sigh or an intake of breath. Pretty much my moans are me telling the guy, "Hotter, hotter, colder! Hotter..."

I mean really, if you're thinking during foreplay and sex, something isn't being done right. If you're concentrating on what the person is doing to you, words don't really come to mind unless you suddenly blurt out a cuss word or something because it felt good, but even those are spontaneous.

I'm not a talker, if I'm having to talk or the guy is talking too much (more than just a few words at a time), it irritates me and I get turned off.

But I think stuff like the chick being surprised at a sudden thing the person does to her could get her to think, "Oh my god how did he do that? What did he just do? Holy crap that feels great!" Would probably run through her head.

Actions speak louder than words anyways. I've read some pieces where one of the characters was pretty much giving a narrative of what was happening to them at the time and how great it felt and it was not a turn on.

I'd rather read the actions and the little noises and words that are suddenly let out, then, after the whole thing is done, read what the person thought of it all. And that makes it easier to write anyway. Usually there are no words for great sex. So the characters would be hard pressed to really describe it and so the part with what they thought would be fairly short. No one wants to read a drawn out explanation of how stuff felt...unless you're the type who likes reading info dumps.

I think your best bet would be to just describe what the character's body is feeling as things are being done.

Usually in the romance books I read the author will put in stuff like, "Something was building up inside of her. With each stroke she could feel the heat radiating from it and gathering in her stomach. It felt like she was going to burst. The man pumped into her harder now, more frantic. She could tell by his grunts and labored breathing that he was about to cum. Her own breathing quickened, her hands grabbing at the sheets. Suddenly, just as she felt she could take no more the man slammed into her one last time and as she threw her head back in a loud scream, colors exploded behind her eyes and the tension building in her stomach released wave upon wave of sweet, tingling pleasure, causing her body to spasm, her back arched, her hips firmly pressing against into the man above her."

Stuff like that. Sorry I just kind of go around and around, having to write as I think in order to get my thoughts going where they need to.