Kudos.. Chapter 3 of A Timeless Place

[athena_by_night]

Once again Billy....phenomenal job. I am just sorry I couldn't post at the end of the chapter. I don't understand that. Anyway...

The dance was highly erotic, extremely passionate and had a 'wish I was there feeling'.. I loved the interactions Jonathan had with everyone, especially Tony. That bond is amazing to experience.

Waiting for your next chapter.... as always.... Ri

 

[saint35]

agrees totally

As i couldnt post a reply on the story tag , i came here , because i had to say something about this one ,,,,,,,,,you rock ,, on writing and keeping the reader interested and wanting more . now i just have to wait for the more lol ......plz keep em comming ....

 

[windstormy]

A Timeless Place ch. 3

Thanks to the both of you for your feedback. I'm constantly reminded that I have to continue to attempt to put out the very best work I can manage. And I do hope that others will be able to recognize that in my work.

I had grown discouraged with the problems of submitting this chapter and the lack of feedback on the previous two. But your comments have given me a bit of a boost in the arm. Chapter 4 has been submitted already. I hope it posts soon. Chapter 5 is almost ready for submission, which I hope to be doing so in the next day or so.

Thank you for your feedback. I love it and crave it terribly. It's almost like a fix that I have been long awaiting lately. LOL... So, do feel free to post any other comments you might have about this work.

Yours truly.....

 

[athena_by_night]

A Timeless Place ch. 3

Thanks to the both of you for your feedback. I'm constantly reminded that I have to continue to attempt to put out the very best work I can manage. And I do hope that others will be able to recognize that in my work.

I had grown discouraged with the problems of submitting this chapter and the lack of feedback on the previous two. But your comments have given me a bit of a boost in the arm. Chapter 4 has been submitted already. I hope it posts soon. Chapter 5 is almost ready for submission, which I hope to be doing so in the next day or so.

Thank you for your feedback. I love it and crave it terribly. It's almost like a fix that I have been long awaiting lately. LOL... So, do feel free to post any other comments you might have about this work.

Yours truly.....

OMG.... lmao.... always always always you will get feedback from me...

And I can't wait Monsieur Billy for chapters 4 and 5.. you know that... drooling just thinking about it.... can I have a sneak peek pretty please? Oh, now I am just being bad.... but as they say...

Better to be good at being bad, than bad at being good! (or did I just make that up?)

Ri...

 

[windstormy]

OMG.... lmao.... always always always you will get feedback from me...

And I can't wait Monsieur Billy for chapters 4 and 5.. you know that... drooling just thinking about it.... can I have a sneak peek pretty please? Oh, now I am just being bad.... but as they say...

Better to be good at being bad, than bad at being good! (or did I just make that up?)

Ri...

You're too funny, Ri. I love you awesomely. And I might can make some others green with envy by allowing you a sneaky peek. LOL..... ​

 

[athena_by_night]

You're too funny, Ri. I love you awesomely. And I might can make some others green with envy by allowing you a sneaky peek. LOL..... ​

hehehe... looking forward to the possibility then...I know you are working, as am I, so I will leave off with this... but....mmmm.... now I wanna know what happens.... oh and btw...

loved how Peter took charge of Jonathan by not letting him get away with his little tantrum....Ri

 

[windstormy]

hehehe... looking forward to the possibility then...I know you are working, as am I, so I will leave off with this... but....mmmm.... now I wanna know what happens.... oh and btw...

loved how Peter took charge of Jonathan by not letting him get away with his little tantrum....Ri

Yes, Peter may hold quite a few surprises for you in this one. He may be a mild mannered man, but in truth, he is not to be reckoned with. And his dealings with Jonathan are very controlled, only due to the fact that he loves him so deeply. Otherwise, he may have found himself picking himself up off the floor. LOL...

 

[athena_by_night]

Yes, Peter may hold quite a few surprises for you in this one. He may be a mild mannered man, but in truth, he is not to be reckoned with. And his dealings with Jonathan are very controlled, only due to the fact that he loves him so deeply. Otherwise, he may have found himself picking himself up off the floor. LOL...

and your new picture....oooohhh... very very nice.... enticing and provocative...good pic...

 

[windstormy]

and your new picture....oooohhh... very very nice.... enticing and provocative...good pic...

Why thank you, my dear sweet goddess. I've always wanted to be so.......Alluring, in the eyes of the beholder.

 

[moffettasweet]

Once again Billy....phenomenal job. I am just sorry I couldn't post at the end of the chapter. I don't understand that. Anyway...

The dance was highly erotic, extremely passionate and had a 'wish I was there feeling'.. I loved the interactions Jonathan had with everyone, especially Tony. That bond is amazing to experience.

Waiting for your next chapter.... as always.... Ri

Oooh, Billy...Baby, I love what you did in chapter 3!!! This is some good stuff here. Love that little dirty dance Jonathan does. Wish he'd come dance for me once. hehehe

 

[moffettasweet]

and your new picture....oooohhh... very very nice.... enticing and provocative...good pic...

It's sooooo..........yummy...I'd like to just eat him up in that one. LOL...

 

[moffettasweet]

Yes, Peter may hold quite a few surprises for you in this one. He may be a mild mannered man, but in truth, he is not to be reckoned with. And his dealings with Jonathan are very controlled, only due to the fact that he loves him so deeply. Otherwise, he may have found himself picking himself up off the floor. LOL...

Now, Billy...I know that you like the idea of picking yourself up off the floor. Especially after Peter get's through with you. hehehe

 

[moffettasweet]

hehehe... looking forward to the possibility then...I know you are working, as am I, so I will leave off with this... but....mmmm.... now I wanna know what happens.... oh and btw...

loved how Peter took charge of Jonathan by not letting him get away with his little tantrum....Ri

NO FAIR!!! You don't let us read your stuff early. Well...I'm just gonna go to my room and pout!

 

[athena_by_night]

Kudos..Chapter 3 of A Timeless Place

NO FAIR!!! You don't let us read your stuff early. Well...I'm just gonna go to my room and pout!

I sssssssssooooooooooo beg to differ, Dale huney......some members of the family have had my first chapter of Hunting Dragan languishing on your end.. the most recent polish I sent a few days ago...I haven't posted it yet, awaiting feedback.....maybe you'll do that for me....
hehehe...

 

[moffettasweet]

I sssssssssooooooooooo beg to differ, Dale huney......some members of the family have had my first chapter of Hunting Dragan languishing on your end.. the most recent polish I sent a few days ago...I haven't posted it yet, awaiting feedback.....maybe you'll do that for me....
hehehe...

Well......I had no idea they had that here. I'll just have to march downstairs and find out what the hell the hold up is...

 

[athena_by_night]

Kudos..Chapter 3 of A Timeless Place

Well......I had no idea they had that here. I'll just have to march downstairs and find out what the hell the hold up is...

ohhhhhhhhh..... you go huney! lol....

 

[moffettasweet]

ohhhhhhhhh..... you go huney! lol....

Billy came right up to send you his feedback. So, you should get it pretty quick. He said he's sorry, you were away for the day and he forgot to email it to you.

 

[athena_by_night]

Kudos..Chapter 3 of A Timeless Place

Billy came right up to send you his feedback. So, you should get it pretty quick. He said he's sorry, you were away for the day and he forgot to email it to you.

When you light a fire, you light a fire... you are definitely what your name says Dale.... SWEET .... and you know I was teasing you!

 

[windstormy]

Hey! Guess what?! The comments thingy's been turned back on!!!!!! hehehe I can't help myself, sorry...

 

[athena_by_night]

Hey! Guess what?! The comments thingy's been turned back on!!!!!! hehehe I can't help myself, sorry...

Are you supposed to help yourself? hehehe..woo hoo..glad it's on....

 

[mastergary4u2]

Billy, this is a hot chapter!! I loved this!! Going back to read it again. LOL...

 

[sweeteric2u2]

This was really good. Would you let Jon come dance for me like that? hehehe...Oooh, and Jon seeing his uncle had my breath caught in my throat. I could feel the tension and hear his fearful heartbeat. Wow...What are you planning in this story with his Uncle showing up again? And Peter was hot in this chapter. He really held his own when Jon showed his arse a little. Good for Peter. two thumbs up, Billy... ​

 

[spiritwalker]

It just keeps getting better

It seems each chapter is better than the one before it. I'm about starved for more already. Onto the next.

 

[DGentleBen]

Oooh, sexy...

Billy, knowing you're writing about your own dancing abitlities, I want a show, now...hehehe

 

[athena_by_night]

Chapter 3 of A Timeless Place

Hey! Guess what?! The comments thingy's been turned back on!!!!!! hehehe I can't help myself, sorry...

Raises hand at the "I've Overlooked Someplaces to Comment" meeting....didn't even think to comment on the first couple of chapters until now....I'm slipping.....

ok...not only do I want the next chapter, referring to 5 now.... I miss library circle too...shouldn't it be Dale's job to schedule this?...being the owner of the group site and all? ....