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Im writing a fanfic about the main woman from modern family getting blacked. (Not intended to be racist). Im New to writing and could need some help / Feedback with the plot

I think you pretty well summarized the "plot" already.
 
You already posted this in story ideas and received some replies because its more suited to that forum.
 
I see a slight problem here…

Emily

There's no problem. I'm sure he has "black friends."
Maybe you two can tell me where your insinuations were in the thread where someone needed a beta reader because black people are so different and foreign to other people, they needed someone to help make sure they got it right. Seriously, if want to talk about racism, that's a good place to start.
 
Maybe you two can tell me where your insinuations were in the thread where someone needed a beta reader because black people are so different and foreign to other people, they needed someone to help make sure they got it right. Seriously, if want to talk about racism, that's a good place to start.

I don't read every thread on the forum.
 
The path of the exhibitionist man is beset on all sides by the inequities of the coquettish and the teasing of red haired teens. Blessed is he who, in the name of chastity and wood held, exposes himself to the valley of wetness, for he is truly his girlfriend’a keeper and the sniffer of panties. And I will jerk off upon thee with great volume and furious hand strokes if she attempts to show me off to her roommates unbeknownst and have threesomes with my friend. And you will know my tongue is good and when I push my manhood inside thee.
 
Maybe you two can tell me where your insinuations were in the thread where someone needed a beta reader because black people are so different and foreign to other people, they needed someone to help make sure they got it right. Seriously, if want to talk about racism, that's a good place to start.
Thanks for the tip. Helpful.

Emily
 
How about you start your own thread if you want to talk about this topic and not high jack the OPs attempts to find beta readers. Wait...you already did. It's here:

https://forum.literotica.com/threads/interracial-category.1604343/page-4#post-98337223

Try taking your comments over there before you run a new member off the forum before they have a chance to actually do some writing for the site. Awful lot of moralizing and kink shaming going on.
 
How about you start your own thread if you want to talk about this topic and not high jack the OPs attempts to find beta readers. Wait...you already did. It's here:

https://forum.literotica.com/threads/interracial-category.1604343/page-4#post-98337223

Try taking your comments over there before you run a new member off the forum before they have a chance to actually do some writing for the site. Awful lot of moralizing and kink shaming going on.
Thanks for your perspective. Very much appreciated.

Emily
 
Im writing a fanfic about the main woman from modern family getting blacked. (Not intended to be racist). Im New to writing and could need some help / Feedback with the plot

As you can see, this topic provokes strong reactions, some of them negative.

If you want a real answer to your question, my suggestion, rather than throwing an open-ended question out to the forum, is to take the time to find stories of this type that you like and then to directly contact the authors that write them for advice. You're more likely to find helpful advice and you'll bypass negative reactions that way.
 
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As you can see, this topic provokes strong reactions, some of them negative.

If you want a real answer to your question, my suggestion, rather than throwing an open-ended question out to the forum, is to take the time to find stories of this type that you like and then to directly contact the authors that write them for advice. You're more likely to find helpful advice and you'll bypass negative reactions that way.
Excellent idea.

Emily
 
How about you start your own thread if you want to talk about this topic and not high jack the OPs attempts to find beta readers. Wait...you already did. It's here:

https://forum.literotica.com/threads/interracial-category.1604343/page-4#post-98337223

Try taking your comments over there before you run a new member off the forum before they have a chance to actually do some writing for the site. Awful lot of moralizing and kink shaming going on.
OP has posted in three different forums and four threads looking for help.

After they were told in Story Ideas that it would likely be rejected for content, they went to Story Feedback for help, then here.
 
OP has posted in three different forums and four threads looking for help.

After they were told in Story Ideas that it would likely be rejected for content, they went to Story Feedback for help, then here.
Yes lovecraft68 mentioned that and if TZypher crossed the line into spam, then that's an issue for the mods.

I don't see what that has to do with my comment about everyone else in this thread deciding to high jack TZypher's thread to continue their personal crusade against a category they don't like. That is still WAY out of line. Take it someplace else.
 
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