KillerMuffin

[Guest]

 

[Guest]

*blows you a kiss*

 

[Guest]

 

[Weevil]

I'd say it's kind of weak.

Jackoff.

 

[Guest]

 

[Guest]

*starts humping your leg*

 

[TN_Vixen]

I'd say it's kind of weak.

Jackoff.

ditto

 

[TN_Vixen]

*bump* for the Muffbabe

 

[KillerMuffin]

You're a slave to the rhyme. Add that to the childish meter in odd places--very Seussian--and lacking a definitive rhthym that ties the poem together.

A very freshman effort. Don't quit your day job.

Forgot. You don't have one.

 

[I'mVan]

Yay, Yay, Vixen, Vixen!
She's our one!
If she put's out
I want some!

 

[TN_Vixen]

Yay, Yay, Vixen, Vixen!
She's our one!
If she put's out
I want some!

LOL, what a good cheerleader you are!

 

[I'mVan]

OMG she sees me. My pom poms are gonna burst.