Keyword: Restaint

sweetnpetite

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For me, I like to get down and dirty in my stories. But I think that the more restraint excercised- by both the narrator and the charactes- the hotter the story can become.

sometimes you gotta make your reader beg for it...
 
if not beg ... at least
pout ... whimper
... bent, over my knee?

I get it,
Hmmm let me see ...

if I pet you here
scratch you, right
... mmm there
yes,
I do see, and I like ... ~

:p :devil:
 
I think the only time I use restraints is when my little fucking characters won't... :mad:

Then I apply them to wrists and ankles,,,,,, ;)
 
sweetnpetite said:
sometimes you gotta make your reader beg for it...
Like this Anonymous one?

"Dear Liar,
Who the fuck do you think you are? This is a PORN site. POOOOOORN! Get it? Please write some fucking SEX instead of this drivel."
 
There shouldn't be any restraints on erotic stories....these aren't fairy tales...

I say unleash your wild, sexual fantasies on all your characters - and if they don't like it, let 'em eat cake... or PIE in this matter... :D
 
I think that there is a place for both restraint and glorious excess. In my own work, I think that the stories I like the best are the ones that show restraint (in the literary sense). But I've also enjoyed the occasional bacchanalia. I just don't seem to write them well.

I tend to like constrast. To me, restraint is sensual and sexual because it implies something to be restrained. The more intense and nailed-down the restraint, the more explosive must be the passion underneath it. Hence I often find myself writing about characters who are intensely restrained until pushed to the explosive release.

And whether that last sentence is about physical, emotional, or sexual restraint I think quite a pleasant ambiguity. :)

Shanglan
 
I sometimes like to indulge in an orgy of self-restraint, then I get filled with remorse. After that I have a little bit of glee and some toast.
 
Sub Joe said:
I sometimes like to indulge in an orgy of self-restraint, then I get filled with remorse. After that I have a little bit of glee and some toast.

Your AV looks like Ian Paisley.

I like the idea.
 
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