Just started an incest story and looking for feedback

[Distant_Dreams]

This is a brother/sister incest story with a theme of non-consent

I just finished the first chapter and have started on the second at the moment.

Wondering if anyone would be interested in doing a read through and giving me honest/helpful opinions

 

[EquinoxRising]

A read-through before submission? You're more likely looking for the Editor's Forum then.

 

[Distant_Dreams]

Well I'm not quite finished and its not ready to be edited. Also I was just looking for some ideas about how I should progress/end the story

 

[EquinoxRising]

Ah. Well, the Story Feedback board is for stories already submitted to the site. Oftentimes people can find a beta reader in Editor's Forum. Otherwise, there's no board for you to post your story for "a quick read to offer opinions" prior to submission.

 

[Distant_Dreams]

Ah okay good to know. I haven't really used the forums much thanks for the heads up

 

[8letters]

This is a brother/sister incest story with a theme of non-consent

I just finished the first chapter and have started on the second at the moment.

Wondering if anyone would be interested in doing a read through and giving me honest/helpful opinions

Non-consent is not popular with LitE Incest readers. I write mainly brother-sister incest and thought about reading it through until I got to the "non-consent" part.

 

[Distant_Dreams]

Well the non-consent part is where I was looking for some feedback.

I'm not looking to write a story about rape but the story does revolve around the brother initiating things while the sister is sleeping which may or may not develop into a romance? Once I write it out like that it seems less logical than how it played out in my head

Not really sure why I want to write about this or where I want it to go. I think if I dont find a good direction to take this I'll just give up on it

 

[Snugbug]

If you do submit it you should probably submit it to nonconsent/reluctance rather than the incest section.

 

[8letters]

Well the non-consent part is where I was looking for some feedback.

I'm not looking to write a story about rape but the story does revolve around the brother initiating things while the sister is sleeping which may or may not develop into a romance? Once I write it out like that it seems less logical than how it played out in my head

Not really sure why I want to write about this or where I want it to go. I think if I dont find a good direction to take this I'll just give up on it

There are a number of stories about sleeping family members on this page. You could read some of those for ideas.