Just posted a story - "My Last Chance"

[tittytitty_yumyum]

It's my first and is based a little on fact, although it's been fact-bellished.

I know it looks like I've posted 2 stories but they are virtually the same. I'm a newbie and i messed up.

plz let me know what you think and feel free to vote if you like.

thanks!
TTYY

 

[janiexx]

Hello,

I've posted a link here to your stories to make them easier to find.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=702726&page=submissions

When I get a chance later today I will go and have a read.

Like your sense of humour by the way!

janiexx

 

[tittytitty_yumyum]

Aww thanks

hope you liked the story!

 

[janiexx]

Hello,

Oh yes, I liked the story very much. Very erotic and well-written with a great sense of humour running through which didn't detract from the telling at all.

I voted a 5 by the way, but voted on the first story submitted which I see has earned a nice little red H.

I look forward to reading more.

janiexx

 

[CopyCarver]

I also like your story, despite being lukewarm to the genre. You deserve a "5" for humor, and another for "fact-bellishing."

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Mmmmm

Made me wet, hon. You deserved the "H". Keep it up.