LegendInMyOwnMind
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From my current WIP. Some background. FNC is recovering from a major SA trauma, but is still a virgin. The MMC is not a virgin but has had an emotionally traumatic first time. MMC is FMC's step-brother, raised together since 12, they are now 20. MMC is a principal actor in helping her healing process. Eventually, she asks him to be her first as he's now the only man she can trust. He agrees primarily in an honest desire to help. The line:
Before we sat on the double bed, I took one more look at her. I realized that her acquaintance with grief had enhanced rather than marred her beauty. When we sat down, I studied her face and saw the love and trust in her eyes, but also the fire and the naked need.
More excerpts will follow.
Before we sat on the double bed, I took one more look at her. I realized that her acquaintance with grief had enhanced rather than marred her beauty. When we sat down, I studied her face and saw the love and trust in her eyes, but also the fire and the naked need.
More excerpts will follow.