Just need a little help to know whats wrong with my story. It's a brother sister story

[Incest_Universe]

I am looking for a editor/reader. He/she doesn't have to be a expert. Just tell me what's missing in my story about a sister helping his injured brother. I just want to know why it got rejected.

 

[cripple92996]

ill help

 

[Incest_Universe]

Where can I send you my story?

 

[cripple92996]

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[redconey]

I am looking for a editor/reader. He/she doesn't have to be a expert. Just tell me what's missing in my story about a sister helping his injured brother. I just want to know why it got rejected.

Would love to read your story,pm me and I send you my details

 

[Djmac1031]

At a guess I'd say it got rejected because somewhere along the line you mentioned under aged characters in a sexual way.

Even a casual mention of anyone under 18 in a sexual way is forbidden here. House rules.

If you wanna send me the story, you can. I'll see if I can find the problem.

 

[subcherry]

Would love to read your story,pm me and I send you my details

Nice to know you still giving out your personal details so you can chat to other people behind my back ! If after 14 yrs I'm still not enough for you feel free too fuck off and find some one who is ! 8 yrs of asking you not too u still think its okay for you to get off with someone else and be deceitful , regardless of how u know it makes me feel, as its okay for you i guess you won't have a problem with me doing the same . !