Just a Few Minutes More - new story

[agreatstoryteller]

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[Angelique Bouchette]

Hello All,

I have a new story on Literotica called Just a Few Minutes More. Although it ended up in the Erotic Couplings category, it's really an erotic thriller.

I'd love to get your feedback.


Here's the link:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=221290

B

Mmm, nice story. I liked the constant flashbacks, cramming one sexy scene in after another, not the easiest of writing styles but very well done. Congratulations on a very erotic tale. It almost made me wet my panties! I did spot one grammatical error, but I'm not going to be a spoilsport and draw it to your attention.

Angelique

 

[agreatstoryteller]

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