Julie and the Demons - What's in it for You?

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Ola - my eight-part novella Julie and the Demons brings together a number of themes direct from my twisted little id.

Themes are mind control, interracial sex, alien sex and birthing, lesbian sex, anal probing, captive sex with sucker plants, BDSM, mental telepathy, the sensuous world of young captive women in an alien Eden.

What's in it? Beautiful women subjugated through Mind Control by intelligent flying lizard-bats on a remote planet. They are saddled and ridden naked through the woods by the small reptiles. The lizard-bats feel desire for the women but it is forbidden. One of them violates the taboo, and has sex with a woman named Julie. She gets away but is imprisoned within the calyx of an enormous sentient flower.

Within the Flower, hundreds of small tube-feet probe and caress her. She senses the Flower's thoughts, and understands that she will give birth to a litter of infant lizard-bats. She has been called upon to rescue an infertile, dying alien race.

Julie escapes, and with two friends runs naked through the forest. They find their way to an enchanted spring, where they are captured by a tribe of giant frogs. The frogs bury their legs thigh-deep in mud and put them on display for an all-night orgiastic ritual by firelight. Hundreds of milling giant frogs slither over their captive bodies waiting for the one they call The King.

The King is an old frog and he is enormous. He hops on Julie's back and has Tantric sex with her in the midst of the milling, shoving crowd of frogs. Waiting frogs lick the helpless women with long sticky tongues. Ewwwww. Julie must watch as the other two women receive the same slow-fucking domination by The King.

They are held captive until they are ready to expel hundreds of round frog eggs into the pond. This too is a public ritual, the women are forced to squat on a platorm legs apart while grunting the large slimy eggs from their vaginas as the rude frogs cheer.

They escape and meet four Unicorns, who are intelligent, female and telepathic. Also they are sympathetic to the plight of the Earth women, who find that their crew has been killed by the Flowers.

Julie and her friends plan revenge, but all is not as it seems, as you'll discover in the final chapter!

Here's where it all begins... happy reading!

http://www.literotica.com/s/julie-and-the-demons-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/julie-and-the-demons-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/julie-and-the-demons-ch-03
http://www.literotica.com/s/julie-and-the-demons-ch-04
http://www.literotica.com/s/julie-and-the-demons-ch-05
http://www.literotica.com/s/julie-and-the-demons-ch-06
http://www.literotica.com/s/julie-and-the-demons-ch-07
http://www.literotica.com/s/julie-and-the-demons-ch-08
 
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Can I just say, that to anyone that hasnt read this, you've just spoiled a lot of the story?
I overall enjoyed this, it had a wide variety of different kinks, each chapter held a different sexual experience in a different way. The story was something that I myself had not seen before and thus found it refreshing and new.

I wasnt 100% keen on that sort of ending, though I was satisfied. But I was disappointed with a few lines that had not been cleared up, thus leaving me with a lack of closure.

Sex : 9/10

Story : 6/10

I was able to read at least one chapter a sitting, the layout didnt leave huge blocks of text that would make it harder to read or focus on.

Overall Satisfaction : 8 / 10 - 4 Stars.
 
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Thanks for your reply lazyhobo

Hey I think your observations are right on. Truth to tell, I wrote and posted a chapter at a time, so never went back to work on the story as a whole. Which prolly would have cleaned up a lot.

Glad you like the kinks and sex. Different things turn me on sometimes, or interest me to think about, so that makes writing fun.

The spoiler part I don't agree about... book jackets give that kind of info all the time as teasers.

Glad you could enjoy it!

T.
 
The spoiler part I don't agree about... book jackets give that kind of info all the time as teasers.

Yeah but, they generally give a brief view on the beginning on the novel, or a brief mention of the main character. You've given summaries of different chapters, mentioning her birthing and even said why shes birthing.
 
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