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...what a rip. Even using it, his stories still don't make sense.
 
From Country Cocksucker, Ch. 03:


"Samuel was used to the word. It was used a lot in this state, But this time he didn't mind it. " Oh yeah" he pushed an inch of his cock in Lise "Oh yes ...I'm going to fuck this white slut wife like a nigger fucks a white slut." Tim face was terse with excitement."
 
killallhippies said:
oooohhh, that's fascinating. tell me more.
well... small part on a public-access romantic serial, non-union scale... i'm hoping it is a springboard for something big!
 
Queersetti said:
From Country Cocksucker, Ch. 03:


"Samuel was used to the word. It was used a lot in this state, But this time he didn't mind it. " Oh yeah" he pushed an inch of his cock in Lise "Oh yes ...I'm going to fuck this white slut wife like a nigger fucks a white slut." Tim face was terse with excitement."

sounds like someone ELSE has their masters in Literature.
 
Queersetti said:
From Country Cocksucker, Ch. 03:


"Samuel was used to the word. It was used a lot in this state, But this time he didn't mind it. " Oh yeah" he pushed an inch of his cock in Lise "Oh yes ...I'm going to fuck this white slut wife like a nigger fucks a white slut." Tim face was terse with excitement."

That's some good reading.
 
honeylick said:
well... small part on a public-access romantic serial, non-union scale... i'm hoping it is a springboard for something big!

with your talent i'm sure you'll be doing car commercials in no time.
 
How can you not love writing like this?

From Christmas Office party:

"Shelly was not responsive as Carl pushed his hand farther down and one of his fingers went into her wet pussy. Randy slipped his shorts and a his fat hard cock sprang up. Jon was surprised tho see that his co worker, despite the fact that he was a little chubby, had a pretty large cock. Much larger than his own. Car used his free hand to pull Shelly's blouse free of her shoulders and She gave up her resistance and grabbed his head and kissed him passionately. Now sure of victory Carl moved to where he could strip off his clothes and still remain locked in her kiss. Jon saw for a second that Shelly was sucking his tongue. Car looked at him and silently said "Get naked man...she's ready." Jon felt like he was a puppet as he began to strip. "
 
From The Bigger The Better:


"Rolf had gotten fully hard again and what I saw made my cock lurch. Rolf's cock appeared to lift Laura up off the sofa. It looked like she had a large pink salami stuffed in her. About half of his cock stuck, hard and swelled, from her cunt and I knew that she had the other half in her. True she had taken my seven inches all the way in her and the dildo, which was probably nine inches, in her but Rolf's cock was twice the thickness of both. I saw her grimace and knew she might be in some discomfort, She bent her head to look down "Oh God...oh God" she kept saying, "


I didn't chop that off, by the way, that's where the paragraph ends.
 
I tried to join his fan club but apparently I am a steevereno reject. ;)
 
Queersetti said:
From The Bigger The Better:


"Rolf had gotten fully hard again and what I saw made my cock lurch. Rolf's cock appeared to lift Laura up off the sofa. It looked like she had a large pink salami stuffed in her. About half of his cock stuck, hard and swelled, from her cunt and I knew that she had the other half in her. True she had taken my seven inches all the way in her and the dildo, which was probably nine inches, in her but Rolf's cock was twice the thickness of both. I saw her grimace and knew she might be in some discomfort, She bent her head to look down "Oh God...oh God" she kept saying, "


I didn't chop that off, by the way, that's where the paragraph ends.

That's just painful on so many levels.
 
Wrong Element said:
"Terse with excitement"? This has got to be a joke.

Maybe we could all chip in and buy him a dictionary?

Definitions of terse:


adjective: brief and to the point; effectively cut short
Example: "Short and terse and easy to understand"
 
Q...

You've pointed out his more lamentable bits...was there anything there he did well?
 
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Rhys said:
You've pointed out his more lamentable bits...was there anything there he did well?

You're a sadist aren't you... Forcing Q to hunt thru all that refuse to find something that could be defined as a sentence much less an arrousing one is a punishment I wouldn't ask anyone to face...
 
Rhys said:
That's just painful on so many levels.

I just can't get past thinking of the line from The Producers, "I was born in Dusseldorf, and that is why they call me Rolf."
 
Re: Q...

Rhys said:
You've pointed out his more lamentable bits...was there anything there he did well?


He remembers to capitalize his character's names more than half the time.
 
Re: Re: Q...

Wilben said:
You're a sadist aren't you... Forcing Q to hunt thru all that refuse to find something that could be defined as a sentence much less an arrousing one is a punishment I wouldn't ask anyone to face...

Well, as a matter of fact, I am a sadist.:D
 
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Queersetti said:
He remembers to capitalize his character's names more than half the time.

Hey he's almost mastered the shift key... this means he kicks Tang God's ass.
 
Re: Re: Q...

Queersetti said:
He remembers to capitalize his character's names more than half the time.

Hey, well now that is a start. I think he deserves a medal for remembering that much. Anything else he did correctly?
 
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