Jim goes to the Personal Best Gym

[Tmmldr]

Jim had set tough goals for his weight training program when he signed up at the new club.

He hadn't quite understood how a gym could offer to help everyone meet their training goals, but that was what Personal Best did. He'd had to meet with one of the three instructors when he applied for membership, but that was enjoyable as she was a tall, curvaceous blond. She'd had a bit of an unnerving stare, but he'd gotten used to that. She had accepted him as a trainee. He was shocked at how high the fees were, some $1100 per month, but the trainer had assured him that at Personal Best, he would meet his fitness goals.

What Jim found was curious was how alike the three blond girls actually looked. Every time he walked in the gym, one of them was sitting behind the counter, holding the clipboard. That was the clipboard that had everyone's progress toward the goals. Jim had been going to the gym for four months and had gotten 1600 points toward his goal. That was the day it happened.

Just as he walked in, the blond behind the counter turned to reach into her purse, and her elbow pushed the clipboard toward Jim. It slid forward and fell off, clattering on the floor by Jim's feet. He picked it and then grabbed the papers that had came loose. The pink sheet that had been on the back caught his attention.

Personal Goals Rewards

Redeeming Fitness Points

Handjob - 400 points
Blowjob or Pussylicking - 800 points
Half and Half - 1600 points
Two on one.....


Jim didn't finish reading, feeling eyes on him he looked up. His trainer was standing next to the girl, smiling at him. Counter girl leaned forward across the counter, her blouse loosening as she did and revealing her tits. "Jim, we really want to help you reach your goals." She leaned forward farther. Trainer looked at him and said "Jim, don't you deserve to be rewarded when you reach a milestone?" Her hand touched his. "Really rewarded?"

 

[jeninflorida]

Great idea!

Questions....cost to join?

What about for women?

What about for married couples?

 

[Tmmldr]

Great idea!

Questions....cost to join?

What about for women?

What about for married couples?

RLOL....

So many amusing angles, so little time...

You see Jim didn't read the full price list on the pink page. I suspect it went into those things.

But standing right behind Jim while the two blonds were putting the make on him (of course, they just wanted his points, which they could exchange for cash from the Gym owners) was Edward. Edward had not met his personal goals for a single week since he started. He was at -1009 points. Edward was so ashamed of himself. He watched the girls smile and work on Jim. Would they ever like him? Was it too much to hope for?

And behind them is a couple, Louis and Laurie. Louis started bringing Laurie to the gym because she'd started putting on weight after the last child. He thought maybe these inducements would motivate her to get curvy and sexy again - these special inducements. Lately Louis had noticed his wife got perked up and worked out much harder when Blond #2 came over to her. And he meant exactly that - perked up. When Blond #2 came over, his wife's nipples actually got swollen up and rigid. Louis wasn't quite sure what that meant...

 

[DevilInDetail]

I love this idea, original and so many angles to explore. It reminds me of a time when I had the pleasure of being able to tuck in behind Laura, the long distance running champion in college, for a couple of miles, wishing I could catch that ass...

Rewards work well. What about punishments?

 

[Tmmldr]

I love this idea, original and so many angles to explore. It reminds me of a time when I had the pleasure of being able to tuck in behind Laura, the long distance running champion in college, for a couple of miles, wishing I could catch that ass...

Rewards work well. What about punishments?

Try this.

Blond3 knew something was wrong, and she marched into the men's locker room and into the shower. There he was! Fat Louis thought he'd just polish his knob, since no one else was in the shower! She marched right up to him, the warm water making her tshirt transparent, her body showing clearly under it.

Louis saw her and grinned, and actually leered as he oogled the perfect curves of her tits under that wet tshirt. He knew what she wanted and took his hand off his rod, leaving it pointed straight at her. Ready for her to service. He'd been thinking about her while he was playing.

Blond3 saw his signals and reached out, grabbed a handful of curly hairs and twisted. Hard. His grin dropped. She turned and started out of the shower. He shrieked in pain and was forced to stumble along behind, his big pole now shrunk to a little baby. She dragged him into the changing room by his cunt hairs. There, a half dozen guys were wondering what was up. Blond3 was getting madder by the minute.

She turned back to Louis and looked at him, almost crying, and said "When you come in here, you work your goals. You push your limits here, and no cheating allowed. This is a minus thousand, do it again and you are out."

Three bitch slaps later, her cute ass was gyrating out of the men's changing room.

 

[DevilInDetail]

It sounds like the story can have many chapters, maybe each focussing on different characters with some overlap between others. Are you going to write it up?

 

[Tmmldr]

It sounds like the story can have many chapters, maybe each focusing on different characters with some overlap between others. Are you going to write it up?

Thinking about it.

The problem is, I think of it as ironic comedy rather than straight erotic. That means I'm not sure many would like my take on it. For example...

Jill had always wanted a really solid body. Lean body fat, six pack abs, a firm butt. Her tits were fine since she'd had them improved. And she wanted legs that made guys stare, if and when she wore the right stuff.

When Jill found out about Personal Best, she knew it was just the thing for her...

So the characters I come up with are total ridiculous losers, which of course a lot of people are. We can relate to Jill. I'd write the guys up the same way. We know people like Jill.

The trainers would be animalistic, but very strict and serious.

Of course, maybe the serious thing would be inner change in some of the people going there...Jill learns there is more to life than hardbodies, Louis actually meets his performance quota and gets an honest blow job for a reward, etc...

 

[DevilInDetail]

Well write it in any style you like to of course. Though playing with stereotypical characters may be funny to you, to many others it's just helpful that they can understand the character you're portraying.

Everyone likes a story where the underdog improves themselves anyway

 

[Tmmldr]

Well write it in any style you like to of course. Though playing with stereotypical characters may be funny to you, to many others it's just helpful that they can understand the character you're portraying.

Everyone likes a story where the underdog improves themselves anyway

Jill was in the gym working toward her goals when it happened. On the 369th crunch, the orgasm took her. Later, when she started to regain consciousness, her instructor leaned over, kissed her and whispered in her ear. "Good work, honey. Last time it was the 431st."

 

[jeninflorida]

I'm in the process of fixing and adding to "Jeanie's Law Office" that has some similar twists and turns.

Has anyone rented "Allie McBeal" with the co ed bathroom ... well....

I like the idea of a gym, then they add yoga then steam yoga ... and of course the showers are co -ed

 

[Tmmldr]

I'm in the process of fixing and adding to "Jeanie's Law Office" that has some similar twists and turns.

Has anyone rented "Allie McBeal" with the co ed bathroom ... well....

I like the idea of a gym, then they add yoga then steam yoga ... and of course the showers are co -ed

LOL let me revise that a bit. There's yoga and steam yoga and coed showers, but the trainers kept strict control to insure nobody broke the rules. The rules meant no sex, sex was only with the trainers, and only as a reward for reaching your goals.

But the men and women could talk to each other, of course. So they were all forced to become honest with their own bodies and their own desires.

Louis just had to ask "Jill, what was it happened with you when you were doing crunches?"

Jill looked at him shyly. "I uh, I had an orgasm. Like the pain from crunching over and over it just turned into this giant mind blowing orgasm. And then when I came to Blond 2 was holding me and kissing me. I was still all weak and trembling. She's so nice."

Jill looked at him more directly then.

"I can't wait until I get the hard six pack abs. I can do 600 crunches every day now, so it shouldn't be long. Sometimes I wake up in the middle of the night and do a couple hundred. And I always do my crunches right after waking up in the morning and right before bed. Check it out!"

Standing naked in front of him in the shower, she posed so that he abs showed, right between two pert tits and a nicely shaved mound. Louis said "They're coming out nice." He was taken aback, and thought "I'm not doing my exercises morning and night, I need to improve." In a lower tone he asked "What's your prize?"

Jill smiled and said "Blond 2 is going to eat me out until I cum, then fuck me with a dildo. I've never done it with a girl."

Louis looked at her and wondered. "why did I only ask for a blowjob? It was just the first thing that came into my mind when I was signing up and looking at that totally hot trainer. But what do I really want?" Louis thought "what is it that I've always really wanted? That's what I should ask for. Maybe I should have Blond 2 suck me off then fuck me with a dildo, too." Louis looked at her with new resolve "Great idea, Jill. You'll deserve every second of that fucking when you earn it."

Louis knew what his goal had to be. He made a note to talk to Blond 1 after showering.