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That's okay Gav, I expected you to turn up eventually anyway.....love your avatar by the way!
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ACK -falls over and dies and what not- ok, I am confused, really confused, I thought I took the hoverway to Chyho or Chyfot or cyhho, hell, what ever the name, if was suppose to be the major I was following, I guess I am not good with detail, so I am going to stop posting until I get my bearings...hmm, I just read the post now, and it looks good, I guess I will just continue going that way, following Christine, alright now, ok, ok, I think I am feeling better -sighs, coughs-
ACK -falls over and dies and what not- ok, I am confused, really confused, I thought I took the hoverway to Chyho or Chyfot or cyhho, hell, what ever the name, if was suppose to be the major I was following, I guess I am not good with detail, so I am going to stop posting until I get my bearings...hmm, I just read the post now, and it looks good, I guess I will just continue going that way, following Christine, alright now, ok, ok, I think I am feeling better -sighs, coughs-
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LMAO...and fall off the chair!!!
I loved that!!!!!!
Yeah, do that...keeps Silvergirl busy.
I loved that!!!!!!
Yeah, do that...keeps Silvergirl busy.
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Sorry to Steiner and everyone else, but my postings are going to be slow this week and next week due to end of term work that I have to do...
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Hi!
Just saying "Hi" to everyone.
Just saying "Hi" to everyone.
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Hi to you too!
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Adapt.
Please stop writing in assumptions about how Christina Rook feels about your superhuman whatsit. I find it very offensive. I don't make the same assumptions, or take similar prerogatives with your characters. If your characters behave like a weirdos, I'll call them such, but I would never dream of trying to write down somebody else's characters feelings or oppinions. So stop it.
Please stop writing in assumptions about how Christina Rook feels about your superhuman whatsit. I find it very offensive. I don't make the same assumptions, or take similar prerogatives with your characters. If your characters behave like a weirdos, I'll call them such, but I would never dream of trying to write down somebody else's characters feelings or oppinions. So stop it.
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huh?
What now? I didnt do anything that would sway your charater in anyways, he just asked if you were afarid of him then he came closer and said things, there is nothing stopping you from smacking his face, or running, or reel in total disgust, I played my Chara, thats all I did, all I mentioned about yours was she stepped back when I stepped towards her the first time, other then that, I didnt do anything to press her movement, so, you can do what ever you want in your next post, but you cant say I did anything because I didnt, hell I dont care how she feels, you could even say you rn out in the middle of my post, but from my stand point, I didnt do anyhting terriably bad
What now? I didnt do anything that would sway your charater in anyways, he just asked if you were afarid of him then he came closer and said things, there is nothing stopping you from smacking his face, or running, or reel in total disgust, I played my Chara, thats all I did, all I mentioned about yours was she stepped back when I stepped towards her the first time, other then that, I didnt do anything to press her movement, so, you can do what ever you want in your next post, but you cant say I did anything because I didnt, hell I dont care how she feels, you could even say you rn out in the middle of my post, but from my stand point, I didnt do anyhting terriably bad
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Hmmm... I think it's all the superlatives that do it, Adapt. It's not as if you come out and say "...she thought that..." or anything, but it does read very much as if you're writing from Christina's point of view during that post, from time to time.
I'm not going to tell you how to write your character, that's not my scene at all, but I think you should try describing the things your character can do or does do without saying how great they are. It's subjective stuff like that which makes it sound as if you're writing someone's opinion.
Granted it can really slow the narrative down, writing one half of the story all the time, but until you're more in synch with your collaborators it's worth the investment.
I'm not going to tell you how to write your character, that's not my scene at all, but I think you should try describing the things your character can do or does do without saying how great they are. It's subjective stuff like that which makes it sound as if you're writing someone's opinion.
Granted it can really slow the narrative down, writing one half of the story all the time, but until you're more in synch with your collaborators it's worth the investment.
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Adapt.
Your reply is just avoidance that doesn't wash. I didn't mention "movement" at all ----- I said "feelings" and "opinions".
In the 1st post; ((his lethal sensual gaze locked with hers, she could almost hear his soul as it ranted of sexuality, and still seemingly hours it felt,)) ---shouldn't that be my decision as to HOW my character FELT???
In the 2nd post; ((his fingers sliding to her cheek, the soothing caress of a warm finger came to trail her chin, such a sensual touch, only a touch from an angel could surpass his own as he leaned in closer… )) ---- SOOTHING or not should be my decision, SENSUAL or not, should be my decision, as to the TOUCH being like that of an angel -- that should be my decision too.
Do what you like with an NPC, but my character is not your toy.
Your reply is just avoidance that doesn't wash. I didn't mention "movement" at all ----- I said "feelings" and "opinions".
In the 1st post; ((his lethal sensual gaze locked with hers, she could almost hear his soul as it ranted of sexuality, and still seemingly hours it felt,)) ---shouldn't that be my decision as to HOW my character FELT???
In the 2nd post; ((his fingers sliding to her cheek, the soothing caress of a warm finger came to trail her chin, such a sensual touch, only a touch from an angel could surpass his own as he leaned in closer… )) ---- SOOTHING or not should be my decision, SENSUAL or not, should be my decision, as to the TOUCH being like that of an angel -- that should be my decision too.
Do what you like with an NPC, but my character is not your toy.
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Veryknowing
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I don't find it difficult at all to avoid writing down another player's character's feelings, opinions, thoughts.
I've never done that. Not even once. You can check every single one of my posts, if you like, but you'll never catch me out on such a simple thing.
Adapt, the polite thing to do would be to simply EDIT the offending posts and apologize.
I doubt that you'll do that though. It's easy enough to check what you've written on every other post on Lit. I would be surprised if you did EDIT the offending posts - you never bothered to do that anywhere else that it upset somebody.
I read the "restaurant-scene" that GG referred to, and you haven't edited it either. Even though GG did complain about your character's actions in it. Easy enough to rewrite, or simply delete it, but you never bothered.
I've never done that. Not even once. You can check every single one of my posts, if you like, but you'll never catch me out on such a simple thing.
Adapt, the polite thing to do would be to simply EDIT the offending posts and apologize.
I doubt that you'll do that though. It's easy enough to check what you've written on every other post on Lit. I would be surprised if you did EDIT the offending posts - you never bothered to do that anywhere else that it upset somebody.
I read the "restaurant-scene" that GG referred to, and you haven't edited it either. Even though GG did complain about your character's actions in it. Easy enough to rewrite, or simply delete it, but you never bothered.
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ok ok, its cool
alright, its cool, no worries, I'll just drop from the thread, no problem, no worries anywho, I hope the thread goes well, good luck all, and actually I did edit the whole thing out, if you read it again, I never go to the restaurant, anywho, just saying I am dead no, I will no longer post...later all, btw I am leaving the board to, no place for my writing
alright, its cool, no worries, I'll just drop from the thread, no problem, no worries
anywho, I hope the thread goes well, good luck all, and actually I did edit the whole thing out, if you read it again, I never go to the restaurant, anywho, just saying I am dead no, I will no longer post...later all, btw I am leaving the board to, no place for my writing
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Actually, he didn't delete the "restaurant-scene", it's still there - no change since late February. I just checked. Adapt's full of BS again.
So easy to do to, but like I said, he never bothers.
GG just told everyone else on the relevant thread to ignore him. So they did. But he never did keep up his promises.
So easy to do to, but like I said, he never bothers.
GG just told everyone else on the relevant thread to ignore him. So they did. But he never did keep up his promises.
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if your talking about
if yout talking about the thread with little golden... this is it
-The figure of Aaron broke the dark surroundings of the curtained room, “Hello Bill…” his lips curled into that of a smirk as he looked to him, the flood of evil felt against the back of Bill’s neck as Aaron walked closer, hands in front of him, a hand to his wrist as again he took another step to him, his locks slicked back with a palm full of gel, the glint of light reflected only slightly off the lens of his ray band as his head tilted slightly to look at him.
“You know your gambling debts are quite astounding” he chuckled lowly as he took in a breath, his hand raising as his index finger pointed upwards…
The shaking his head slightly as he came near him once more, “It seems you have been leaching the ladies funds to pay for quite a few of these…oh, the cars, women, drinks…” he chuckled softly as he looked down slightly…
“Bill, you disappoint me…” a deep-pitted voice came to him.
“What are we going to do about that?” he smirked again as he glove clad hands came to clasp…
“Should I tell them, you know what would happen right? They would have me dissolve your hand in this inheritance…” his teeth showed softly in a rare smile…
“We don’t want that, now do we?” he tilted his head back upwards, turning upon his heels, stepping towards the tall wooden doors, large confident strides as his gloved hand came to grasp the knob, turning it slowly, looking back to Bill.
“Think about it, will you? I would hate to be the one taking your money instead of you” he sneered as he opened the door and nearly slammed it on his way out…
Thats the current one
This is before the edit
-The figure of Aaron broke the dark surroundings of the curtained room, “Hello Bill…” his lips curled into that of a smirk as he looked to him, the flood of evil felt against the back of Bill’s neck as Aaron walked closer, hands in front of him, a hand to his wrist as again he took another step to him, his locks slicked back with a palm full of gel, the glint of light reflected only slightly off the lens of his ray band as his head tilted slightly to look at him.
“You know your gambling debts are quite astounding” he chuckled lowly as he took in a breath, his hand raising as his index finger pointed upwards…
The shaking his head slightly as he came near him once more, “It seems you have been leaching the ladies funds to pay for quite a few of these…oh, the cars, women, drinks…” he chuckled softly as he looked down slightly…
“Bill, you disappoint me…” a deep-pitted voice came to him.
“What are we going to do about that?” he smirked again as he glove clad hands came to clasp…
“Should I tell them, you know what would happen right? They would have me dissolve your hand in this inheritance…” his teeth showed softly in a rare smile…
“We don’t want that, now do we?” he tilted his head back upwards, turning upon his heels, stepping towards the tall wooden doors, large confident strides as his gloved hand came to grasp the knob, turning it slowly, looking back to Bill.
“Think about it, will you? I would hate to be the one taking your money instead of you” he sneered as he opened the door and nearly slammed it on his way out…
He quickly left, making way to Green Garden to protect his assets, Porsha being her usual bullish self had plans to rid the house of Jordan, he was here to make sure such didn’t happen, see, as soon as the ladies left, at twenty one of course he would take a large sum of there money, but with there belief they would get the whole of the fortune, fortunately one of his strong points was forgery…
Speeding quickly in his newly acquired Ferrari, he soon came to the Garden, pulling himself from the vehicle, his walk confidant as he walked up the well of the restaurant, well know he was automatically granted access to the establishment, looking about, standing tall and finding the ever Lovely Jordan harassed by the persistent reporter…
Gathering himself he approached her with a of course haughty stance, his hand coming to rest upon her shoulder, “Excuse me, this the Miss Hattie that slept with her supervisor to get this job as a liar?”
He smirked as his lethal gaze settled upon her, his hand pulling with the slightest amount of force now.
“Well, please do answer the question…” he spoke clearly making sure some portion of the bar could hear his words.
“Please do answer me, I could bring up more hypothesis of how you gained the inquiry… was it the sexual favors that Mr. Green asked for, perhaps it was the get together with Mr. Wise behind your husbands back… maybe…” being interrupted by Miss Hattie
“Ok, ok, please, do be silent…” she responded in a nervous shake…
“Then I see we have an agreement here, stay away from Jordan, understand?” his smile curled softly as he looked to her, tilting the veils slightly, the deadly gaze of ice locked with her emeralds, then she simply nodded.
“Now, apologize to her…” he enjoyed his control over her as he pointed to Jordan.
“I...” she looked back to Aaron.
“Now…” He spoke in a demanding voice
“I’m sorry Jordan” as soon as the words spilled she stormed out…
So next time you judae me, prove it, get your eyes fixed
if yout talking about the thread with little golden... this is it
-The figure of Aaron broke the dark surroundings of the curtained room, “Hello Bill…” his lips curled into that of a smirk as he looked to him, the flood of evil felt against the back of Bill’s neck as Aaron walked closer, hands in front of him, a hand to his wrist as again he took another step to him, his locks slicked back with a palm full of gel, the glint of light reflected only slightly off the lens of his ray band as his head tilted slightly to look at him.
“You know your gambling debts are quite astounding” he chuckled lowly as he took in a breath, his hand raising as his index finger pointed upwards…
The shaking his head slightly as he came near him once more, “It seems you have been leaching the ladies funds to pay for quite a few of these…oh, the cars, women, drinks…” he chuckled softly as he looked down slightly…
“Bill, you disappoint me…” a deep-pitted voice came to him.
“What are we going to do about that?” he smirked again as he glove clad hands came to clasp…
“Should I tell them, you know what would happen right? They would have me dissolve your hand in this inheritance…” his teeth showed softly in a rare smile…
“We don’t want that, now do we?” he tilted his head back upwards, turning upon his heels, stepping towards the tall wooden doors, large confident strides as his gloved hand came to grasp the knob, turning it slowly, looking back to Bill.
“Think about it, will you? I would hate to be the one taking your money instead of you” he sneered as he opened the door and nearly slammed it on his way out…
Thats the current one
This is before the edit
-The figure of Aaron broke the dark surroundings of the curtained room, “Hello Bill…” his lips curled into that of a smirk as he looked to him, the flood of evil felt against the back of Bill’s neck as Aaron walked closer, hands in front of him, a hand to his wrist as again he took another step to him, his locks slicked back with a palm full of gel, the glint of light reflected only slightly off the lens of his ray band as his head tilted slightly to look at him.
“You know your gambling debts are quite astounding” he chuckled lowly as he took in a breath, his hand raising as his index finger pointed upwards…
The shaking his head slightly as he came near him once more, “It seems you have been leaching the ladies funds to pay for quite a few of these…oh, the cars, women, drinks…” he chuckled softly as he looked down slightly…
“Bill, you disappoint me…” a deep-pitted voice came to him.
“What are we going to do about that?” he smirked again as he glove clad hands came to clasp…
“Should I tell them, you know what would happen right? They would have me dissolve your hand in this inheritance…” his teeth showed softly in a rare smile…
“We don’t want that, now do we?” he tilted his head back upwards, turning upon his heels, stepping towards the tall wooden doors, large confident strides as his gloved hand came to grasp the knob, turning it slowly, looking back to Bill.
“Think about it, will you? I would hate to be the one taking your money instead of you” he sneered as he opened the door and nearly slammed it on his way out…
He quickly left, making way to Green Garden to protect his assets, Porsha being her usual bullish self had plans to rid the house of Jordan, he was here to make sure such didn’t happen, see, as soon as the ladies left, at twenty one of course he would take a large sum of there money, but with there belief they would get the whole of the fortune, fortunately one of his strong points was forgery…
Speeding quickly in his newly acquired Ferrari, he soon came to the Garden, pulling himself from the vehicle, his walk confidant as he walked up the well of the restaurant, well know he was automatically granted access to the establishment, looking about, standing tall and finding the ever Lovely Jordan harassed by the persistent reporter…
Gathering himself he approached her with a of course haughty stance, his hand coming to rest upon her shoulder, “Excuse me, this the Miss Hattie that slept with her supervisor to get this job as a liar?”
He smirked as his lethal gaze settled upon her, his hand pulling with the slightest amount of force now.
“Well, please do answer the question…” he spoke clearly making sure some portion of the bar could hear his words.
“Please do answer me, I could bring up more hypothesis of how you gained the inquiry… was it the sexual favors that Mr. Green asked for, perhaps it was the get together with Mr. Wise behind your husbands back… maybe…” being interrupted by Miss Hattie
“Ok, ok, please, do be silent…” she responded in a nervous shake…
“Then I see we have an agreement here, stay away from Jordan, understand?” his smile curled softly as he looked to her, tilting the veils slightly, the deadly gaze of ice locked with her emeralds, then she simply nodded.
“Now, apologize to her…” he enjoyed his control over her as he pointed to Jordan.
“I...” she looked back to Aaron.
“Now…” He spoke in a demanding voice
“I’m sorry Jordan” as soon as the words spilled she stormed out…
So next time you judae me, prove it, get your eyes fixed
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Perhaps they are, perhaps they're not....but doesn't that depend on your own feelings at the time.
Silvergirl obviously thought that he'd gone too far. So she complained about it. I don't think we should belittle that, since she did apparently feel victimized.
Veryknowing and ImpWizard and Steiner agreed with Silvergirl to some extent. I sent a PM to Adapt about it, he replied, and we've discussed it a bit (no poison PMs either...we were both polite).
To me it's a wait and see kind of thing. Maybe Adapt will edit the offending details, maybe he won't.
How he reacts will prove or disprove Veryknowing's assumptions....but it's also just possible that those assumptions are feigned...the words written only to push somebody to change their ways. If Adapt doesn't make the changes or leaves, he has only proven the assumptions correct....and Veryknowing wins his point.
If Adapt stays, and edits the posts, Veryknowing still wins because Adapt reacted in a positive way.
Silvergirl obviously thought that he'd gone too far. So she complained about it. I don't think we should belittle that, since she did apparently feel victimized.
Veryknowing and ImpWizard and Steiner agreed with Silvergirl to some extent. I sent a PM to Adapt about it, he replied, and we've discussed it a bit (no poison PMs either...we were both polite).
To me it's a wait and see kind of thing. Maybe Adapt will edit the offending details, maybe he won't.
How he reacts will prove or disprove Veryknowing's assumptions....but it's also just possible that those assumptions are feigned...the words written only to push somebody to change their ways. If Adapt doesn't make the changes or leaves, he has only proven the assumptions correct....and Veryknowing wins his point.
If Adapt stays, and edits the posts, Veryknowing still wins because Adapt reacted in a positive way.
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Exactly - to both and all.
Yes, Adapt that one. And if you read the thread further on, you'll see the others ignored the post as she requested.
So, we wait and see, as LN says.
Yes, Adapt that one. And if you read the thread further on, you'll see the others ignored the post as she requested.
So, we wait and see, as LN says.
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Hmmm....
Is this some game between you two? I only just noticed that you're both a shade off from scoring a century.
I'll soon be able to see what your chosen avatars look like.
Is this some game between you two? I only just noticed that you're both a shade off from scoring a century.
I'll soon be able to see what your chosen avatars look like.
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Maybe it is, but I might try and keep you in suspenders by stopping only one post before the century.
Nanannnanaaah!!!
Nanannnanaaah!!!
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From the ceiling maybe, in one of those sling things for a round-the-world, hmmm....
I had a boyfriend who talked about buying one of those, but I'm sure the ceiling would've collapsed if he tried it.
I had a boyfriend who talked about buying one of those, but I'm sure the ceiling would've collapsed if he tried it.
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Oh yeah baaaaby, I'd like that!
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Just to let you know
Just to let you know, that change was done a long time ago, and read the posts carefully please, she said I was going to make changes and to ignore the part about the green garden, nothing else, in fact she enjoyed the first part I did with the lawyer, she saiduncle bill has a challange now, so I implore you to go make and check when that thread was edited by me, btw, I couldnt totally deleate the post, so I just deleated the message, sorry
Just to let you know, that change was done a long time ago, and read the posts carefully please, she said I was going to make changes and to ignore the part about the green garden, nothing else, in fact she enjoyed the first part I did with the lawyer, she saiduncle bill has a challange now, so I implore you to go make and check when that thread was edited by me, btw, I couldnt totally deleate the post, so I just deleated the message, sorry
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