JadedHearts first story (Flirting With Disaster)is HOT!!

[ANiceGuy]

WoW JadedHeart has posted her first story and it is HOT! Called "FLIRTING WITH DISASTER" it held my interest from the start and had me reaching for the Puffs tissues (But not soon enough I still had to clean up a mess keyboard!!) I for one want to see more from this girl.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=6843

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Jaded Heart, great story for a first. Way to go! You did a great job! You go girl!

Katerina

 

[JadedHeart]

Thank you both! Such encouraging words from authors I hold in esteem are the best praise of all.

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hmmm, why thank you hon for your kind words. *Grins* Jaded Heart, you deserved your praise, because for a first story, you did an awesome job. I mean that...Yikes, you should have seen my first works. I thought they were so bad, that I totally revised them this past year. Let me tell you, that was quite the challenge. I mean, the storylines were fine, it was other things. Important things that makes one a good writer. Character development, descriptives, paragraphing, dialogue, punctuation, spelling. Hmmm, could go on and on. If you check out my, "I finally did it!" thread in authors hangout, you will see what I mean.

When I submitted my work a few summers ago, there was no editor program, and that is why I ending up revising my work. New writers are so lucky now, with having the new editor program, and the writers guide, I submitted to Laurel so long ago. I am so glad I happened upon that, because I think this guide is valuable to all writers on the site. I do hope they are using it. Anyways my dear, keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your writings on the Literotica site very soon.

All the best, Katerina


[Edited by Katerina Val-Kyrie on 01-30-2001 at 05:09 AM]