I've posted a request for specific feedback re "an ear for the spoken word" over in the Feedback forum.

[AG31]

A request for feedback regarding an ear for the spoken word.

 

[StillStunned]

I saw, and normally I'd be the first to jump in. I'm forever going on about rhythm in written English. Unfortunately, I'm working 14-hour days just now, so the brain is a bit frizzled. I'll try and look at it one of these days.

 

[AG31]

A request for feedback regarding an ear for the spoken word.

Bumping for visibility and encouraging AH people who enjoy critiquing to put a Watch on the Feedback forum.