lovecraft68
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Bit of a long post, but consider it in the sense of what it is, research. Instead of graphs and numbers and endless talk of scores etc. I like to roll my sleeves up, get down in the trenches and see what's what. Having said that,
My LW story went live this morning, and I'll start by saying-and this is important as you'll see-I have not been subtle in my disdain and contempt for factions of that readership. Note I say factions not everyone, and it mostly aimed at BTB crowd. But we have discussed other things too, so let me share with the class a few things that this proves before in my next post I get to the main thing this achieved.
1-Story is a hotwife/her cuck husband who run a business, they're desperate for contract think they have it until they find out the person who has say in signing it is someone the husband back stabbed royally and almost ruined his career years ago. Its LW so you know the wife uses what she has to get the deal done, and the husband has to watch. So it falls into the cuck category, but throughout the story I reference how despite his protests, he always ends up looking for sex from her not long after her latest encounter, so he has the love/hate thing going a lot of the readers do I imagine.
2-the comments of course(14 early on) are mostly as nasty as you would imagine. Several were along the lines of keep this stuff out of LW. So...a story of a adventurous wife and her husband don't belong in a category designed for extra marital sex? Proves the point the pinheads are trying to force the category to mold to their preference
3-Back to point 2 the one purely positive comment stated it might have been better off in fetish. This proves what myself and some others have been saying, that the category has become such a minefield they're better off taking it to a general category rather than the one it truly fits in
4-Not so much about my story, but general proof of what populates the site-at least in the sense they're 'first in' and hitting it hard. I took a quick glance down the new stories in LW just about everything under a 3 many under a 2, only a couple over four. Those two had something in common. The tag lines.
"A man explains his angst at a group therapy meeting." A bunch of men get together and bash their wives and whine to each other gets a 4+ wonder why?
"Husband tries to tell his wife but she wouldn't listen." Obviously this one is a keeper because there's a real man husband here not being a simp and who whore wife-aren't they all?-won't listen. That gets the feels there.
Another one is wife chooses boss over husband....long story short the pattern here is if the wife is shown to be a complete bitch and the husband does not approve at all, this is what works, at least to the lunatics.
5-I admit this story was submitted to troll, but not so much the readers, next post explains motivation other than let's see if I'm right about some things. What I wanted to do is see if they could stop foaming at the mouth long enough to realize I'm not sanitizing or glorifying the wife at all. All three characters in this story are crappy people in their own way. The story-despite having what I feel a pretty good sex scene-is not meant to be erotic as much as an example of just how shitty people can be. This comment is the one who hit it perfectly, no surprise, this reader has followed me for years and we talk shop from time to time.
Very well written as you always do. I might suggest that this is more in the Fetish category? Other than that, twisted and dark and painful. All Hallmarks of your touch sir! . Thank you for writing. Sincerely,Payenbrant
Again even with sex, this story was meant to be a bleak stark look at shitty people. Two faced back stabbing husband, bitchy wife who does as she pleases, and the kind of man who'd fuck a man's wife for revenge for fucking him over. No winners here, just losers. If more comments were about how nasty they all were, I'd think some got the point, but instead its all mindless spew....but the best one?
Next post.
My LW story went live this morning, and I'll start by saying-and this is important as you'll see-I have not been subtle in my disdain and contempt for factions of that readership. Note I say factions not everyone, and it mostly aimed at BTB crowd. But we have discussed other things too, so let me share with the class a few things that this proves before in my next post I get to the main thing this achieved.
1-Story is a hotwife/her cuck husband who run a business, they're desperate for contract think they have it until they find out the person who has say in signing it is someone the husband back stabbed royally and almost ruined his career years ago. Its LW so you know the wife uses what she has to get the deal done, and the husband has to watch. So it falls into the cuck category, but throughout the story I reference how despite his protests, he always ends up looking for sex from her not long after her latest encounter, so he has the love/hate thing going a lot of the readers do I imagine.
2-the comments of course(14 early on) are mostly as nasty as you would imagine. Several were along the lines of keep this stuff out of LW. So...a story of a adventurous wife and her husband don't belong in a category designed for extra marital sex? Proves the point the pinheads are trying to force the category to mold to their preference
3-Back to point 2 the one purely positive comment stated it might have been better off in fetish. This proves what myself and some others have been saying, that the category has become such a minefield they're better off taking it to a general category rather than the one it truly fits in
4-Not so much about my story, but general proof of what populates the site-at least in the sense they're 'first in' and hitting it hard. I took a quick glance down the new stories in LW just about everything under a 3 many under a 2, only a couple over four. Those two had something in common. The tag lines.
"A man explains his angst at a group therapy meeting." A bunch of men get together and bash their wives and whine to each other gets a 4+ wonder why?
"Husband tries to tell his wife but she wouldn't listen." Obviously this one is a keeper because there's a real man husband here not being a simp and who whore wife-aren't they all?-won't listen. That gets the feels there.
Another one is wife chooses boss over husband....long story short the pattern here is if the wife is shown to be a complete bitch and the husband does not approve at all, this is what works, at least to the lunatics.
5-I admit this story was submitted to troll, but not so much the readers, next post explains motivation other than let's see if I'm right about some things. What I wanted to do is see if they could stop foaming at the mouth long enough to realize I'm not sanitizing or glorifying the wife at all. All three characters in this story are crappy people in their own way. The story-despite having what I feel a pretty good sex scene-is not meant to be erotic as much as an example of just how shitty people can be. This comment is the one who hit it perfectly, no surprise, this reader has followed me for years and we talk shop from time to time.
Very well written as you always do. I might suggest that this is more in the Fetish category? Other than that, twisted and dark and painful. All Hallmarks of your touch sir! . Thank you for writing. Sincerely,Payenbrant
Again even with sex, this story was meant to be a bleak stark look at shitty people. Two faced back stabbing husband, bitchy wife who does as she pleases, and the kind of man who'd fuck a man's wife for revenge for fucking him over. No winners here, just losers. If more comments were about how nasty they all were, I'd think some got the point, but instead its all mindless spew....but the best one?
Next post.