It Needs Work

[NOIRTRASH]

I came across this the other day. An editor said it about one of her authors, now deceased, but in print anyway.

I read some of the book. Its boring.

Do you know when your wares are lame?

 

[ElectricBlue]

I came across this the other day. An editor said it about one of her authors, now deceased, but in print anyway.

I read some of the book. Its boring.

Do you know when your wares are lame?

I know when I grind to a halt and am no longer interested. Whether I've saved the world from lameosity is a different thing, I guess. I might limp a lot...

 

[oggbashan]

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Do you know when your wares are lame?

I thought so when I started posting to Literotica. Some of my stories were hard work to write, more slog than inspiration.

But some that I thought were pedestrian seemed to work for some readers and got better ratings and comments than I expected.

Some that I was really enjoying writing and thought were good? Few votes, low rating and zero comments.

I'm just the author. What do I know about which of my stories people will like?

 

[NOIRTRASH]

From where I sit its easy to make ordinary squeal.

Like I recall our secretary of 30 years ago. Hoisted her nose at every construction worker who asked her out, but whined constantly about no decent guys. Then she was caught with 4 Mexicans and a car trunk fulla beer. My daughter caught her.

Or a husband goes to a swingers club and runs into his wife.

Or THE WORLD ACCORDING TO GARP where hubby rear ends wifeys car who has a mouthfulla student cock.