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JAMESBJOHNSON
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I took a look at stories an AH poster submitted.
The scores are high, far higher than my wares, but theyre uniformly shit. I lost interest within a paragraph or two, the writing cadence makes me think of the theme song to Pee Wee's Playhouse. Theyre larded with adverbs, and people don't talk like the writer's characters.
I didn't ONE SHOT the writer.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKcYGOIJhqo
AM I WRONG?
The scores are high, far higher than my wares, but theyre uniformly shit. I lost interest within a paragraph or two, the writing cadence makes me think of the theme song to Pee Wee's Playhouse. Theyre larded with adverbs, and people don't talk like the writer's characters.
I didn't ONE SHOT the writer.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKcYGOIJhqo
AM I WRONG?
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