Israeli Needs a content editor

[Metamorphose]

After the last story I posted earned much negative response - which is a nicer way to say I broke a Literotica negative record, I'm looking for someone to help me with a new one I'm working on.

I need someone to proof read content wise. Where it slows, where it stinks, what to slice and what to keep. What's repetitive, whats unclear and what I should shove up my rear.

I'm going for a a love theme this time with tons of carnal activities (surprise surprise).

I do not shy from criticism, I listen, digest and try to apply.

 

[Emeraldfae]

I am surprised you haven't had anyone respond to this....considering the delectable rythme in it that is now stuck in my head. Lol you might have better luck if you'd activate your PMs. Still I like this post.

 

[sr71plt]

I think the nonresponse has most to do with not providing the category and wordage.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

As Emeraldfae said, you might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[Metamorphose]

10x ya all.
I do have an excellent editor now, she works at the speed of light and is both nice and really really smart.
Alas, my marks have not improved, yet, but I'm learning.