FallingToFly
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Trombonus said:Argh my eyes! I'm scarred for life...AGAIN!
I do live to serve.
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I do live to serve.
Trombonus
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Ok, I just submitted a re-edited version of my story, so hopefully this will be a bit better than my last try. It'll probably take like a week before it shows up because it's a word file, but I'm sure it'll be accepted since it already was. 
All I really did, was basically cut the first few paragraphs out and change a few of the sentences in the middle. Things get started much sooner now. I'm really happy with it. I tried figuring out a way to post it here as an attachment, but they only allow images. It's a little big for a forum post, but I could give it a try.
All I really did, was basically cut the first few paragraphs out and change a few of the sentences in the middle. Things get started much sooner now. I'm really happy with it. I tried figuring out a way to post it here as an attachment, but they only allow images. It's a little big for a forum post, but I could give it a try.
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carsonshepherd
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*unrelated*
You pussy whipped bastard. I thought I taught you better
You pussy whipped bastard. I thought I taught you better
Aurora Black
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The Phaze authors rock ass!
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Trombonus said:
Yep. Phaze is an online publisher for sexy fiction. I just got out of a great author chat that Imp & Bel were involved in, and I had a wonderful time meeting new people and laughing my ass off.
Jenny_Jackson
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Aurora Black said:Yep. Phaze is an online publisher for sexy fiction. I just got out of a great author chat that Imp & Bel were involved in, and I had a wonderful time meeting new people and laughing my ass off.
You are a world of information, Aurora
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Jenny_Jackson said:You are a world of information, Aurora
What did I do?
Roxanne Appleby
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Pounce! Hiya, Jenny!Jenny_Jackson said:You are a world of information, Aurora
Bye ya, Jenny
- I'm off to beddie-bye.
Belegon
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McKenna said:Someone commented today that my stories are "cerebrally erotic." I like that.
damn...
I knew I chose the wrong time to quit talking about her sexy brains and focus on the wonderful tits and ass...
...my timing just sucks.
*wink*
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Nirvanadragones
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Timezones suck...
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carsonshepherd
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I thought this was supposed to stop hurting after awhile.
RedHairedandFriendly
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Daisy chains and kisses lay littered on the ground
tiny fingers grip the hands of a man wearing a frown.
Hearts lie broken on a sea of glass
teardrops fall, silent sobs pass
Eyes lift up to the sky
whispers spoken from lips asking why.
Dreams were made, now scattered about.
Two hands trying to figure it out
He holds his head against clenched fists
and trembles and shakes not wanting this
She stares down her heart healed and complete
from a hurt no one saw, no one could defeat.
No pain does she suffer, only joy does she see
though she knows her love hurts but this is what must be
There was no survey or questionnaire to fill-in
It was her time and now they must mend
She’ll be there watching with love
as tiny fingers and toes grow into someone
full of spirit, fight, and romance
and one day they’ll all meet and once again dance.
tiny fingers grip the hands of a man wearing a frown.
Hearts lie broken on a sea of glass
teardrops fall, silent sobs pass
Eyes lift up to the sky
whispers spoken from lips asking why.
Dreams were made, now scattered about.
Two hands trying to figure it out
He holds his head against clenched fists
and trembles and shakes not wanting this
She stares down her heart healed and complete
from a hurt no one saw, no one could defeat.
No pain does she suffer, only joy does she see
though she knows her love hurts but this is what must be
There was no survey or questionnaire to fill-in
It was her time and now they must mend
She’ll be there watching with love
as tiny fingers and toes grow into someone
full of spirit, fight, and romance
and one day they’ll all meet and once again dance.
Roxanne Appleby
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Well said.Belegon said:
Roxanne Appleby
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Belegon said:
Not at all - a balanced lust is a good thing . . .
AppleBiter
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Things can stop being so complicated, now. Really. They can. I won't mind.
*waiting*
*waiting*
RedHairedandFriendly
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AppleBiter said:
*quick chuckle* Ditto this post.
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