ISO: Female Writers

[DumbDude3103]

I am interested in getting in contact with one or two female writers so that I can have them help me write better. Mainly I am concerned on how I portray the woman's perspective of events and wish to be more accurate.
https://www.literotica.com/s/becoming-a-webstar
my first chapter

 

[sr71plt]

Doubt any will show interest until they see what and how you write now--and are fairly sure it's writing you're after. Include links to Lit. stories. If you don't have any, suggest you first write some showing what and how you now write.

 

[EverLux]

Doubt any will show interest until they see what and how you write now--and are fairly sure it's writing you're after. Include links to Lit. stories. If you don't have any, suggest you first write some showing what and how you now write.

What he said.

 

[GoldenMaia]

Doubt any will show interest until they see what and how you write now--and are fairly sure it's writing you're after. Include links to Lit. stories. If you don't have any, suggest you first write some showing what and how you now write.

Truth!

 

[sharingfantasies]

I see you edited your post and added the link to the story you are working on. Good luck with it.

 

[NotWise]

I am interested in getting in contact with one or two female writers so that I can have them help me write better. Mainly I am concerned on how I portray the woman's perspective of events and wish to be more accurate.
https://www.literotica.com/s/becoming-a-webstar
my first chapter

I LOL'd over your first two lines. I guess bra size is the really important stuff.

 

[CoffeeWithMonkeys]

I LOL'd over your first two lines. I guess bra size is the really important stuff.

I saw that, I closed the page, didn't read any further.

 

[EverLux]

Picture it... Sicily. Long legged brunette. 34DD.

Ok, yes, those first two lines would've made me click away immediately.
If the girls' stats are absolutely necessary to include, find a way to work them into the story itself, or merely hint at them. Do that, and you've already made a huge improvement.

 

[StrangeLife]

One should never underestimate the advantage of starting a story with a thorough physical description of the people involved. Especially boob-size and penile dimensions are essential. If I don't know the cupsize of the main female cast, I can't get into the story at all!

Therefore I begin all my own writings that way. And the main heroine is always an F-cup... in honor of my grade point average from highschool.

 

[sr71plt]

Oh, God, are we going to go through this again? If you don't like the way the guy writes, just don't answer the call. If no one answers maybe he'll decide to readjust his writing style himself. If a bunch of women answer, you're the ones caught being snobby.

 

[NotWise]

One should never underestimate the advantage of starting a story with a thorough physical description of the people involved. Especially boob-size and penile dimensions are essential. If I don't know the cupsize of the main female cast, I can't get into the story at all!

Therefore I begin all my own writings that way. And the main heroine is always an F-cup... in honor of my grade point average from highschool.

I skimmed one of your stories. I think you're being sarcastic. Odd how sarcasm doesn't usually come off well in print.

 

[StrangeLife]

I skimmed one of your stories. I think you're being sarcastic. Odd how sarcasm doesn't usually come off well in print.

Me sarcastic???

Surely you jest Sir! I will have you know that I am as straight forward as a Westboro Baptist preacher. To me "irony" is what a dude named Rony says when introducing himself...

 

[legerdemer]

I LOL'd over your first two lines. I guess bra size is the really important stuff.

I guess the question really is, what do men (or women) first look at and register when they see another human? I would venture to guess no one ever thinks of bra size first. Or second. Or...

 

[TxRad]

I guess the question really is, what do men (or women) first look at and register when they see another human? I would venture to guess no one ever thinks of bra size first. Or second. Or...

I don't think I've ever thought of bra size. Nice, very nice, and wow, pretty much cover it.

 

[NotWise]

I guess the question really is, what do men (or women) first look at and register when they see another human? I would venture to guess no one ever thinks of bra size first. Or second. Or...

Height, shape, walking gait, hair, eyes, butt. I don't usually notice a woman's breasts at first unless she's making a show of them. I've never walked up behind a woman and checked the size tag on her bra.

For me, the first three are true whether I'm noticing a man or a woman. Noting a walking gait is relatively knew behavior to me. I think I've come to see that as a quick assessment of mental and physical health.

 

[Nezhul]

no one ever thinks of bra size first. Or second. Or...

To begin with, it's really hard to guess bra size until you get the girl naked. It depends on clothes A LOT. Like, I remember I dated a girl and I initially thought she had pretty flat chest on our first date. Nothing to it, I like it all the same. Later I was pleasantly surprised though. It just looked that way because of what clothes she wore.
And sometimes the breasts look much bigger than they are in reality.
As for cup size - being a make I can only very roughly approximate it, and definitely not to a point of naming "36AA" or something =) And mostly for me there are 4 sizes: flat, small, big and fucking huge.

 

[sr71plt]

To begin with, it's really hard to guess bra size until you get the girl naked. It depends on clothes A LOT. Like, I remember I dated a girl and I initially thought she had pretty flat chest on our first date. Nothing to it, I like it all the same. Later I was pleasantly surprised though. It just looked that way because of what clothes she wore.
And sometimes the breasts look much bigger than they are in reality.
As for cup size - being a make I can only very roughly approximate it, and definitely not to a point of naming "36AA" or something =) And mostly for me there are 4 sizes: flat, small, big and fucking huge.

First of all, to say that "no one has ever thought in terms of bra size first" is elitest--and it's ridiculous to claim to talk for everyone else on this (or anything). I have encountered a subset of men who always think in terms of measurements first. The point, in response to Nezhul, is that they aren't thinking in terms of a specific measurement. They have the equivalence of "small," "big," and "bigigantic" in their minds, and in their set of friends/coworkers, they speak in these terms. So, it's irrelevant to attack the issue by talking precise measurements. What they are doing is exactly what folks get around to saying ad nauseum in this discussion--that there are descriptive terms they use in place of specific measurements. Those who speak to each other in measurements are actually doing the same thing--evoking an image of what they are talking about without actually knowing or thinking about precise measurements. They are measurement visualizers, as carpenters and other construction workers would tend to be, and they speak of their images in measurement terms.

Can't we give this telling other writers and readers what images they can and cannot use to turn on their arousal a rest now? This is just one of those "mind your own business" topics we get into here.

 

[NotWise]

Can't we give this telling other writers and readers what images they can and cannot use to turn on their arousal a rest now? This is just one of those "mind your own business" topics we get into here.

I went back through the posts on this thread without finding anyone who told the original poster what he could or could not write.

Personally, I thought it ironic that the OP asked for help from female writers, then demonstrated his style with something that tends to alienate female writers.

 

[NicoleZ]

In a way, I have to defend the OP - cup size does matter to both men and women! Contrary to the beliefs of many of the previous replies, it is certainly quite high up the list of the things we, women and men, look at first as this clip from Mythbusters proves:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6YJ91FKZHI0

But from there to start a story with: "Christine, a 19 year old ginger. 36C Sarah, a 19 year old with black hair. 32B"??? They are attention-grabbers but for the wrong reasons. I'm joining those who said to weave it into the text and leave out the numbers.

 

[Kimikimidoll]

Oooohhh *gropes her own 34DD breasts* me likey! We should all introduce ourselves by breast sizes!

OP, I know it looks like you are getting a lot of shit for it, but really, the shit is justified. Even in purely stroke-and-go stories, that part comes up in the second paragraph when the boyfriend/dad/uncle/school teacher/stalker/slave owner is describing said girl to the audience. Like someone said, you can work that detail elsewhere. Please, erase those first two lines, and I think the rest will take care of itself.

 

[CoffeeWithMonkeys]

Do most people even know what those boobs would look like by someone stating the bra size?
I've been a woman my whole life, nearly 50 years, been wearing a bra for about 4 years, maybe a few less, and I honestly would have no clue what a size 32B would look like.I'm guessing she's on the small side since she's only 32 around, but a B isn't too horrible.

But why not say something like
Despite XXX being small, almost waif like, she still had very ample breasts.
(And yes I know the proper definition of waif is a homeless or orphaned person, but more and more now it is being used to define a thin smaller person.)

 

[Kimikimidoll]

By the way, is it just me or do all girls have a range of bra sizes? You know the usual, measurements go up, cup goes down, but even depending on the type of bras the cup size changes. Then the friggin brands have different sizes. THEN you have those days when everything is too puffy and falling out, and days where you wish you had a handy bra pump-inflator thing like in that Pink video. So, calling out a girl by the size is pretty... general.

 

[CoffeeWithMonkeys]

By the way, is it just me or do all girls have a range of bra sizes? You know the usual, measurements go up, cup goes down, but even depending on the type of bras the cup size changes. Then the friggin brands have different sizes. THEN you have those days when everything is too puffy and falling out, and days where you wish you had a handy bra pump-inflator thing like in that Pink video. So, calling out a girl by the size is pretty... general.

Yep I nearly posted that in my above post.
I wear anything from a 36 C/D to a 42 B. Depends so much on the bra type(full coverage, demi, plunge, etc...) the brand, and yes even the time of the month for me.

 

[NotWise]

Do most people even know what those boobs would look like by someone stating the bra size?

I doubt it, but then it isn't important that the image the bra size creates is accurate or even consistent from person to person. Maybe it would make a difference if the readers got together and compared their impressions.

For several years now the internet has carried photos of a lovely amateur model known as Puddems or Gingerpuss. I think the photos were taken by her boyfriend or husband and posted to a forum where they are paid per view. There was some issue on the forum about what her bra size was, so in one photo compilation I saw there was a picture of the size tag on her bra. 34C. I expect most men would have guessed larger.

 

[Kimikimidoll]

Yep I nearly posted that in my above post.
I wear anything from a 36 C/D to a 42 B. Depends so much on the bra type(full coverage, demi, plunge, etc...) the brand, and yes even the time of the month for me.

There you go. Now you're a sexy, sexy 36D then pfffft... a pludgy, 42 B. On the same day, in the next minute. Men, trust nothing about women, not even their bra sizes! XD