ISO: Editor/Guidance/Sage/Writing Group - maybe an erotica feedback loop?

[pantyboidoe]

Hello!

I wrote a first part story found in my signature (A Gurl in the Making) and have a good chunk of Part 2 written though I need some help with structure, conflict and just general guidance. I would like to branch the story out into a couple of different directions without getting too messy. I feel like I have more than enough characters introduced and just need some help building the story and tying it all together so that it makes linear sense. Would love to chat and happy to share part 2 with anyone that would be interested in reading and offer criticisms.

Happy writing!

 

[pantyboidoe]

bump - would still love to discuss part 2 of "A Gurl in the Making" with anyone that would be inclined.

 

[AlphaLyon]

You can message / PM me. It's not the kind of story I would hop on as an editor, but I can talk to you about it and hopefully help you with the overall narrative if you want.

 

[pantyboidoe]

You can message / PM me. It's not the kind of story I would hop on as an editor, but I can talk to you about it and hopefully help you with the overall narrative if you want.

Thank you, Sir.