I have just turned what began as a series of texts into a letter from a Master to his submissive and it's the first thing I've ever considering submitting although I have composed erotic literature in the past before just for my own enjoyment.
If any editor would like to take a look at it I'd be greatly appreciative. The search feature was too overwhelming and I could not tell if the users were recently active.
You can feel free to post here or PM if you like, just be advised that it is pretty heavy on anal, ass to mouth, human (female) in the role of a puppy slave with very slight elements of ageplay.
Thanks so much for considering it, I will accept any form of help and am not afraid to be completely knocked down and told with 100% honesty what you think.
Even if you'd just like to read it very quickly and just offer some feedback rather than properly edit the piece I would be extremely grateful.
Cheers,
F
If any editor would like to take a look at it I'd be greatly appreciative. The search feature was too overwhelming and I could not tell if the users were recently active.
You can feel free to post here or PM if you like, just be advised that it is pretty heavy on anal, ass to mouth, human (female) in the role of a puppy slave with very slight elements of ageplay.
Thanks so much for considering it, I will accept any form of help and am not afraid to be completely knocked down and told with 100% honesty what you think.
Even if you'd just like to read it very quickly and just offer some feedback rather than properly edit the piece I would be extremely grateful.
Cheers,
F
