Is this story suited for Literotica?

[Softly]

I wrote a different kind of story, for me. It is "Violent World of Vicky Brown." It is still in the new story section. It has high marks, but few votes. I have several other plots like it in mind, but will not go ahead if this is not right for here.

I tried to write two "Humor" stories; "Watch out United," and "Einstein, etc." Both flopped.

So, I need a few readers of Courage to read my new story, "Violent world of Vicky Brown."

Please tell me exactly what you think of it, here on the open board.

Thank you.

 

[Frederick Carol]

OK, I read it. I enjoyed it. Different, but I like a story to go with the sex. Some irritating typos, but nothing major.

Whether it is relevant to Literotica? It can get boring reading a lot of 'wham, bam, thank you ma'am' sexcapades, so personally I'd like more tales like this, not necessarily in the same setting.

For the lazy, go to

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=16339

and read it yourself.

FC

 

[Softly]

Thank you Fred

Hi Fred,

It was very nice of you to review, and comment about, the story.

I have forty-five stories posted here in Literotica. One never knows which one will be a hit.

In the case of this story, it has only generated seven votes, yet has a score of 4.70.

I received one very nice three word feedback. "Clancy meets Literotica."

 

[Cockatoo]

Whew!

This gal knows what she's talking about. You wouldn't expect to find accurate radio chatter and review of rotation speeds here in porno-land, but, damn, there it is. I wouldn't be surprised if Softly DOES have six thousand hours and a Learjet type rating. Plus, you've gotta respect someone so prolific. She doesn't give up.

Did I mention that this story is hot? Hell yeah, this belongs here. It's exactly the kind of off-the-beaten-path surprise that I've come to cherish here. Content is a good thing. Rock on, girl.

 

[Softly]

Thank you Cockatoo.

You have made my day.

And yes, I hold a Lear 24 type rating. I have a hard time staying current, so visit with the Flight Safety folks from time to time.

Hours - 5998. and yes the Beechjet is a lot easier to fly then the Lear. My company has a Beechjet, which I get some right seat time in.

As for the Lear, known as the Lear Family Fighter, we came off the ground at 13,300 lb. Initial rate of climb was 6,300 fpm.
We were at 4000 ft before we crossed the airport boundry.

In 14.5 minutes, we were at FL 410, were ninety miles down the road, with a burn of 600 lb. My dad would put me under the hood all the time. Sometimes, the first time I would look out of the window during a whole flight, would be when he raised the hood as we decended through 200 ft.

Oh, and yes, I can do a slow roll without spelling your coffee.

Thanks again for your comments.

 

[Cockatoo]

See, I knew it

Aha. I knew it. We really should have a secret handshake or something.

I'd kill for six thousand hours, MULTI TURBINE no less. Gawd. I'm busy clawing my way through the bug smashers, something like 450 TT, CSEL and CMEL Instrument. A climb rate of 1500fpm is fast, to me. The highest performance plane I've flown is an Aztec (I cheered when I saw your Aztec reference!).

I'm not surprized that the Beechjet is nicer to fly. Those people make good, comfortable airplanes. My direct experience with Beech is kind of skewed, though, since it's limited to the Sierra 200 (see below), which is a squirrely little sucker. It stalls fast, cruises slow, descends like a homesick stone, and its flaps wash out the stabilator when you're on final. It rolls like a dream, but that's 'cause the wings are too short. Still, it's very comfortable to sit in, and you can tell that those people do things first class.

I'm working my way through my CFI now so I can actually get paid to fly, rather than having to keep paying through the nose for it. With a lear 24 rating, I'd be flying corporate or fractional so fast, I'd (finally) have to worry about compressability. Mmmmm. What are the chances I could right seat you sometime?

Keep the dirty side down,
Andy, the Cockatoo

 

[Softly]

WOW, number one

Violent World of Vicky Brown is number one in the "Top Story - Romance." Have you read it and voted on it?