is this daughter possessed by her mothers ghost ?

[NASCARaddicted]

When Cindy was 8 years old, her mother Maria was killed in a car accident.

From that day on, Cindy was living together with her father. He was a nice, cool guy - but like Cindy, he was missing Maria.


12 years later - Cindy became a very pretty woman. Both, Cindy and her father are on a small party - and maybe the father drunk a little bit too much. So Cindy helps him to get into his bedroom and put him on the big bed.

Suddenly, her father starts to talk to her: "Cindy, you are 20 years old. And you look exactly like your mother, back when she was 20" .... he starts to weep "oh, I miss her so much, especially since you look so much like her. I still remember our first date. And I remember how we kissed for the first time." He looks over to the empty side of the bed "Oh, and I remember how she was laying next to me .... and how we had sex. I still remember how I made her pregnant on this big bed ... and 9 months later you were born. Back then, she was 20 - and she looked just like you - Oh I miss her soo much"

Suddenly, Cindy get's excited "So, wouldn't you love to fuck her once again ? " Cindy takes her dress off. Then she pulls the pants of her father down and starts to caress his dick. "But Cindy, you are ..... " - "Call me Maria. Just imagine that I am your wife" .... she sounded very much like his wife

So they start to fuck ....

The next day, when he is sober again, he realizes what he has done. He fucked his daughter, he committed incest. But was this really his daughter ? Or could it be, that his daughter was possessed by the ghost of her mother ?

But then, he sees his daughter. She smiles at him and says "Did you enjoy the night ? I surely did - it was the first time, that a guy gave me an orgasm .... and I want to have many more orgasms like the one you gave me last night ...."

 

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no replies ?

actually, I think this idea is really good (but then, I should since I posted it).

2 days ago, I told this story to someone on AOL (but with a female chatname) and this person really believed it (except for the part with "mothers ghost").

 

[moon_dust]

it was a good story damn good but it needs' more to it like how her mom took over her and made her do things that she would not have done. make it more in depth and more thriling for all of them make the reader want more to it then what was there.

 

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it was a good story damn good but it needs' more to it like how her mom took over her and made her do things that she would not have done. make it more in depth and more thriling for all of them make the reader want more to it then what was there.

Well, besides the fact that it is just a basic plot ....
I am not sure, if the girl is reall possessed by the ghost, or if she said it like a joke ....

 

[moon_dust]

like i said it was good and i liked it but u have to make it more give more tot he story like how she died, how she was w/ her mom when she died. I have a few thoughts on how we can spicy it up.

 

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like i said it was good and i liked it but u have to make it more give more tot he story like how she died, how she was w/ her mom when she died. I have a few thoughts on how we can spicy it up.

Ah, I guess I know what you mean. So for example: both had an accident with the car. The daughter survived unharmed (or with minor injuries) but the mother died instantly. But for some reasons, the ghost of the mother enters the body of the daughter.
And then: Either the ghost sleeps until this one night. Or, the ghost was always awake, and slowly, the daughter became more and more like her mother. By the time when the daughter was 20, she was like an exact copy of her mother (when the mother was 20).

To spice it up: When the mother was like 15, she met this one guy (her future husband). From that day on, the mother knew, that this guy should deflower her, and no one else. And since the ghost of the mom is now in her daughter, the daughter feels the same. At first, she may not notice that she is in love with her father. When she is like 15, she starts to date some guys. But she feels, that no one of this boy is "the right guy" so at 20, she is still a virgin - and then, at some point, she realizes that she wants to be deflowered by her father - because he also deflowered her mother.

Overall, I think the ghost of the mom and the ghost of the daughter merge together. The daughter feels that her mother is close, but she never realizes, how close she really is.
But then, this one night, the ghost of the mother takes full control over the mind of the daughter ....

 

[moon_dust]

hey, i hope u dont mind but i gave a lot of thought to this and i was going to put just a few ideas but i ended up going on and on on it i hope u like it

 

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of course I like it, when someone adds some new ideas.

And besides that - if you want, you can make a story out of this idea. I could do it myself, but currently, I am not in a good writing mood ....

 

[moon_dust]

how do i get a hold of u so u can see it and just u

 

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how do i get a hold of u so u can see it and just u

well, you can send me a Private Message, or you can send an e-mail but I know, that they are erased by the moderator ......

So, the best would be an e-mail and then I can tell you my e-mail addy

 

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hey moondust, if you haven't already noticed, I send you a private message with my e-mail address ....
so, feel free to send me an e-mail ....