Is this a record?

[Octavian]

Chapter 7 of my story, 'What Kate Did' was posted today.
Within a few hours I had received the following feedback. Could this be a record?

1. AS A WRITER YOU SUCK AND AS PERSON FROM YOUR WRITING YOU ARE A WIMP.

2. Yea I knew it... this hubby of this Katewhore... became a wimp... no real man anymoore... so sad

3. So now we have annother shit wimp and his slutwhorestory here again... she's a whore, fucking for money and you, wimp, enjoy it till you both have aids... lol But, please don't ever have children vith your whorewife, think about how they are teased in school when the kids gets some copy of your whores pornfilms...


It's a story for Heaven's sake!

What is wrong with these people?

Also note the spelling and the grammar and yet, I'm the writer who sucks!

Octavian

 

[Wills]

Oct

is this one person, or are their three people mainlining on Lit.com?

Unsigned I guess?

 

[Octavian]

Hi Wills
They are different emails and are all anonymous. It is possible they are from the same person, but I doubt it
I have had similar feedback for each of the previous six chapters but usually only a couple at a time.
I think one person has sent feedback on three different chapters because he made the same spelling mistake with the word,'more'.

These have to be sad people. They just wait for a 'Loving Wives' story and fire off. They don't even realise they are saying the same thing every time.

Octavian

 

[Guest]

Hi Wills
They are different emails and are all anonymous. It is possible they are from the same person, but I doubt it
I have had similar feedback for each of the previous six chapters but usually only a couple at a time.
I think one person has sent feedback on three different chapters because he made the same spelling mistake with the word,'more'.

These have to be sad people. They just wait for a 'Loving Wives' story and fire off. They don't even realise they are saying the same thing every time.

Octavian

How the hell can anyone spell "more" wrong???

Three times???

Oh dear.

Yep, I think it's a record! It's such a shame, I kind of pity their poor, sad souls.

Lou

 

[catalina_francisco]

Most likely someone who brings truth to the old saying 'jealousy is a curse'. Is sad people have to spread their venom instead of gathering their lacking courage to live out their own dark desires. I think you would have to be fairly unhappy in your own existence to even bother sending such rubbish to another. Keep writing....obviously it is provoking sentiment and emotion which are usually the sign of a good writer!!

Catalina

 

[Guest]

Most likely someone who brings truth to the old saying 'jealousy is a curse'. Is sad people have to spread their venom instead of gathering theirlacking courage to live out their own dark desires. I think you would have to be fairly unhappy in your own existence to even bother sending such rubbish to another. Keep writing....obviously it is provoking sentiment and emotion which are usually the sign of a good writer!!

Catalina

VERY well said!

Lou

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I have a personal troll Oct. Every time a story of mine goes up he's there with his one vote and nasty feedback. I think of him sort of like a trophy. Granted it's a shame I can't shoot him, have him stuffed and mounted on the wall in my study, but he's almost as good as there. You have three so I am guessing that makes you safrai master

Ignore them and keep up the good work. After all, even if we could stuff and mouth them I am guessing they have the kind of looks where would probably choose to mount their asses instead of the heads.

-Colly

 

[NoJo]

Chapter 7 of my story, 'What Kate Did' was posted today.
Within a few hours I had received the following feedback. Could this be a record?

1. AS A WRITER YOU SUCK AND AS PERSON FROM YOUR WRITING YOU ARE A WIMP.
FYI: CAPS LOCK KEY IS TO THE LEFT OF THE "A" ON YOUR KEYBOARD

2. Yea I knew it... this hubby of this Katewhore... became a wimp... no real man anymoore... so sad
Yea? YEA?? Veri-fucking-ly... ellipses... so sad...

3. So now we have annother shit wimp and his slutwhorestory here again... she's a whore, fucking for money and you, wimp, enjoy it till you both have aids... lol But, please don't ever have children vith your whorewife, think about how they are teased in school when the kids gets some copy of your whores pornfilms...
Thank you, Roger Ebert.


What is wrong with these people?

They read porn


Also note the spelling and the grammar and yet, I'm the writer who sucks!

The comma was not strictly necessary, Octavian.

Octavian

 

[LorriLove]

Hi Wills
They are different emails and are all anonymous. It is possible they are from the same person, but I doubt it
I have had similar feedback for each of the previous six chapters but usually only a couple at a time.
I think one person has sent feedback on three different chapters because he made the same spelling mistake with the word,'more'.

These have to be sad people. They just wait for a 'Loving Wives' story and fire off. They don't even realise they are saying the same thing every time.

Octavian

take it as a compliment he believed it.

 

[Just_John1]

You crack me up sub_joe.

Oct, I've loved the series and have looked forward to each chapter. IMHO you have a good writing style and are what I consider to be a good story teller. The complaints, or criticism you've gotten are related to the genre not your writing style... Right them off as a badge of honor...

JJ1

edited because I need an editor for Everything! I write... grocery lists included.

 

[Guest]

You crack me up sub_joe.

I count on him.

Perdita

 

[A7inchPhildo]

I have a personal troll Oct. Every time a story of mine goes up he's there with his one vote and nasty feedback. I think of him sort of like a trophy. Granted it's a shame I can't shoot him, have him stuffed and mounted on the wall in my study, but he's almost as good as there. You have three so I am guessing that makes you safrai master


-Colly

Oh how true Colly I have a whole fan club. Now it has come around some of them no longer post annon they actually give an email addy. Too funny I still write and thank them for their support. Honestly I get more hate mail from loving wives than any other category. Ha and I am not married!

The numbers don't add up though between the hate mail and votes. I tell you some of those cheap shot bastards are lying. Can't trust any one these days.

Phildo

 

[snooper]

Re: Re: Is this a record?

FYI: CAPS LOCK KEY IS TO THE LEFT OF THE "A" ON YOUR KEYBOARD[color]

Je regret, monsieur, que n'importe qui connait que le premier rang contient (a gauche) les clefs
[TAB] [A] [Z] [E] [R] ...

 

[SensualCealy]

Well Ive got a few unwanted notes about my stories saying the grammar and sentence structure sucks, well Fuck tell me something I dont know!! lol

I would continue to write and post your stories, I havent read them yet but I will, people I think get jealous of situations and have to make others feel bad to make themselves come out on top.

Think of this person/ persons as your door mat when you go and come, make sure those shoes are really really clean ! lol

Keep up the good work,
Cealy