Inviting her 3 lovers to visit at the same time

[SisterJezabel]

I've been thinking about a story based on a friend who had Mr Monday, Wednesday and Friday as she calls them, except for a Christmas present she asks for them all to come and visit on Saturday... If I wanted to stretch it further I'd have one of the guys bring his 18yo son...

Being a woman, I don't mind seeing a couple of guys getting it on, but I gather this is a real no-no in the group sex category!

 

[JJA122]

Being a woman, I don't mind seeing a couple of guys getting it on, but I gather this is a real no-no in the group sex category!

Category probably wants to see guys hi-fiving hands in comradery rather than hi-fiving asses. I can see it working if there's some bi insinuations leading up to the night.

 

[PattieD]

The third lover will probably become the fifth wheel of at least the waiter. More than likely, one of her visiting days will warm the bench until one of them needs to tag out. (poor wrestling metaphor courtesy of an old BF into wrestling)

 

[screwher]

Great idea! Ever since we entered the lifestyle, my wife has enjoyed three other men. What a great present it would be if we had all three visit at the same time. They take turns fucking her all day!

 

[sirhugs]

Is she married?

 

[Magineer]

Originality in the tired, old "gang bang category" is going to be hard to achieve, but hey, that scarcely seems a major concern with most of the folks here.

Personally, I would work hard at both your setting and your characters - try to give the reader something to engage them more when the final 'orgy' makes its inevitable and pretty predictable appearance.

 

[Carnevil9]

Being a woman, I don't mind seeing a couple of guys getting it on, but I gather this is a real no-no in the group sex category!

I have a story in the Group Sex category about two couples trying their first swap. It starts with the wives giving the men a "show" together. Then they insist the husbands do the same, which the husbands reluctantly do. Nobody complained about that.

It might help to put a little disclaimer in an "author's note" at the top of the story.

 

[silversword]

Mistake

Perhaps she mistakenly double (or treble) books herself and invites them all round on the same weekend.

Maybe her husband is away realising it's too late to cancel she tried to put them all up in house large house, Mr Monday in her bedroom, Mr Wednesday guestroom and Mr Friday in the poolhouse.

Friday night goes well and she manages to satisfy each guy individually, Mr Wednesday did ask what was in her hair when she joined him in bed but she passed it off as face cream.

Maybe the prospect of Saturday is too much after and exhausting Friday night so she invites some friends round...

 

[PattieD]

The protagonist's name should be "Daily" amongst her days of the week; Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

Daily had been managing her days of the week with the greatest of discretion by placing Tuesday and Thursday between them. Yet, those twenty four hours between her men seem to be becoming less whereas the time spent with Mister Monday, Wednesday and Friday was becoming too much.

Daily needed to choose a favorite day. Which was just a matter of elimination that would take place on just one night, Saturday. She sent each day an invitation that contained a key to her apartment and items that needed to be brought for the occasion. Monday was to bring Chinese food. Wednesday was to bring dessert. And, Friday was to alcohol, mixers and shot glasses.

The invitation told them to arrive promptly at 6pm, let themselves in, have some drinks while watching the porn of their choice. They must all have at least three shots of alcohol before 7pm. The intent of these instructions were to induce a sexual atmosphere that she would dive into upon arrival.

Drinks were drunk and shots were had, while the essence of testosterone was so thick you could almost smell it. This was the intended environment that Daily wanted so that she could personally provide the next set of instructions. Daily made her entrance known and mixed herself a drink while delivering the expectations for the evening.

Each man, Monday, Wednesday and Friday, would have the opportunity to prove themselves sexually superior to the others by satisfying Daily sexually one at a time. While one was having sex the other two could view the techniques and hear the results of the others' efforts on a big screen television.

After Monday's sexual bid, Daily emerged from her bedroom in her long robe to join all three men for some dinner and some conversation. Talking about what they just saw and what they liked and disliked about Monday's performance.

Daily then took Wednesday's hand and led him back to her bed which could be seen by three different cameras for the other two's perusal. Again, Daily came out after her second session to the dining room table with a spent Wednesday in tow to have some dessert. Monday and Friday totally trashed Wednesday's performance while secretly keeping their arousals under the table.

Friday motivated and hard took the initiative by picking up Daily and carrying her back to her bedroom for his opportunity to prove his prowess. Monday and Wednesday watched and worried as Daily returned from a very loud and physical bid for her approval. While she straightened her hair and gathered her robe she made another drink.

As Daily started to speak, Friday pointed to her face and then to the corner of his mouth so she could lick cum that was still clinging to the edge of her mouth. Daily gulped her drink and announced that in her mind and body Wednesday was not up to par and ordered him out of her life. Monday and Friday smiled as Wednesday put on his coat and stumbled out of the apartment.

Daily turned to the remaining two and said there could only be one man in her life. And, to do so she needed to eliminate one man by testing their true desire to be her one and only. Pausing as she finished her drink, she looked at them both and ordered them to disrobe naked. And, as expected the exposed Monday and Friday were both flaccid.

Daily told them to stroke each other so that they could be again be of use to her. The men reluctantly reached out to each other and did as they were told. She took perverse pleasure out of witnessing these men struggling to make each other hard. Watching closely she told each to individually to stop right before they were on the edge of orgasms.

Standing erect and dripping, Monday and Friday stood before Daily wondering who would be chosen first to have sex with her again. She looked down at their pulsing and throbbing cocks and looked up to their anticipating faces.

"One of you must pleasure the other orally to completion. One of you must swallow the other before I can make my final decision"

They faced each other naked in need of release. Dripping with precum their cocks were almost touching each other. There were no other instructions. There were no other words. Just silent stares that seemed to last for an eternity. Then with a deliberate motion, Monday went to his knees took Friday into his mouth. Soon there were sounds of ecstasy and noises of gulping which led to Daily breaking into a knowing smile.

"Friday. I always knew you would be the one"

Wednesday stood up with a look of disgust and defeat as he wiped Friday from the corner of his mouth.

 

[SisterJezabel]

Is she married?

She ended up marrying Mr Friday when he announced he was moving for his job and she decided she couldn't live without him! They have a fairly open relationship though these days!

 

[Zionisacat]

This needs to be turned into a musical.
The other two critique Mondays performance but can't put their finger on exactly what they didn't like.
And he can see no reasons
Cause there are no reasons
What reason do you need to be sure

Oh tell me why
I don't like Monday

Her lesbian lover Tuesday bows out gracefully and they all sing together
Good bye, Ruby Tuesday
When you change with every new day
Still I'm going to miss you.

Wednesday seems to be winning the race for our fair maidens affections but the police bust in and everyone launches into an a cappella version of Simon and Garfunkles Wednesday Morning 3AM.


The result seems settled as The Cure start up Friday I'm in Love but thankfully Monday hasn't left yet and has discovered his Bi side as the Mickey Mouse clubs starts singing M-O-N-D-A-Y S-U-C-K-S and they all live happily after.

 

[PattieD]

Great idea. Like the twist. Musical!!!
Maybe, the culmination of all the songs lead to eventual break-up our Ms. Daily finds herself
Alone.
Pining for her Monday - Wednesday - Friday routine
Pining and angry as she sings the final song. The finale. "Friday On My Mind"
"Monday mornin' feels so bad
Ev'rybody seems to nag me
Comin' Tuesday I feel better
Even my old man looks good
Wed'sday just don't go
Thursday goes too slow
I've got Friday on my mind"
. . . drop curtain

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

There has to be a day of rest.

So you'd expect me to vote in the Fab Four:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kle2xHhRHg4


From when the world was a better place, people actually cared about other people and morons weren't in charge...

 

[JJA122]

What if they all turn up on Friday, because they've secretly all been in touch for weeks?

 

[sirhugs]

What if they all turn up on Friday, because they've secretly all been in touch for weeks?

Not sure why, but I don'y see them sharing one guy's day. How about showing up Saturday Night?