Inviting feedback on my slow-ish burn romance oneshot

[Zeronix]

Tldr, A somewhat hot mess of a guy decides to turn his life around to live up to the expectations of his love

Category: Romance
Link: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-way-she-held-me

I was aiming for Hot but fell a bit short, any criticism is appreciated!

 

[Zeronix]

Some specific feedback I’d find useful
- What are Romance readers looking for?
- What vibes does the title / blurb give you? Does it pull you in? What would you expect the story to be about given the title / blurb?
- If you read the story, how did you feel about it in the end? Did it match your expectations?
- What tags would be appropriate here?