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Akito01
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Age-it-up a bit, say make it a college campus, and you'd have a good premise.
The fact that this isn't the first time such a story request has been made, I'd have to guess there's a fairly good demand for this kind of thing. It's certainly a natural fantasy to have -what it would be like to sneak into the women's locker room, all that sort of thing. Leaving aside the naturally fantastic element of the invisibility itself, I'd like to see a more realistic take on the story, where the main character is more of a voyeur and naturally nervous about being caught (just because one is invisible doesn't mean you don't occupy physical space) -instead of the stories where the main lead is a kind of rampant racist.
The fact that this isn't the first time such a story request has been made, I'd have to guess there's a fairly good demand for this kind of thing. It's certainly a natural fantasy to have -what it would be like to sneak into the women's locker room, all that sort of thing. Leaving aside the naturally fantastic element of the invisibility itself, I'd like to see a more realistic take on the story, where the main character is more of a voyeur and naturally nervous about being caught (just because one is invisible doesn't mean you don't occupy physical space) -instead of the stories where the main lead is a kind of rampant racist.
Pyro Paul
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then leave it with rye humor. ie: he covertly blows his load thinking none can see him, but his gooy come lays on the floor, before he can react, a girl walks by and slips on it... the rest come to her aid and start investgating the goo... strange what is it? rolling it between their fingers. smelling it.
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What about whatever makes him invisible wears off right at the end, hes caught, and arrested?
Just adding a touch of realism, guys.
Just adding a touch of realism, guys.
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bisexplicit said:What about whatever makes him invisible wears off right at the end, hes caught, and arrested?
Just adding a touch of realism, guys.
touch of realism?
then it should wear off, the girls then beat him to a bloody pulp for being a perve, basicly castarte him and throw him out into the middle of the gym floor to bleed out as all the other guys laugh at him and his discomfort.
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not too many stories have 'realistic' endings because most endings tend to end darklike. i mean Guy finds his wife, with his daughter. then all of a sudden, Boom threesome. thats hot. or in reality, guy finds his wife and daughter togeather in bed. they all enrole in therapy, years later the husband and wife devorce and child is sent to a home away from that over sexual devient sex offender.
later, the wife, losing everything goes Role play frogger out in traffic on I-5. later... Deranged women, influenced by video game commits suicide in traffic senete and other political figures that have no idea what they are saying will make a statment about this soon. more at 11.
later, the wife, losing everything goes Role play frogger out in traffic on I-5. later... Deranged women, influenced by video game commits suicide in traffic senete and other political figures that have no idea what they are saying will make a statment about this soon. more at 11.
I don't recall the title, but there is one really nice invisibility story on Literotica about a guy who is given an invisibility hat from a bored rich guy from the future. He ends up having sex with his teacher and a fellow student. Both find out it is him. Since everything was consensual there are no negative consequences.
Sorry for the double (now triple) post. I was trying to respond to PM eyembrian that I found it but it kept showing up here because I stupidly replied to the thread subscription instead of the PM. Mods, feel free to delete the two extra posts (i.e. this one and the one above it).
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