Introducing a new member and a request..

[CraigB81]

Hi there, I've been browsing the stories here at Literotica for a while now, and I thought that it would be good to add some myself. My main interests are fetish (feet mainly) and incest (sister + mother stories), although besides BSDM I am kinda down for anything. One point of interest I'd like to single out is the "loving wives" theme. Like a lot of men the idea of seeing my girlfriend having sex with another guy is a very big turn on for me. And also, like a lot of men, I haven't the slightest idea why it's such a turn on. I've settled on using the "it just is" explanation for it.

As far as writing stories goes, I'm pretty new to the game so I am gonna check out a few of these boards to see if I can pick up some tips and stuff for writing erotic fiction.

I have a few ideas which I've got on my computer here but they're rough at the moment. I am planning on going through and writing them up properly, and posting them here in the near future (once I've got some tips etc!) I must admit to preferring the "rough and ready" style of stories to the romantic side, for me it's about being stimulated by the stories and if I'm reading something where there's lots of hard and frantic sex then it's gonna do more for me than a slow love making type of text.

As far as a description of myself goes, I'm 20 (21 in a months time) and I live in the north east of England. I'm in an online relationship with an older woman from America and we plan to meet up with her visiting me midway through next year. I'm sure we'll do enough to give me plenty of fuel for some stories too!

Anyway, this request I mentioned. Now, as I've said I'm very new to this game so I don't know if this sort of thing is done or not, if it is then cool, if it isn't then I'll deal with that as the reaction comes home. I've basically got a strange feeling it'll go one of two ways, either a person(s) will accept this as a perfectly reasonable request and this will work out great, OR it's something that's frowned upon within the general consensus here and I'm gonna get shot down..lol.. Just in case it's the latter, I'll not go into great detail here and wait for the reaction I get..

So.. Here goes;

Basically I am looking for any person(s) who is/are willing to write a story customised for me and post it on this site. For anyone interested there are two paths to choose from in this story.

1. A story telling me about how my girlfriend has been cheating on me with another man.

Or 2. A story telling me about a man (or men) having consenting OR non-consenting sex with my sister.

Now like I said I am very new to this game and I am not sure how these things are done, so if anybody is interested, let me know then I can take things further from there.

Well, that's all I've got to say on the matter for now. I'd like to get to know people here etc so if anyone wants to ask me anything at all about, well, anything at all in this post, please do so.

That's all for now folks!

Craig.

 

[deliciously_naughty]

welcome

Generally, you've gone along the correct protocols. Some tips:

1. be very specific...are there names you want used, what type of story do you want. In other words give as much detail as possible.

2. When and IF someone says they'll write it, be understanding that these things take time. In fact I don't know of one person on this thread (myself included) that doesn't have 4 or more stories in production right now. Beyond that, once it's written it takes up to a week to get posted, depending on how Laurel's workload is going. Do NOT pm the author asking them how it's going every three minutes...it's annoying and the authors WILL turn on you. There are a couple of people who learned that the hard way...if you harrass one author they will speak up and the rest of us generally close ranks and refuse to write the story as well. Not that I'm assuming you will, but it's happenned enough that it bears mentioning.

That's pretty much it...anyone else have tips?

Other than that...take a look at my story "he's not my brother" (you can get it from my author page link in my sig line) and tell me if that's along the lines of what you want. Right now we're working on limited info.

 

[CraigB81]

Okay, well I guess I can go into a little more detail here then..

Firstly the girlfriend one. I want the story to be in the form of a man telling me how he's been having sex with my girlfriend. Describing what they've been doing, how they've enjoyed it etc. As far as background goes, she's went to meet up with a male friend who runs his own business, to do some work for him (just filing/sorting paperwork out etc). They used to be quite close however since she's known me she hasn't had much to do with him. The guy has a fascination with large breasts (and if I can be blunt, tit-fucking), which my girlfriend enjoys also, (If this sounds specific in parts it's because this guy does exist, he asked her to do some work for him, the rest is all my fantasy! )

As for names and descriptions, the guy is called Gary (that's literally all I know about him) and my girlfriends name is Judy. She's 44 years old and of a fuller figure, with large breasts. She's about 5'4" with shoulder length blonde hair. Now for what happens, that is up to the writer of the story, although I don't wish for any pain/bdsm/spanking or anything along those lines to be included. Pretty much anything else goes. The guy gets to cum on and in her too.

Now for the second option, my sister is 27 years old, 5'4" also with long dark brown hair. Her name is Sarah and she's of slim build with small-medium breasts. She's basically got a great figure. I want the story to be similar to the above, that is a guy telling me (bragging, if you like) about how he's been having sex with my sister and how she's cheating on her husband. Like before, I'd rather not have any pain/bondage etc included, and pretty much anything else goes. Guy also cums on and in her.

Now there's a couple of things I'd like both stories to include no matter what else is in. A slight/mild domination theme from the guy. Not to the point of making the girl in question his slave, more the type of "who's yer daddy?!" kinda thing. I'd like to have the guy do the "holy trinity" ie. all three orifices. Also an element of foot fetish, not like foot worship, more like a footjob type of thing. How much or how little of that happens is up to the writer. One more thing I would like is for the guy to cum at least twice. Once in and once on the girl in question. This is also up to the writer whether it is only twice, or as many times as you would like to include.

That's about all that comes off the top of my head for now, if there's anything else you'd like me to be specific about please pm me/reply here and ask me. Also I do understand that these things do take time, though I'm glad you've pointed out those little guidelines for me to follow..

Thanks.

 

[deliciously_naughty]

craig...thanks..that's exactly the kind of detail and request (I want to see this/please don't use this) that we love

 

[CraigB81]

<modest>Well, what can I say..</modest>

Nah, seriously, I'm glad I went about asking the right way.. I didn't want to get off on the wrong foot, so to speak.. This is something I would normally write myself but at present my erotic fiction skills leave a lot to be desired.. I thought if somebody who is actually good at it could do it, it'd be cool.. It'd most likely give me some tips on how to go about writing them too..

I did submit one to the story section of a foot fetish website a while back.. It was about a situation with a particular type of my sisters footwear.. And it was utter garbage.. lol.. If I can pluck up the courage and get over the embarrassment of it.. (and find it.. that helps!) I could post it here.. If anything for somebody to point out where I'm going wrong.. (which could take several hours..lol)

 

[sirhugs]

Craig, the only way to get better is to write. Lit is a volunteer board- as far as I know, Laurel does not buy stories. Most if not al are also original to Lit, so new blood is a constant need.

the Story Feedback board is where you post the link for constructive advice after posting. The volunteer editor program ( accessed via the story index ) is for help before you post. There are also very good writer's resources available via the story index.

 

[CraigB81]

Sirhugs, thanks for that advice. At present I'm actually in the middle of writing two stories to be posted here when they're finished, although I'm not too far with them yet. First one is about a young guy having sex with an older aunt and the second is a little more personalised in the form of my "fantasies" about a previous boss I used to work for. The latter is pretty much just in the ideas stage whereas the guy and the aunt story is underway.. Again, thanks for the advice I'll be sure to check out the writers resources and the volunteer ed's sections.

With it being the festive season an' all I haven't been online for a couple of weeks until the last 2-3 days and I was wondering if anyone is interested in taking up either of my story requests as I haven't actually had any response on that side of things. If anyone is interested please reply or PM me here and we can discuss these further.

Thanks!

Craig.