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It took me a long time to finally get my story sorted. 5 Chapters all at once pending (Oops, that might have been a mistake on my part but we'll see).
I couldn't post it sooner because I absolutely detest continuity errors...well, when they're created by me. By other people they tend to be funny
It took so long for various reasons. I'll not be posting the webcomic here, it is not the right place to get the traffic. But, here's a quick pic of the protagonist so at least you guys will know what isn't going to be posted on literotica
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/95732602/Etsu_All_Fours2.png
I couldn't post it sooner because I absolutely detest continuity errors...well, when they're created by me. By other people they tend to be funny
It took so long for various reasons. I'll not be posting the webcomic here, it is not the right place to get the traffic. But, here's a quick pic of the protagonist so at least you guys will know what isn't going to be posted on literotica
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/95732602/Etsu_All_Fours2.png
Tx Tall Tales
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Looking forward to reading it! Welcome to Lit.
Nice pic, BTW.
Nice pic, BTW.
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Hullo dahlink! Welcome to the board. This is the most fun I've had in years, and I sometimes get answers to serious writing questions too!
(Yes, I do ask serious questions sometimes, shut up, you.)
You actually have the same breakfast time as me, if your location is accurate. I do sausages over in Naked Party some mornings, although they will be late tomorrow as my Piglet has gone away for a week and all meals have become moveable feasts.
(Yes, I do ask serious questions sometimes, shut up, you.)
You actually have the same breakfast time as me, if your location is accurate. I do sausages over in Naked Party some mornings, although they will be late tomorrow as my Piglet has gone away for a week and all meals have become moveable feasts.
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Thank you for the welcome and for the vote of confidence in this little corner of the internet.
You lost me a little after the first smiley, but hey I enjoy a bit of randomness from time to time. Not this time however, the clock has struck, so I'm handing it in on an assault charge.
You lost me a little after the first smiley, but hey
I enjoy a bit of randomness from time to time. Not this time however, the clock has struck, so I'm handing it in on an assault charge.
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Thank you for the welcome and for the vote of confidence in this little corner of the internet.
You lost me a little after the first smiley, but hey
I'm sure you will catch up, sweet pea.
Naked Party Lounge is where we hang out chatting, LOL. OK, flirting and chatting <snerk>. There is flirting in lots of other threads too. Especially if I am there, LOL.
Guidelines for Naked Party: pop in, read a few previous posts. Ask for a drink from resident bar people Olaf or Rolf. You can have whatever you like and offer your friends all sorts of nice things. Mine's a Lagavulin, thank you. (Unless Tio is around and then we will be drinking vintage champagne and kicking Johneb surreptitiously if he tries to make Mimosas with it. And HP and me and other Brits come by in the mornings and have coffee and sausages.) Make idle chit chat with pals and tell good stories. If there is misery in your life, go to Isolated Blurt where people will often refuse to allow you to be isolated about it and offer consolation and virtual chocolate.
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Next five
Well it took me a while to find the time to re-edit my draft of the next five chapters but I'm pretty much there. I've submitted two more chapters to my "Etienne and Monique" story and am currently editing chapter 8.
I hope you all enjoy them.
If you want to read them then you could do worse than starting at the beginning
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-01
Much love all.
Well it took me a while to find the time to re-edit my draft of the next five chapters but I'm pretty much there. I've submitted two more chapters to my "Etienne and Monique" story and am currently editing chapter 8.
I hope you all enjoy them.
If you want to read them then you could do worse than starting at the beginning
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-01
Much love all.
patientlee
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Well it took me a while to find the time to re-edit my draft of the next five chapters but I'm pretty much there. I've submitted two more chapters to my "Etienne and Monique" story and am currently editing chapter 8.
I hope you all enjoy them.
If you want to read them then you could do worse than starting at the beginning
http://www.literotica.com/s/etienne-and-monique-ch-01
Much love all.
Thanks for the warning in the intro. It's not my style, but good luck to you!
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Thanks for the warning in the intro. It's not my style, but good luck to you!
Its my pleasure. I don't want people reading my story and then throwing their hands in the air in disgust just because it doesn't fit with their own particular passions. I'd rather get all the potentially controversial and salient aspects of the story in a concise summary, thus avoiding an angry mob with pitchforks
It is a shame that it wasn't your thing but I appreciate the support and respect your choices.
Out of curiosity can you name the sort of story that does float your boat so-to-speak?
patientlee
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Its my pleasure. I don't want people reading my story and then throwing their hands in the air in disgust just because it doesn't fit with their own particular passions. I'd rather get all the potentially controversial and salient aspects of the story in a concise summary, thus avoiding an angry mob with pitchforks
It is a shame that it wasn't your thing but I appreciate the support and respect your choices.
Out of curiosity can you name the sort of story that does float your boat so-to-speak?
Here's the link to the request I made this summer for reading suggestions:
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=910674
Sums up my boat floating.
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Reading choices
Interesting. One of the first things that you mention in your list of things to avoid is 'incest'...where of course my story is about that.
I just wanted to say I think you'd like my story then...now hear me out.
It is not a "Two sisters get drunk and then decide to do the naughty." story.
Nor is it a "Two sisters find themselves in -blah- situation and turn to each other."
The only reason that it fits into the incest category is because it has to. They are conjoined twins with shared genitals and so anything that they do would hypothetically be considered incest...but...that said, they do kiss and play with themselves, but given their circumstances the only other option would be to become nuns
I guess what I'm really saying is that this story is less about the incest and more about one or the other twin always being along for the ride. It also challenges the line between incest and regular (well, sapphic anyway) sex, asking at what point does it become incest when neither party is doing anything wrong? It is also something of a moral question; if they were arrested for incest what could they do? After all, it would mean locking one of them up when they are innocent or locking them both up when you weren't actually separating them, which goes against the point of convicting someone for incest in the first place.
If you were linked to a twin brother but shared genitals would you leave your todger well alone?
I guess what I'm really saying is that to disregard everything that fits within a naming convention might mean that you are missing out on some real gems.
Some stories make me cringe. Strange though it may seem to some people but I detest erotic stories with men in them...don't know why...I just don't want to know anything about another man's body, pleasures or urges. Oh I'll read through the heterosexual love scenes if I'm enjoying the story as a whole, but I'll also avoid stories that state "Contains erotic heterosexual scenes."...ridiculous isn't it?...but that's my foible and I'm the only one who has to deal with it.
Okay I've rambled on...what I am asking is that you give it a chance based on the premise that it is deeper than just a story about sisters banging each other, there is much more to it and a hell of a lot more adventure to come
Interesting. One of the first things that you mention in your list of things to avoid is 'incest'...where of course my story is about that.
I just wanted to say I think you'd like my story then...now hear me out.
It is not a "Two sisters get drunk and then decide to do the naughty." story.
Nor is it a "Two sisters find themselves in -blah- situation and turn to each other."
The only reason that it fits into the incest category is because it has to. They are conjoined twins with shared genitals and so anything that they do would hypothetically be considered incest...but...that said, they do kiss and play with themselves, but given their circumstances the only other option would be to become nuns
I guess what I'm really saying is that this story is less about the incest and more about one or the other twin always being along for the ride. It also challenges the line between incest and regular (well, sapphic anyway) sex, asking at what point does it become incest when neither party is doing anything wrong? It is also something of a moral question; if they were arrested for incest what could they do? After all, it would mean locking one of them up when they are innocent or locking them both up when you weren't actually separating them, which goes against the point of convicting someone for incest in the first place.
If you were linked to a twin brother but shared genitals would you leave your todger well alone?
I guess what I'm really saying is that to disregard everything that fits within a naming convention might mean that you are missing out on some real gems.
Some stories make me cringe. Strange though it may seem to some people but I detest erotic stories with men in them...don't know why...I just don't want to know anything about another man's body, pleasures or urges. Oh I'll read through the heterosexual love scenes if I'm enjoying the story as a whole, but I'll also avoid stories that state "Contains erotic heterosexual scenes."...ridiculous isn't it?...but that's my foible and I'm the only one who has to deal with it.
Okay I've rambled on...what I am asking is that you give it a chance based on the premise that it is deeper than just a story about sisters banging each other, there is much more to it and a hell of a lot more adventure to come
patientlee
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Ok. You've convinced me. I'll give it a shot. (Although you could bump yourself to the top of my reading list by reading and commenting on my Halloween story, Jeffrey's Murderer. Only one part with a man, and you're not supposed to like it anyway.)
Two things:
1. Put a link to your stories in your signature line.
2. I'm a girl. I'm not sure what a "todger" is, but I'm pretty sure I don't have one.
You are very persuasive.
Lee
Two things:
1. Put a link to your stories in your signature line.
2. I'm a girl. I'm not sure what a "todger" is, but I'm pretty sure I don't have one.
You are very persuasive.
Lee
Interesting. One of the first things that you mention in your list of things to avoid is 'incest'...where of course my story is about that.
I just wanted to say I think you'd like my story then...now hear me out.
It is not a "Two sisters get drunk and then decide to do the naughty." story.
Nor is it a "Two sisters find themselves in -blah- situation and turn to each other."
The only reason that it fits into the incest category is because it has to. They are conjoined twins with shared genitals and so anything that they do would hypothetically be considered incest...but...that said, they do kiss and play with themselves, but given their circumstances the only other option would be to become nuns
I guess what I'm really saying is that this story is less about the incest and more about one or the other twin always being along for the ride. It also challenges the line between incest and regular (well, sapphic anyway) sex, asking at what point does it become incest when neither party is doing anything wrong? It is also something of a moral question; if they were arrested for incest what could they do? After all, it would mean locking one of them up when they are innocent or locking them both up when you weren't actually separating them, which goes against the point of convicting someone for incest in the first place.
If you were linked to a twin brother but shared genitals would you leave your todger well alone?
I guess what I'm really saying is that to disregard everything that fits within a naming convention might mean that you are missing out on some real gems.
Some stories make me cringe. Strange though it may seem to some people but I detest erotic stories with men in them...don't know why...I just don't want to know anything about another man's body, pleasures or urges. Oh I'll read through the heterosexual love scenes if I'm enjoying the story as a whole, but I'll also avoid stories that state "Contains erotic heterosexual scenes."...ridiculous isn't it?...but that's my foible and I'm the only one who has to deal with it.
Okay I've rambled on...what I am asking is that you give it a chance based on the premise that it is deeper than just a story about sisters banging each other, there is much more to it and a hell of a lot more adventure to come
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The 'todger' part was just a metaphoric anacronism, it wasn't directed straight at you specifically...but I get your point.
And...thanks for the suggestion to add my story link to my signature, I'll sort that out. I suppose I don't like to do it out of habit, it seems narcissistic, if people want to read my work they'll read it. The risk is that people post stuff on forums just to get their signature seen to promote their work...I am a little more old fashioned in that respect.
Whichever way you have more than earnt my attention and I'll happily read your story
And...thanks for the suggestion to add my story link to my signature, I'll sort that out. I suppose I don't like to do it out of habit, it seems narcissistic, if people want to read my work they'll read it. The risk is that people post stuff on forums just to get their signature seen to promote their work...I am a little more old fashioned in that respect.
Whichever way you have more than earnt my attention and I'll happily read your story
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Welcome to the AH, one of the "Big Four" - you know, Bedlam, Charenton, Bellevue, and ... this place. Enjoy it!
And a mycologist as well as a writer-illustrator! I trust we'll see some illustrations of the more erotic species of fungus? And while literotica has rules against bestiality, I don't there'd be objections to a bit of myciality in a story...
And a mycologist as well as a writer-illustrator! I trust we'll see some illustrations of the more erotic species of fungus? And while literotica has rules against bestiality, I don't there'd be objections to a bit of myciality in a story...
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The 'todger' part was just a metaphoric anacronism, it wasn't directed straight at you specifically...but I get your point.
And...thanks for the suggestion to add my story link to my signature, I'll sort that out. I suppose I don't like to do it out of habit, it seems narcissistic, if people want to read my work they'll read it. The risk is that people post stuff on forums just to get their signature seen to promote their work...I am a little more old fashioned in that respect.
Whichever way you have more than earnt my attention and I'll happily read your story
It's more work to read the story without the link. I'm a reader more than a writer, so I appreciate the easy way out.
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