Into swapping?

[Varian P]

I've got a story on which I'd like to get an in-depth, constuctive critique. It's just under 10,000 words, and falls into the non-consent category, but with a twist, in that the victim is a man (the perps are women).

I'd really like to get a male perspective on the psychological/emotional effect of the story, but I'd be grateful for a thoughtful critique, regardless of the sex of the critic.

If you're interested in doing a swap, PM me.

Thanks!!

Varian

 

[vargas111]

I'll have a look. I have written some Fdom stuff, so that part is a plus for me.

 

[Varian P]

Hi Vargas.

Thanks for your kind offer to have a look at my story. I'll PM you with the details.

-Varian