Interested in reading a humourous first attempt?

SudoGentleman

Earl of Shrimps
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This turned into a 3-part story, but the first part is still the best in my opinion. A bit wooden to begin (pun not intended), but I think it really shines in the middle. I'm interested in your thoughts, and welcome your comments.

Dan's Hammer

A bit of light fantasy, a man filled with frustration and shame meets someone who helps him work through it, in a novel way. Sorry for the over-the-top-ness. I hope that you enjoy.
 
This turned into a 3-part story, but the first part is still the best in my opinion. A bit wooden to begin (pun not intended), but I think it really shines in the middle. I'm interested in your thoughts, and welcome your comments.

Dan's Hammer

A bit of light fantasy, a man filled with frustration and shame meets someone who helps him work through it, in a novel way. Sorry for the over-the-top-ness. I hope that you enjoy.
Made me smile x
 
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