As you may have seen I have added a bit to your interactive story. I really enjoy were you started it, but why don't you add a bit more to get the rest of us going!
Hey Sexy-girl, cool story so far,
just a question are you a lesbian or are you just interested in other lesbians? I'm not asking for any particular reason except curiosity.
I will continue to add more to the story as long as you want me to, but I know I get a little carried away sometimes,(just read some of my previous entries in other interactive stories!) if their are thing's you would prefere left out I will restrain myself.
I think it was an excellent idea to base a story on and look forward to contributing many times in the future. Another question (yes I am a nosey bugger),
just how sexy are you Sexy-girl?
You don't have to answer but with a name like yours I had to ask!
Sexy-girl, don't you hate it when people put stupid unrealistic things in like giant dicks or tits, there's no point and it does'nt make sence (Did I spell that wrong?).
Are Donna and Lisa based on you and your girlfriend, and would you like to get caught? As it is an unusual but very good story idea. I will try to stick to the subject given but sometimes I get carried away and can't help what I write as it sort of writes itself, so forgive me if it seems to be going in a strange direction.
I have added an offshoot not quite at the end of that one called Sirens. One possibility this opens is a timejump to Lisa (or Donna) being released from prison/reform two years after this incident. (hey, at least everyone would be 18+ )
There could be a parole condition of the two not meeting, which raises possibilities.
Noting here that you have made an addition is a good idea for keeping it going.
Seems to me that interactive stories work best when two (or three) people just carry one thread to it's conclusion. Thus after you add a piece, someone soon extends it, which is a kind of like feedback.
Sort of like couples holding hands, each wandering their private paths through a garden.
would like to see more interactive stories myself...though i think it would work better on the SRP board....though there was one "Secret Agent" something.....found it quite amusing....
Our hands are tied. Authors here can't write under 18 characters. I don't think many of us will risk it, even if we were interested. Try a different site, or ask Laurel to delete that story and begin another one with older girls.