Input wanted on my "Clergy" series.

[ReverendS]

Hello there! I'm looking for some constructive criticism on my first three stories for the Literotica site, "Catholic School Girl in Trouble". "The Confessional", and "Hot for Preacher". I've gotten many positive responses on the subject matter, but I'm looking for some critical views on the writing itself as well. If anybody would like to post their insights on these stories here (or ask questions about them) I'd be most grateful. Thanks!

Naked except for for a Jar Jar Binks mask,
The Rev.

 

[Guest]

Where is the link to your story. If you want us to read it, provide a quick way to find it.

 

[ReverendS]

Where is the link to your story. If you want us to read it, provide a quick way to find it.

Whoops! Sorry about that, I'm new to this forum. I should have thought about that. Here are links to all three stories!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=18417
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=18907
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=22356

There you go! Once again, I look forward to your criticisms!

Rev. S.

 

[PreachersCunt]

Well, Rev... your stories are right up my alley! I'm not sure I'm qualified to critique, but I sure know I like them!

Thanks and keep 'em cumming!
Del