I really enjoyed the first three of these stories. The concept of a hermaphordite was really different and interesting, and I liked the names of the characters standing for human characteristics. But (there's always a but) they have now become rambling and convoluted. Personally, I can't keep all those characters and events straight. Is there a way to end the series and/or simplify it a little. There's just too many people in too many places.
Innocence Lost
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