SecretGuardian
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Hi. I’m new to Literotica and I want to write my first story.
Because I have never written anything I would like to be helped to improve the idea I have for my first story:
It’s about a woman who feels lonely because her husband travels a lot. Besides, when he’s at home they don’t have much sex because he grew up in a Christian orphanage and they taught him that sex should only exist when it comes to procreating.
One day, when her husband is on a business trip, the protagonist’s sister comes to visit her home, the sister knows that her sister is dissatisfied and advises her to be unfaithful, at least once.
The protagonist refuses. Then, they start drinking and a few hours later, with both a bit drunk, the sister proposes to take a photo posing sexy. The protagonist is so drunk, she accepts.
Then her sister uploads the photo to an anonymous app on the Internet.
The next day, the protagonist realizes that she is receiving many messages on her phone from that app, (which her sister installed without her noticing)
She reviews them and discovers that they are all obscene messages, she thinks to delete them but befores she reads some and she he realizes he gets off on reading them.
There’s one guy in particular who tells her the dirtiest things she’s ever read, and he’s the one who makes her horny the most.
As the days go by they begin to exchange messages (she planned to ignore them at first, but then she ends up responding)
And that’s all I have.
Obviously I would like the protagonist and the anonymous subject of the messages to end up having sex, but I don’t know how to get them to meet in person (and to be in an exciting way for the reader, not just invite themselves to a place and appear)
I don’t exactly know the content of the messages either. I think it should be dirty to get the girl’s attention.
Anyway, that’s all I have, thank you for reading, and also thank you for any ideas you can give me.
Because I have never written anything I would like to be helped to improve the idea I have for my first story:
It’s about a woman who feels lonely because her husband travels a lot. Besides, when he’s at home they don’t have much sex because he grew up in a Christian orphanage and they taught him that sex should only exist when it comes to procreating.
One day, when her husband is on a business trip, the protagonist’s sister comes to visit her home, the sister knows that her sister is dissatisfied and advises her to be unfaithful, at least once.
The protagonist refuses. Then, they start drinking and a few hours later, with both a bit drunk, the sister proposes to take a photo posing sexy. The protagonist is so drunk, she accepts.
Then her sister uploads the photo to an anonymous app on the Internet.
The next day, the protagonist realizes that she is receiving many messages on her phone from that app, (which her sister installed without her noticing)
She reviews them and discovers that they are all obscene messages, she thinks to delete them but befores she reads some and she he realizes he gets off on reading them.
There’s one guy in particular who tells her the dirtiest things she’s ever read, and he’s the one who makes her horny the most.
As the days go by they begin to exchange messages (she planned to ignore them at first, but then she ends up responding)
And that’s all I have.
Obviously I would like the protagonist and the anonymous subject of the messages to end up having sex, but I don’t know how to get them to meet in person (and to be in an exciting way for the reader, not just invite themselves to a place and appear)
I don’t exactly know the content of the messages either. I think it should be dirty to get the girl’s attention.
Anyway, that’s all I have, thank you for reading, and also thank you for any ideas you can give me.
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