Infidelity starts with text messages.

SecretGuardian

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Hi. I’m new to Literotica and I want to write my first story.
Because I have never written anything I would like to be helped to improve the idea I have for my first story:
It’s about a woman who feels lonely because her husband travels a lot. Besides, when he’s at home they don’t have much sex because he grew up in a Christian orphanage and they taught him that sex should only exist when it comes to procreating.
One day, when her husband is on a business trip, the protagonist’s sister comes to visit her home, the sister knows that her sister is dissatisfied and advises her to be unfaithful, at least once.
The protagonist refuses. Then, they start drinking and a few hours later, with both a bit drunk, the sister proposes to take a photo posing sexy. The protagonist is so drunk, she accepts.
Then her sister uploads the photo to an anonymous app on the Internet.
The next day, the protagonist realizes that she is receiving many messages on her phone from that app, (which her sister installed without her noticing)
She reviews them and discovers that they are all obscene messages, she thinks to delete them but befores she reads some and she he realizes he gets off on reading them.
There’s one guy in particular who tells her the dirtiest things she’s ever read, and he’s the one who makes her horny the most.
As the days go by they begin to exchange messages (she planned to ignore them at first, but then she ends up responding)

And that’s all I have.
Obviously I would like the protagonist and the anonymous subject of the messages to end up having sex, but I don’t know how to get them to meet in person (and to be in an exciting way for the reader, not just invite themselves to a place and appear)
I don’t exactly know the content of the messages either. I think it should be dirty to get the girl’s attention.

Anyway, that’s all I have, thank you for reading, and also thank you for any ideas you can give me.
 
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does it turn out to be hubby?

does she mention it to the Best Friend, who blushes and confesses it was her?

does she have a male Best friend who she shows it to and he confesses it was him?

Since Lit permits incest, you could substitute a family member for friend.

Or maybe she doesn't end up having sex with the internet guy, but confesses her attraction to her priest, who seduces her..
 
Stranger.

does it turn out to be hubby?

does she mention it to the Best Friend, who blushes and confesses it was her?

does she have a male Best friend who she shows it to and he confesses it was him?

Since Lit permits incest, you could substitute a family member for friend.

Or maybe she doesn't end up having sex with the internet guy, but confesses her attraction to her priest, who seduces her..

Well, my first intention is for him to be a complete stranger, not a woman or a family member.
I have nothing against incest or lesbian stories. But what I want to write right now is hetero infidelity.
Also, I think it would be hard to believe that it is precisely some woman’s acquaintance who discovers her photo in a random app. (Unless it is the same sister who tells that person, I suppose)

Of course, I accept any suggestion and if I like it very much you can make me change my mind.
 
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One element I think would improve the story is that the protagonist feels unattractive since the husband seems content with sex once a week since they're not ready for kids yet. Perhaps he does feel that sex is only for procreation, but before they got married they attended couples counseling with their priest or minister and he ok'd them doing it with protection as long as they never ended a pregnancy, and they agreed.

The sister suggests while they're drinking she is very attractive and posting a photo would get many of admirers. Rather than obscene because that might scare her off, they are very complementary. She enjoys reading them and eventually begins communicating with one or two. Eventually, the men get bold and suggestive bordering on obscene while she eats it up. She doesn't tell her sister everything that's going on other than she was right.

One day, he suggest they meet. What should she do?
 
One element I think would improve the story is that the protagonist feels unattractive since the husband seems content with sex once a week since they're not ready for kids yet. Perhaps he does feel that sex is only for procreation, but before they got married they attended couples counseling with their priest or minister and he ok'd them doing it with protection as long as they never ended a pregnancy, and they agreed.

The sister suggests while they're drinking she is very attractive and posting a photo would get many of admirers. Rather than obscene because that might scare her off, they are very complementary. She enjoys reading them and eventually begins communicating with one or two. Eventually, the men get bold and suggestive bordering on obscene while she eats it up. She doesn't tell her sister everything that's going on other than she was right.

One day, he suggest they meet. What should she do?

I like the idea that the obscenity of messages increases with time. Thank you.
 
I would think that any woman that posts a sexy picture to a dating app is going to receive hundreds of creepy responses. Rather than her being intrigued by one of them, I think she should be interested in the one that is not.

Maybe he could tell her how beautiful she is but nothing creepy and talk to her about being lonely, maybe starting a relationship off slowly. They exchange some text messages over time, then meet for coffee. In her mind, it's all innocent, she's only meeting to talk.

Build up the story gradually and end it with the final seduction
 
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