Indian Incest lovers

[MlledeLaPlumeBleu]

Pure?!?! What's the meaning of this?

You mean you can be funny?

Christ-biscuit snacks- that made you almost....human.

Wow, I'm glad Inquisitor Pure lets Playful Pure out of the padlocked steamer trunk every once in awhile.


-mildly mollified Mlle

 

[damppanties]

My opinion, fwiw:
I think this is going over board in the hugging dept. The author's English, if compared to many Indians ,is filled with errors. I say that as a reader of A Roy "God of Small Things" {?}and others.

Pure,

Are you actually saying that you don't like his writing as compared to published, award-winning, internationally acclaimed Indian authors?

As for your idea that - The author's English, if compared to many Indians ,is filled with errors. - No, it's not. (Forgive me for leaving Ms. Arundhati Roy out of the many Indians that you are comparing him to.) I live in India. I hear people speak like that everyday. It's irritating. It's even been given a name by the press - 'Hinglish' - which means a combination of Hindi and English or what I would like to call Indianised English. It's even called 'desi' English by some people. Desi is native in Hindi. The story demonstrates the exact way most people speak English here - which might be wrong, but it's very real.

It's not really even Grade 12 of a good school, say, in Hong Kong, whose students I tutor routinely.

Though there's a bit of verve to the story, it could be improved in many ways, eliminating such phrases as "I was fucking her fantastically."

Perds generosity of spirit is misplaced, imo; one doesn't do the guy a favor, if he wants to write erotica, of saying "Oh your English mistakes are so quaint and endearing they shouldn't be touched." Or that he writes at a "4" level. Without intending it, that's really not as respectful and saying what needs fixing.

J.

PS I've read some dynamite "Indian" stories {Indian author, Indian setting} at lit, but don't have ref handy.

I agree to most of what you said there. I didn't like his story (I think it was called Slave to South Indian Actress). Couldn't read beyond a few paragraphs and gave him feedback in his Story Feedback thread. I don't think he should try writing in English before he has more command over the language.

 

[Guest]

Ah, those impure thoughts of Catholic girlhood

Firstly, my apologies to all too.

Purely,

This astral courtship is over; not gonna work. Grisha is virtually downloaded to my twat and I have not a smidgen of irony left to give you. I am profoundly contrite but I must ask that you please return the subtext of my aura immediately (it won’t do you any good, sugar; we were a mismatch from the start).

Cordially, Perdita

p.s. You can keep the glossies, I've already put them on my homepage.

p.p.s. please stop sending me roses, you know I prefer phallic shaped cacti about to bloom.

 

[destinie21]

Re: The Secret

Perd, my perd, mi perdida,

Your cruelty breaches a fundamental trust so I'm going to have to them 'our' secret. Please forgive me.

I've been meeting Perdita for many months, but only on a higher plane of being, that some ignorant folks call 'astral'. We fell out because of her apparent involvement with her virtual idiot stepson, Grigori. I did not want them to share a room in the crystalline sphere, while I was away. He's 20 eons old, after all. I can't say if 'knowing', as we call it here, actually transpired; maybe it was just harmless brushing of his photoscopic scintilla. But it just got to me. These weird vibrations. I thought it best to leave quietly; I just didn't show up on the plane for our usual meeting a couple nights ago, but she blew up and said she'd deal with me publicly.

My apologies to all; I do not enjoy washing dirty virtual laundry in public. So sorry, my perd.

Where do you get virtual fabric softener?

I'm sure I won't regret replying to this post
I'll rue and lament it though

 

[gauchecritic]

Gotta agree with DP on this one (just glad my initials aren't DP). We have a great many Indian/Pakistani people round these parts and LM's story along with many many other 'Indian' stories are very close to the spoken English of these people.

I could discern very little difference with the phraseology used or indeed the content between this effort and others of the same theme by different 'Indian' writers, with one exception: there wasn't any translatative use of Indian words as usually occurs.

I too think them charming in their foreign use of the language.

The main thing you have to remember when second language users use English is that they have to contend with a completely different sentence structure. I like 'em.

Gauche

 

[MathGirl]

they have to contend with a completely different sentence structure. I like 'em.

Dear Gauchie,
Me, too. I think they're hilarious.
MG

 

[Pure]

So gauche, do you reject the theory that the story (or author) is somehow fake? a put-on? an attempt at ridicule?
J.

 

[Pure]

mi perdida, mi perdida carinosa,

i begin to understand why your hallowed ground was always so tender,

//p.p.s. please stop sending me roses, you know I prefer phallic shaped cacti about to bloom.//

o, yes, I knew the blood could not have been caused by me, but foolishly i could only think of Grigori's massive endowment. anguished i could only see, in my jealousy, it tearing you, rupturing your holesomeness. ever since you said--remember--'Grigori's as thick as a goddamn can of Campbells soup,' I just could not excise that abominable image, that horrid skewering from my nightly terrors.

i try imagine why a phallus, for you, is crowned with thorns; no doubt your Catholic upbringing is somehow involved; i still do not know, either, why you wished to be so cruelly affixed to a makeshift cross during our celestial interpenetrations. nor why you used to say, at the acme of our bliss, Come my barbaric Savior. in your native tongue, of course.

i'm just sorry i can not longer 'be there' for you, to remind you of the splint'ry potential of those fragmentary cross relics--holey detritus often extending to almost a foot--which you've collected since before our paths crossed.

without seeming to be immodest about the depth of our 'knowing', it perhaps make sense that subsequent to your etheric connection to my ligneous rampart, that you feel fit only to receive the sceptre of thorns. my god, my dear do not succumb too fully to some savage enactment of the prick of love.

and a trace of yew.

 

[Quasimodem]

Me, too. I think they're hilarious. MG

The content makes me nauseated. The delivery makes me want to snort.
This can be hazardous to your health, terminal to your dignity.

 

[Guest]

Señor del Pureza, mi hombre irracional, desilusionado y muy twatico,

We needs must break abruptly. Go see a Catholic priest and get your iconage straight (or bent, depending on the man). Keep the aura, I'm cultivating a new one.

The 'yew' was thoughtful, I admit I was touched (well, a bit aroused really, but the moment's passed).

And what the fuck are you doing hi-jacking a "serious" thread? ¡No puedo creer qué se viene sobre usted!

Deje la fuerza estar con usted,

su mujer perdida, Perdita

 

[Quasimodem]

. . . And what the fuck are you doing hi-jacking a "serious" thread? . . .

THIS is a serious thread

 

[Pure]

Are you saying hack Indian incest porn is not a serious topic?

 

[MlledeLaPlumeBleu]

Can you quote me someone who said it is????!

 

[MathGirl]

DurtGurl downloaded that story. Seemed like excellent fodder for her talents. Just made for parody. Didn't work. It's too much like a parody already. The writer couldn't have made it better if he'd tried.
MG

 

[Pure]

aamof, mlle

perdita said,

. . And what the fuck are you [pure] doing hi-jacking a "serious" thread? . . ..

the threads on hack Indian incest porn.

J.

 

[Guest]

Pure: I did not use the term nor say that "hack Indian incest porn" is a serious topic. I was being sarcastic in my exclamation to you; still this thread is not titled "hack Indian incest porn". Nor do I believe the stories by the thread starter are "hack Indian incest porn". It's your phrase, keep it to yourself.

Pure, puhleeze, find a basic logic course.

Perdita

 

[Pure]

mi pequeña paloma, it's not always obvious when you're serious or not, ever since your accident. bolded texts with swearing don't leap out as jokes.

perhaps a look into the background of what happened, will help everyone understand the difficulties you present, o sweetest love. you came home. a few months back, from your regular meeting of the Society for the Veneration of Holey Relics, with those fragments of our Savior's cross.

i urged you merely to handle them during your prayers. i even conceded that rubbing them gently upon the thighs might be a soothing and propitiatory gesture of veneration.

you went on about, "I shall come to inner knowing of the passion of our Blessed Lord." o woe that i did not see the fly in the ointment or the splinters on the board.

i try to understand you now, for i remember, too, the diagnosis of the 'nerve doctor' as you used to call him. but with the mood swings, but it's difficult, mi amor perdido

sorry too if you've gotten a taste for the shabbiest of Indian porn; but I don't judge those blessed needs so disfigured by adversity. i know it's often necessary to really 'wallow' when the hurts go so deep.

 

[Guest]

Chingado Puro, you fucking crack me up you twat.

Stop it.

Perdita

 

[Pure]

Perd, Nor do I believe the stories by the thread starter are "hack Indian incest porn".

All right (or 'alright' as they say at literotica), I'll settle for 'crappy, writerly-skills-challenged Indian incest porn.' K?

A 'hack' can make a sale to a purveyor; this guy couldn't; he does not reach the level of 'hack writer.' K?

You're always in my dreams; even your cruelty gives me wood.


J.

 

[Guest]

You're always in my dreams; even your cruelty gives me wood.

Puro, mio,

You have given me a larf on a really really bad day.

in melancholia, Perdita


(But isn't it really my cruelty that you crave?)

 

[oggbashan]

Can any of the contributors to this erudite thread help me with plot ideas for a story I'm trying to write about Kerala women's hairy armpits?

Personally I can't see the attraction but there is a large audience on Yahoo slavering for hairy armpit erotica. I can't disappoint such a potential audience, so please help.

Og

 

[Pure]

and I don't blame you for turning to Lovermachan's depraved mommy burblings, for solace.

life's a bitch.

J.

hijita, you don't have the heart or stomach for the truly cruel stuff required by the quintessentially aberrant. but i respect you for that.

 

[Guest]

My goodness, Ogg, I hadn't realized hair fetish could be so discriminatory.

On the official Kerala government site I found this, perhaps they could be of use. - Perdita

"The Kerala Women's Commission, a statutory organization under state Government was first constituted under Section 5 of Kerala Women's Commission Act 1990 (Act 17 of 1995) as per GO (P) No. 9/96/SWD dt.

14-3-96 with a Chairperson and six members, to improve the status of women in the State of Kerala and to inquire into unfair practices affecting women and for matters connected therewith or incidental thereto."

 

[oggbashan]

My goodness, Ogg, I hadn't realized hair fetish could be so discriminatory.

...to improve the status of women in the State of Kerala and to inquire into unfair practices affecting women and for matters connected therewith or incidental thereto."

Does improving the status of Kerala women include providing razors or would that detract from their attractiveness?

Kerala women are not the only ones who have fan clubs for their hairy armpits. They just have the largest number of club members. Perhaps I could publish the same story several times after using search/replace to substitute other Indian regions for Kerala. Is there a fortune in hairy armpits?

The erotic pictures show the ladies with their arms clasped above their heads revealing the full glory of their hirsute areas.

Og

 

[oggbashan]

Believe it or not ...

This is the main group:
"http://groups.yahoo.com/group/KeralaWomenArmpit4u"

The introduction says:

"This group mainly contains pictures of Bulky Indian women showing their shaved and unshaved fleshy Armpits. If you love to see beautiful and mature Indian women and their Armpits then your choice to join this group is right. The members can post photographs and movies of the same topic. The pictures and movie clips must be Indian and on topic otherwise it will be deleted. Please make this group popular and express your comments and suggestions. Enjoy!!!! "

Another group is:

"http://groups.yahoo.com/group/indiansweatyarmpits/"

I'm sure you wanted to know that.

Og