Indian Cuckolded Farmer and Thakur

[spankedboy]

I write stories with Indian themes (user name: spankedboy) and recently trying to flesh out this idea.

Synopsis: Poor farmer, shy and timid, toils all day and earns meagre amount of money. His wife is vivacious, and has big dreams. She catches the eye of the local Thakur (Zamindar, feudal landlord) and decides to seduce him and become his mistress for material benefits, and thus cuckold her husband. Her husband loves her, and is frightened of the landlord, so initially he gives in because of the material benefits, but then finds out he likes the humiliation.

Looking for ideas, embellishments and readers to chat with to help flesh out details.

 

[mathuranjali1983]

How about instead of the wife seducing the thakur its the thakur's son who sees her and is intstantly smitten. He blackmails them with increasing their loan payments or threatens their children. Main thing is that both wife and husband should be very reluctant. She is forced against her will to become his mistress but comes to secretly enjoy thesex with the young and handsome man. She should also be a rough diamond i.e with some grooming maybe a trip to the city for some new clothes she looks just like a hot film actress. The husband also starts to realise as the affair continues that she is out of his league now. They both come to enjoy the material things that he gifts her maybe also helping their children go to a good school.

 

[samsin]

Great idea..
Let the zamindar have her first and then his son.
I agree with mathuranjali1983, make her a raw diamond and then give her a makeover and the rest of his thoughts.
however there is one thing I don't agree with is that, please don't bring materiality in every paragraph, mention about the woman's ambitions and her about her big dreams once or twice but please don't make her do everything for money, that just takes all the fun out of the story. concentrate more about how the wife seduces the zamindar and the sex scenes.

Will be waiting for ur story..

if u want any help feel free to drop me a PM..

 

[spankedboy]

thanks

So how about the zamindar sees here and desires her. He molests her first in front of her husband (they are walking on the street and he is riding on horseback) and the molestation could at first be verbal, and then on another ocassion he runs his hand along her back and pinches her butt.

wife is angry at first but as husband does nothing (he is terrified of the zamindar and is secretly also turned on at the thought) she exaamines the idea. Next time, when the zamindar gropes her, she is not too resisting.

so I am thinking what the next step will be after these initial scenes. Does he bed her with or without the husband watching? Does he abduct her?

 

[sanapatel]

hey i would love to work with u

 

[ceelaa]

Let us have an additional parallel story about the woman's son and father seeing the Thakur's son taking the woman. A take off on the son voyeur theme. Later on the woman's son helps his mother's lovers to make fuck his mother which is both father and son being cuckholded by the woman.

Great idea..
Let the zamindar have her first and then his son.
I agree with mathuranjali1983, make her a raw diamond and then give her a makeover and the rest of his thoughts.
however there is one thing I don't agree with is that, please don't bring materiality in every paragraph, mention about the woman's ambitions and her about her big dreams once or twice but please don't make her do everything for money, that just takes all the fun out of the story. concentrate more about how the wife seduces the zamindar and the sex scenes.

Will be waiting for ur story..

if u want any help feel free to drop me a PM..

 

[curiousnewboy95]

Just loitering around on this forum ...i would say...it's such a naughty but extremely exciting idea... I would love to participate and write.

18.m...i am good at writing but new to this forum...already i see there is lot to explore.

 

[spankedboy]

Starting to Write the story

I have started to write this story. Deciding if the final version will tell the story from the viewpoint of the cuckolded farmer or his wife. At first the wife will be reluctant but slowly starts getting into it.

If anyone is interested in collaborating with this story they can PM me or add me on google chat.

 

[saltpepper57898]

Let us have an additional parallel story about the woman's son and father seeing the Thakur's son taking the woman. A take off on the son voyeur theme. Later on the woman's son helps his mother's lovers to make fuck his mother which is both father and son being cuckholded by the woman.

I would love to read a story also covering this point. Hope @spankedboy listens to this.

 

[spankedboy]

I haven't thought about this in a long while. Anyone wants to take a stab at this?