Incubi vs. Angels

Texguy84

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So, this is a erotic horror story idea I came up with while driving home from Oklahoma (long drive). It'd be an extension of some of my previous stories, but if anyone wants to play with the base concept of this story, have at it, and send me links :devil:

This story is basically about sex demons who use their powers for evil (and their analogues, who use their sexual powers for good), and the mortals, both good and evil, innocent and not-so-innocent, caught in between.

I haven't quite fleshed out (pun intended) the powers and traits of the sex demons in my stories, but what I've got so far is if the demon ejaculates in a mortal girl's pussy, she becomes consumed by orgasmic flames, turning into a pile of ash on the floor. If he cums in her mouth (or rather, down her throat), she turns into a sort of sexual time bomb, seeking out partners (who, as a rule, are unable to resist her) who she ensnares in her sexual embrace before bursting into flames, consuming them with her. If the demon cums in her ass, she becomes a loyal servant of his, and gains the powers of the Succubus. An Incubus is, it goes without saying, incredibly difficult for a mortal woman to resist.

In the presence of an Incubus, mortal males become uncontrolably aroused, and can be indirectly manipulated by the Incubus. If, for example, a guy and his wife have just finished making love, and an Incubus enters the room, the husband may find himself rock hard, pulling his wife onto him, and holding her on top of him while he fucks up into her, thus immobilizing her while the Incubus climbs on the bed, moves up behind the wife and slides his cock into her ass, whether she would have been able to resist him alone or not.

A Sucubus is, of course, a female sex demon, luring man and woman alike with her charms, a combination of raw sexuality, magic, and long-practiced skill. They have a very long, very prehensile tongue, capable of such feats as coiling around a man's cock, or sliding deep inside a pussy or ass to get those hard to reach places. They can either feed off of sexual energy, drawing sustenance from arousal, sexual pleasure, and orgasms, or they can directly feed off of life energy, draining a victim dry in the throes of orgasm. They also possess a long, prehensile tale which they can use for various purposes. Some succubi lactate, producing a milk capable of destroying all that is good and innocent in a person who drinks of it, while simultaneously boosting sexual stamina and other traits. Enough of this milk can turn a mortal man into an Incubus, assuming the Succubus allows him to live long enough for this to happen.

Mortals taken by a Succubus whose lives are spared tend to find themselves unwilling to resist her will, doing pretty much anything she tells them to. This doesn't necessarily mean they can't do things she doesn't want, in one of my stories, an enslaved woman who is sent to prepare dinner while the succubus fucks her boyfriend and his room mate uses the phone in the kitchen to call for help while cooking dinner. The key being that the succubus didn't think to tell her NOT to call for help.

Since all things in the universe ultimately must balance, there are also good analogues to the sex demons. For lack of a better word (if anyone wants to suggest such a word, lemme know), I'm gonna call these angels. Basically they use their powers for good, and only use the more lethal powers against evil mortals (or, on occasion, against weaker sex demons) A female angel might use her powers to lure a rapist to his death, or a male angel might recruit agents of his own, attracting say, the sister of a particularly brutal mob boss, and through his talents, turning her to his cause and having her use her newfound powers to remove her brother.

The Angels and the Demons form various organizations, sometimes fighting eachother directly, other times by proxy via the mortals, on both large scales and small scales. They all posess superhuman strength that they can draw on when needed to dispatch mortals or fight other supernaturals.

The specific story I am thinking of writing (after I finish Frightful Night's Delight, of course *slaps forehead*) would have a plot by a particularly powerful Incubus (who I'll call Max, unless I think of a better name) to capture an innocent mortal girl, Eve, who posesses very strong latent sexual traits, which would make her a brutally powerful Succubus if he could turn her, or a highly dangerous Angel if the Good Guys(TM) realize her importance and find her first. Even as a succubus she would be dangerous to him, possibly gaining free will and turning on him, so his choices are to turn her and try and control her, or simply dispatch her in the variety of methods at his disposal.

Max would be a powerful Incubus, in this case a handsome, well-built black man (who, being a sexual demon, it goes without saying that he's VERY impressively endowed), who uses his sexual powers for evil.

Also involved are two somewhat less innocent mortals, Jezebel and Mary. While both are quite sexually active, Jezebel is, to be blunt, a slut, who sleeps with numerous guys, stealing boyfriends and using her charms for personal gain, while Mary tends to reserve her amorous actions for whichever boyfriend she tends to be with at the time, on occasion indulging in group sex when her boyfriend agrees to it. Through the course of the story, Jezebel is recruited by Max, eventually becoming a Succubus herself, while Mary, who is unusually capable of resisting Succubi and Inccubi, becomes tasked with protecting Eve and trying to gain the attention of the Angels and delivering Eve to their care. Along the way, various other mortals and demons/angels get into the action.

This story could end with a happy ending, with Eve joining up with the Angels and becoming a very powerful Angel in her own right, or with Mary failing, and Eve either being turned or destroyed (one possible way that Mary might fail, despite her ability to resist the demons, would be if an Incubus, such as Max, walked in on her and a boyfriend like I described above, resulting in her being both already highly aroused (being in the heat of the moment) and being held in place by her boyfriend, who may or may not realize just how bad the situation is, but unable to bring himself to release her and stop fucking her. :devil:

So, thoughts, ideas, input?
 
Sounds wonderful babe. I can't wait to read it. I'm rather for the not-so-happy ending myself, just end everything with a firey free for all.

But i'm badly behaved. :devil:
 
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I like this idea.

I'm for the "good triumphant" ending, b/c in my experience, in these kind of stories the bad guys tend to win more often than not.

A few thoughts:

-can Succubi/Incubi be redeemed or Angels corrupted? Do their powers work on each other? If so, you might want to have an Angel engage a Succubus/Inccubus in some sort of sex-combat.

-you might want to flesh out the abilties of the Angels some more. As it is, they seem to be the same as Succubi/Incubi, except good. Perhpas they would have some sort of healing abilities?

-where all Succubi/Inccubi and Angels initially mortal, or did some of them start out that way? If so, where'd they come from?

-can Inccubi/Succubi and Angels be transformed into mortals?

-are you going for the actual Divine War thing here, or are you just using the terms for simplicity's sake?

-is there some sort of hierarchy or chain of command for either group?
 
Hmmm....personally, I like my own "Aunt Lilith" series and its view of angel-human intercourse. :D
 
Shendude said:
I like this idea.

I'm for the "good triumphant" ending, b/c in my experience, in these kind of stories the bad guys tend to win more often than not.

Well, an idea I had banging around in my head was, right after the incubus started assfucking our fair heroine, someone walked up behind him and whacked him upside the head with a louisville slugger or something.

few thoughts:

-can Succubi/Incubi be redeemed or Angels corrupted? Do their powers work on each other? If so, you might want to have an Angel engage a Succubus/Inccubus in some sort of sex-combat.

Yah, I figure they can be redeemed/corrupted in a variety of ways, ranging from someone bringing them under their thrall, to the being having a change of heart due to events that occur, and so on.

-you might want to flesh out the abilties of the Angels some more. As it is, they seem to be the same as Succubi/Incubi, except good. Perhpas they would have some sort of healing abilities?

Maybe they could have different abilities based on their origins or other augmentations, but the basic idea was that they had similar powers, but employed them to different ends.

-where all Succubi/Inccubi and Angels initially mortal, or did some of them start out that way? If so, where'd they come from?

Dunno, figure most of them were initially mortal, maybe some have "always been that way", dunno where they all came from, but I could easily borrow the old story of Lilith and say that all the Succubi/Incubi are descended from Lillith. (Lilith, according to her story, was the original woman, who learned the True Name of God and used it to gain power over him. She was exiled from Eden and gave birth to the demons. Eve was a later creation, instead being made from Adam's rib rather than from clay. IIRC, this is considered a somewhat heretical theory by the major western religions.)

-can Inccubi/Succubi and Angels be transformed into mortals?

Maybe, could be fun.

-are you going for the actual Divine War thing here, or are you just using the terms for simplicity's sake?

Well, I'm using the terms for simplicity's sake, though I could bring in a sort of holy war as a plotline later on if this story develops.

-is there some sort of hierarchy or chain of command for either group?

Like I said, there are many various groups of these guys, ranging from super evil to super righteous (not to mention evil guys thinking they're righteous, of course). Some groups are bigger than others, and in general a smaller group will either do what a larger group tells them, team up with other groups against the larger group, or just get out of the way.
 
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