Incestuous Masquerade

[Athena_e19]

Hello All!

I have been having this recurring idea that I keep coming back to for an incest story. I had initially been inspired by it several years ago in a thread here but never got around to it. I am back now, and wanted to see if anyone wanted to work on this with me.

Basically my idea is for a father and daughter incest story- I would like it played out by two people here or via another BB, mainly because it is more exciting not knowing what your partner will post. I would be the daughter of course, and would love to have an excellent writer for the father's line of thinking.

The story would follow these type of lines: A daughter becomes an escort to help pay for her graduate school bills (she is 22 or 23). It is at an upperclass establishment so everything is strictly above the belt and anything extra comes at a very high cost and is only at the discretion of the escort. Every year the establishment puts on a Masquerade ball to celebrate another successful year and bring in new clientele. The girl's father would attend the ball (He has not seen her since she was 12 for some reason or another) at the behest of a friend of his. He would not have dated since his wife had divorced him (when the girl was 12). His assigned escort for the evening would be his daughter of course. Again there would be no initial sexual contact beyond very minor brushes, etc. He would become a recurring client and would gradually develop a rather unhealthy obsession for his escort. Eventually he would hire a PI or act on his own and begin to stalk the girl. In the course of the stalking he would discover that she is his daughter and then deals with the emotional-sexual battle of this discovery. All the in between details and dialogue are open and anything that carries over after as well.

I need a fatherly second for the role and if we decide to include a PI we can. We can post this as a BB or over email. It is entirely up to us. Any takers?

PS: I don't want this to become a multi post for single sexual encounters. I want it ultimately to be a story. We see two versions of the same events from different peoples stand points, ultimately leading to the climax of the story- whatever that happens to be.

 

[bisexplicit]

I think your best place to post this is the Sexual Role Playing section - since that is what you are looking for.

 

[Athena_e19]

I am looking ultimately for someone to write a story with, not simply do a bulletin posting. Once we have built up a good idea of where we want to go, we can move it where ever we need to, to actually write it. I am interested in talking with some people who have some ideas for this and would be willing to put the time into writing it with me.

 

[padiwan]

I'm curious to hear more.

I think the biggest thing would be deciding on the actual set of events and actions that each person mutually experiences. Then you can get a more consistant feel from the story while allowing each writer to express the experience differently.

 

[Athena_e19]

I would agree to a limited extent. Largely I want this to be about two people starting at the same point, separating for a long while, and then being tied back together at the end through odd bounces of the mind, chance, and coordination.

I want there to have been a divorce in the background when both characters were younger- caused by a business dealing going south. The young woman would have the awareness surrounding that event as a child. Perhaps she has matured and better understands what happened between her parents. Perhaps not. Ultimately I want the story to pick up a week before the ball, fill in some details, than jump to the ball itself. This would be an important individual experience for the father mainly, with the daughter playing the good escort- of course she is not aware this is her father. Things would progress from there as the father deteriorates into an obsessive lust over this woman, until he eventually discovers she is his daughter and that instead of acting as a drawback, pushes him over the edge and he goes to great lengths to take her.

Main events for me would be:
1. Intro- just a day in each character's life a week prior. Used to fill in some background.
2. Ball itself or a prepatory day for the ball.
3. Masquerade Ball?
4. One or two followup meetings between the two. Father is too aggressive and forward, daughter refuses to act as an escort for him anymore.
5. Father still obsessive/offended/ego-maniacal and hires a PI. Some investigative voyeurism perhaps?
6. Father becomes increasingly obsessed with the sexual muse of this woman- who he finds is his daughter. Perhaps he molests her in hopes of relieving his tension. Maybe has the PI do it and watches on tape.
7. Daughter catches onto it that she is being set up for a trap. Unable to escape it.
8. Father captures daughter, rapes her repeatedly, attempts to brainwash her into someone that is "his".

If you are interested I would love to find some people to work on this with. People seem to stop replying once they say they are interested. Even if you just have ideas you would like to propose that would be great. Bouncing these things off of each other is very effective in helping to develop them.

 

[CowboyPride]

Maybe I am worthy?

I don't know if I am worthy of helping you with this story, but if you are trying to get the story posted on lit. I might could help. If you want I wouldn't mind sending you a sample to see if it what you would like. Give a sample scene that you would like the father to go thorough and I will see if I can hash out a simple peice to see if it meet the requirements you seek.

I only just recently wrote my own daddy/daughter incest story and am currently awaitng it's approval. I can send a copy by email of course and see if the fatherly role is worthy. I am not sure how I can help you write a nobel prize piece if you are looking for that.

While the idea does sound good, I would try my hand at it through a sample. One question that I have is.. If all the scenes are sent back in emails, and your trying to get this published, how will the story be pieced together.

But again I would have to see if it is something that I can really sit down and hash out a writing with before I would absolutly consider taking on this piece.

Anyway, that is my 2c worth, although not really sure if it is even worth that.(LOL)

 

[BedtimeStories77]

...I think the biggest thing would be deciding on the actual set of events and actions that each person mutually experiences...

Originally Athena did say she enjoyed the "unknown" involved in role play.

It does seem like the Sexual Role Play board is the best place to "start". I've developed "full" stories from role plays before. It can be done.

 

[padiwan]

Originally Athena did say she enjoyed the "unknown" involved in role play.

It does seem like the Sexual Role Play board is the best place to "start". I've developed "full" stories from role plays before. It can be done.

Well, being new here I guess I don't quite understand the context she meant by "the unknown". My thought was that since it was a shared experience, the unknown came from reading the other's perception of the experience. My concern is that the play of events in each storyline would not match up and detract from the experience of reading it for the first time.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

A role play online, such as on the Sexual Role Play board, is a place where several people share in writing a "story" together.

One person will start it, writing up some kind of opener and description of the character they're portraying. They may even add a small paragraph or two of basic plot.

Then someone interested in the tale will post and write up their character bio and how that character fits the story. Sometimes three, four, or more people will join as well.

That is how the plot is "unknown". You never know what someone else will type. They can be a lot of fun.

 

[Athena_e19]

I think this is where this falls into the Story Idea category- not into the Roleplay. I want the events and everything else to be rather crafted out before hand at least in a general sense. What I want to incorporate is two experiences of two individuals of the same or similar events across a broader timeline. The father is in a sense the cause; the daughter the effect. What he does will affect her and how he interprets or challenges her reaction will continue to imitate that same cause effect-relationship.

The events and the timing of them I want worked out. But I want a guy who could get into the head of a father who becomes obsessed with a woman he eventually discovers is his daughter. And I want to do my best to play at the opposite role.

I hope this helps describe what I am looking for a little more clearly.

PS: If you look at my join date you will find that I have been involved with Lit a long time and chose to post here primarily for a reason.

 

[padiwan]

I hope this helps describe what I am looking for a little more clearly.

For me it does.

You mention obsession in the context of the father. Is the father's obsession for the daughter (though unknown to him) lustful, in the sense that she is a conquest or something to be coveted. Or is it a passion for someone new in his life that he comes to need.

I guess I could be playing too much with semantics, but to me there is a difference between obsession and passion (though it is a very thin line).

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Then I apologize for misunderstanding what you wrote and for trying to be helpful.

 

[padiwan]

Then I apologize for misunderstanding what you wrote and for trying to be helpful.

Please. Be helpful. I'm new here and can use all the guidance I can get!

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Please. Be helpful. I'm new here and can use all the guidance I can get!

Sorry. I should have quoted previous text. I made my comment to Athena.

 

[Athena_e19]

No harm no foul.

When I say obsession I want it to be more a power struggle than anything. I want the father to have the background of a historically wealthy and powerful family- not a dot.comer made good. Someone who is used to being respected and revered simply for their name/ bloodline. His daughter would have the experience of her mother- a commoner made good. She would be attending law school and paying her way through as a high class escort- strictly a companion, not a glorified stripper or a prostitute. More like a traditional Japanese Geisha.

When he first encounters her at this masquerade his experience is a combination of lust from not having been with a woman in a while and fascination. When she refuses further advances it becomes a struggle of power. When he learns that she is his daughter it becomes his ability to defy societal standards and so called laws. He may relate this back to his bloodline. And after all this obsessing it converts into raw animalistic lust and his reasons are largely irrelevant.

 

[padiwan]

I have to wish you good luck, Athena. I know myself well enough that I can say I'm not the person to write the father's side of the story. But I'm looking forward to reading it.

 

[Athena_e19]

It is tough to find someone who really will embrace it. Most people seem to be looking for the quickie roleplay. I want a guy who will put some thought and spelling into what he writes.

 

[Texguy84]

It is tough to find someone who really will embrace it. Most people seem to be looking for the quickie roleplay. I want a guy who will put some thought and spelling into what he writes.

SPELLING in a story? You speak madness, woman!

 

[BedtimeStories77]

lol Tex.

 

[Athena_e19]

I think part of the problem is that most guys can't get their left hand out of their pants long enough to write. So they are hurriedly typing with one finger on one hand between my story, a porn site, a chat room, and a bulletin board. Perhaps this is a bit harsh but I haven't had any luck. Anyone care to prove me wrong? Besides guys aren't really known for being able to multi-task.

 

[padiwan]

I think part of the problem is that most guys can't get their left hand out of their pants long enough to write. So they are hurriedly typing with one finger on one hand between my story, a porn site, a chat room, and a bulletin board. Perhaps this is a bit harsh but I haven't had any luck. Anyone care to prove me wrong? Besides guys aren't really known for being able to multi-task.

You just haven't been with the right guy then.

And there's nothing wrong with keeping one hand in the pants, until it's his turn to write.

 

[Athena_e19]

I have the luxury of not wearing pants very often- skirts are much easier to get away with masturbating in while at work, school, or home. I have a professional position so it is a pleasure to dress accordingly (other than the heels... heels are a nightmare... especially when they are the real cute pointies!). It is a love-hate relationship.

So introduce me padiwan... Who is my auther with a shining pen, riding in on a white piece of college-ruled paper?

 

[Texguy84]

I think part of the problem is that most guys can't get their left hand out of their pants long enough to write. So they are hurriedly typing with one finger on one hand between my story, a porn site, a chat room, and a bulletin board. Perhaps this is a bit harsh but I haven't had any luck. Anyone care to prove me wrong? Besides guys aren't really known for being able to multi-task.

Actually, more often than not, I don't even jack off while cybering, since I really can't conentrate on doing that and coming up with something to say next. If I do, it's usually towards the end, or after the conclusion.

Oddly enough, I cyber less and less on the lit chat because I just end up having interesting conversations with girls and never get around to the cyber part *slaps forehead*

 

[Athena_e19]

Damn us women! We can talk and converse interestingly too! For shame.

Well I am sure that someone could answer the question of what to do with a woman when her mouth is open and you want some silence? My answer probably differs a little from yours.... But so does my anatomy.

 

[padiwan]

So introduce me padiwan... Who is my auther with a shining pen, riding in on a white piece of college-ruled paper?

No author with shining pen here. Just a humble padiwan on the road to truth (with the hope of a little entertainment on the side).