incest story idea!!!

[avish_mo]

hello to you all!!!

i have this story in my mind for some time now, ihope some one can give it a try.

the story is from a woman's point of view.
there were two girl friends sherry and merry, they grew up together all the way throught high school and college
merry was more open sexual and teaser than sherry
- all along the friendship.
after college - merry left to overseas ans got merried there to a rich guy , sherry merried and had a son ,mike, and had to work hard to help support the family.
they where in touch couple of time during the years.
when mike was 13 his dad died (work accident) so sherry had to work harder.
when mike turned 20 his mom got a call from merry says that she is divorced and want to come and visit.
now when merry come to sherry's home she start to tease sherry about her son (he can be a soldier or whar ever)
and she offers to educated him and teach him
after a while during dinner after a bottle of wine sherry ask mike if he likes merry, he said yes and the mom offers the cuple her own bed room to enjoy of...
she then goes to mike's room and hear all the action (a lot of guidnes in the sex scenes)
in the morning merry come out with just a g - string and keep teasing sherry (even pulls down mikes boxers to show his mom what a tool he has there....)
they keep on in the games and the mom gets more and more attracted to her son and try to seduce him too...
from there the story is open to any ending ....all 3 together or just mom son , any ideas??

p.s. when merry tease sherry about her son the even go together to buy some nice sexy oufit to merry to have
in geneal the mom is going along with it , she want to be open like merry, and all of it is told from the mom point of view

any comments? you can also pm me
hope you like
avish

 

[Chicklet]

Sherry and Merry? does that make anyone else a tad bit ill?

First off, to make this story work, give them different names. Maybe spell Merry "Mary" instead, and make Sherry Sheryl or something. Just to make it a tad bit different.

I warn you, Avish, that not many people will offer to write an Incest story. Where's Lexium??

Chicklet

 

[NASCARaddicted]

yeah, I gotta agree

Sherry and Merry ? With so similar names, many people will be confused.

Also, I think it's a little bit unrealistic. I mean, there is this woman.

O.k. so Merry is a horny slut and yes, maybe she offers to have sex with the guy.
But why should Sherry just agree on that ?

I think, it would work better the other way round. There are this 2 girlfriends, Sheryl and Marry. Like you said, they spent most of their times together, even when Sheryl got married, became pregnant with a boy and became widowed ... Marry always helped her

For this boy (Adam), Marry is like an aunt. But for some reasons, when he is about 18 - 20, he notices that he has crush on Marry. At first he thought it was just normal friendship, but after some time his crush got bigger and bigger .... so he seduced her

I think this would work better. I mean, for example: Adam and his "aunt" Marry are on a lake. When they get out of the water, Marry asks, if he can put some suntan lotion on her back. To avoid tan lines, she takes her bikini top off. For her, Adam is just like a nephew. But when he sees her topless, he starts to seduce her, and she allows him to put some suntan lotion on her breasts.

Somehow, they end up fucking, and Marry notices that Adam is real good stallion. And Marry wants to share this stallion with Sheryl - even though it would be incest.

So, there are 2 possibilities: She tells Sheryl about Adam and how good he is in bed.

Or: She could tell Sheryl about this stallion. She tells her so much, that Sheryl really wants to fuck with him. But Marry explains: The stallion wants to remain anonymous, so Sheryl has to be blindfolded during the sex. Of course, Marry will stay near them, so that nothing bad can happen. In the end, they allow Sheryl to take the blindfold off, to see the stallion - her own son ...



Just to add: I had this story idea quiet some time ago. But in my phantasy, the 2 women weren't friends, they were sisters, so Marry was the real aunt. This way, it could be double incest. At first with the aunt, then with the mother ...

 

[avish_mo]

reply...

hi there Chicklet & NASCARaddicted

first i just wrote my fantasi story ( i actually read it once in my native lunguage an di belive that it can be much better in english as there is more vocabilary)
any way - no need to take my head off beacuse i wrote what i think, i just put those names randomally i dont really care what will be the names of the girls

as for the question why would the mother share her son?
well, she see him in a bad mood latley and he is such a hunk and she wants him to feel good so what is better then her good old friend to take good care of mike (or what ever you wnt to call him)
and this is the difference between this story and all the other incest son aunt stories.

p.s i am a nice guy (true - a bit shy) so dont kill me on the begining of the post
Chicklet - who in your opinion can i offer this story to write??

 

[MissTaken]

Avish?

No one is taking anyone's head off. We often look at a story idea and brainstorm bits and pieces of it to make it better.

It is your choice whether or not to take the suggestions.

As for me, those responding on this thread are very experienced authors and are only offering you their advice out of kindness.

If you feel you are being criticized, it isn't so. It is just discussion .

Good luck.

The story sounds very interesting

 

[avish_mo]

i understand. no mean to offend anyone

i understand and i didnt ment to offend anyone and if i did i am sorry , i take the criticisem and look frword for more brainstorming

and thanks for the compliment on the story idea (what got you in it?)
avish

 

[lexium]

I warn you, Avish, that not many people will offer to write an Incest story. Where's Lexium??

Chicklet

Hi Sweetie

I think I see where the story could go, but I think its messing somethings. Life long girlfriends. The son helps the mother and is basically taking care of her. Being a friend and helping her financially. A strong bond between mother and son, but up to this point nothing sexual.

The girlfriends visit. The mother knows her friend and her friend's sexual apitite is remembered as they share a couple of bottles of wine. The friend hints around about the mother's son, but their sexual experiences with each other is brought to lite.

Late night drinking in the mother's bedroom leads to sex. The two friends are so into each other that the mother doesn't notice her son watching. However, the friends sees the son peeping. The friend does everything she can to get the mother acting as wild as she can.

The friend catches the son alone while the mother is away and confronts him about what he saw. The friend fucks the son, all the while putting ideas in his head about the mother, so the son gains more than boyish sexual desires for his mother.

The friend is with the mother and gain and asks the mother secret questions about her son. The friend begins talking about how sexual she thinks the son is and the mother soon agrees. The son is peeping and hears the mother's comments.

The mother is now looking at the son in a different way. The friend arranges for the mother to catch the son fucking her. The mother is totally turned on by the action. So much so that she leans too far into the room.

The friend becons the mother to join them, and a threesome begins.

The friend lives the mother and son to their newly found love for each other.

 

[BlackSnake]

go for it Lexxx!

 

[lexium]

It still seems like something is missing...I don't know what, but...

 

[Chicklet]

Re: reply...

any way - no need to take my head off beacuse i wrote what i think, i just put those names randomally i dont really care what will be the names of the girls
...
Chicklet - who in your opinion can i offer this story to write??

<puts avish_mo's head back into place> i'm sorry if it came off harsh. I can be a bitch sometimes...nothing a little bit of super-glue can't fix.

i think Lex could do a good job. You two should PM some brainstorms back and forth.

Chicklet

 

[lexium]

Chicklet,

Do you see what could be missing with the situation I came up with?

 

[avish_mo]

i still stick in my old version

i dont know lexx,
it can be a good idea the way you suggest but whats turn me on is the seduction and teasing of the mom by the couple (friend and son ) i want to hear what she thinks and feel twords it , to see the stages untill she get horny from the thought of fucking her own son.
i like to read about the way the friend is walking around the house in only g string and tease the mom

what do you think??
is some thing i say sounds unrealistic??

avish

 

[lexium]

Re: i still stick in my old version

i dont know lexx,
it can be a good idea the way you suggest but whats turn me on is the seduction and teasing of the mom by the couple (friend and son ) i want to hear what she thinks and feel twords it , to see the stages untill she get horny from the thought of fucking her own son.
i like to read about the way the friend is walking around the house in only g string and tease the mom

what do you think??
is some thing i say sounds unrealistic??

avish

I think that you have a very good idea. The friend brings their sexual desires to the surface. Sounds great to me.

 

[avish_mo]

soooooooooo.....

who is going to pick up the glove and give this story idea a life????

avish

 

[lexium]

I guess I can handle it, but PM me a reminder I'm working on something else at the moment.

 

[avish_mo]

thank you lex

thanks lexx
when will be a good time to remind you??
avish

 

[lexium]

Re: thank you lex

thanks lexx
when will be a good time to remind you??
avish

PM me this coming Tuesday.

 

[BlackSnake]

Re: Re: thank you lex

PM me this coming Tuesday.

Try again Lexxx, not Tuesday.

 

[lexium]

Re: Re: Re: thank you lex

Try again Lexxx, not Tuesday.

Check your email...

Avish, I have it in my working group. I'll let you know when I have enough for you to look over.

 

[avish_mo]

thank lexx

tahnk u lexx for trying that story