Incest Story Help for Newbie

[KatieAnnBB]

Hi Guys,

I posted three chapters of an incest story started on here...it's called "Massage Mat," and I'm trying to decide whether to develop the story further--and if so, how to do that.

The first chapters got us from mom masturbating and being seen by her 19 yo son through some sexual tension/build up to the first actual sexual encounter between them. That's as far as I had wanted to go, but judging from the comments there seems to be an appetite for more. I've taken a few stabs at "chapter 4," with the general theme of "if you love it let it go:"

The son will go off to college and he and mom bravely try to adapt to life apart--knowing that their relationship is doomed if they stay together. After some time (maybe when he graduates?) they realize that their love is so strong that they do wind up together--perhaps trying to start a life elsewhere as a legitimate couple. Of course along the way, there are ample opportunities for mother/son reunions, for sonny boy to meet a hot co-ed on campus and have a fling, for mom to have a lesbian relationship with her best friend out of loneliness for sonny boy, etc.

I'm resistant to the notion that the story continues by involving more people in the basic relationship--threesomes, foursomes, etc. seem to be the norm here.--or by having mom become son's slut/sex slave. These just don't ring true to me, and I think the story has been successful so far because the characters are realistic.

So here are my questions: Would my energy and time be better spent just writing new stories about new characters and allowing this to remain a "short story" instead of a novel? Does the story line above seem worthwhile? Are there good examples of "incest into marriage" stories on here that I should read?

I'd love any thoughts on the above from anyone.

I'm particularly interested in what experienced writers might have to say about when a story is "done" and it's time to move on vs. continually developing one or two characters.

Thanks in advance for your time!

Katie Ann

 

[KatieAnnBB]

Links to story

Just thought that it would be helpful to post a link to the story in case anyone wants to take a peek:

http://www.literotica.com/s/massage-mat-ch-01

There are chapters -02 and -03 as well.

KABB

 

[Sonofawhore]

I luv jerking off with my m's panties while i read whore mom/son stories

 

[dicky911]

Hi Guys,

I posted three chapters of an incest story started on here...it's called "Massage Mat," and I'm trying to decide whether to develop the story further--and if so, how to do that.

The first chapters got us from mom masturbating and being seen by her 19 yo son through some sexual tension/build up to the first actual sexual encounter between them. That's as far as I had wanted to go, but judging from the comments there seems to be an appetite for more. I've taken a few stabs at "chapter 4," with the general theme of "if you love it let it go:"

The son will go off to college and he and mom bravely try to adapt to life apart--knowing that their relationship is doomed if they stay together. After some time (maybe when he graduates?) they realize that their love is so strong that they do wind up together--perhaps trying to start a life elsewhere as a legitimate couple. Of course along the way, there are ample opportunities for mother/son reunions, for sonny boy to meet a hot co-ed on campus and have a fling, for mom to have a lesbian relationship with her best friend out of loneliness for sonny boy, etc.

I'm resistant to the notion that the story continues by involving more people in the basic relationship--threesomes, foursomes, etc. seem to be the norm here.--or by having mom become son's slut/sex slave. These just don't ring true to me, and I think the story has been successful so far because the characters are realistic.

So here are my questions: Would my energy and time be better spent just writing new stories about new characters and allowing this to remain a "short story" instead of a novel? Does the story line above seem worthwhile? Are there good examples of "incest into marriage" stories on here that I should read?

I'd love any thoughts on the above from anyone.

I'm particularly interested in what experienced writers might have to say about when a story is "done" and it's time to move on vs. continually developing one or two characters.

Thanks in advance for your time!

Katie Ann

Katie Ann, my feeling is that the right development is for son to meet a young woman of his own age and share his secret with her explaining that he does not want to lose you. So he would bring her home to meet you and you would like her and feel she was good for him. However she would accept his love for you and you would begin to teach her how to take care of him. It would become a kind of menage a trois, and as the mother in law you would really control a lot of what happens, including sexually - Dicky

 

[whalee1]

post more chapters, please. i'm curious as to where you're going with this.

 

[Rox88]

I prefer if you just kept it to mother and son Katie, I like the idea of them starting a new life together and moving away and even plan to have a baby.

My head is full of so many ideas on this topic.

 

[ekim22]

I prefer stories from the son's perspective and with plenty of sneak peeks, voyuerism, lingerie, and accidental touches that lead to something

 

[SamScribble]

Who are you writing this for, KatieAnne? You are the author. Only you know when it's finished. If you think there is more, then write more. But if you think you have said what you wanted to say, then it might be time to create some new characters. Either way, good luck.

 

[alwayswantedto]

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[KatieAnnBB]

Thanks to all for your thoughts.

Sam, you gave me the kick in the rear that I needed. You ARE a guru.