Incest, camping, and Earth Day...oh my!

[Guest]

Okay, I need your help.

On April 1st, Laurel will start to accept submissions for Earth Day in the Holiday Contest. I already have ideas, but I'm trying to figure out how they fall into place.

There's this "average", "normal" family... Two parents, two kids. Ages 43, 41, and 18 year old twins (one boy, one girl). This family is camping on the weekend of Earth Day. They have never engaged in incest before, as I said...they're a "normal" family.

So, what I want to know is "how" and "why" would they engage in incest during this camp out?

Also, if anyone has any ideas for a title please share!!!

 

[pop_54]

Yo babe

*An Earth shattering day*

They get high on the event, they get high on anything you want to have them smoke if you like.
They discover that there has always been an attraction, but never realised it before.
They discover the attraction while having their first real adult conversation, first true open no holds barred discussion on sex life and the Universe.
The son begins to realise just how attractive his mother is, then he studies his sister and compares them, falling for both big time.
The father does likewise with his daughter then compares her with his wife.
Result eventual family orgy, all very gentle and loving of course.
Unless you're in the mood to have daddy and son rape the daughter in the bushes while drunk of something, up to you love.

pops.............

 

[Guest]

Thanks for the ideas so far. Right now I'm listening to anything anyone has to say. I've never written an incest story, and I want to keep it as free from cliches as possible.

 

[pop_54]

Yep

This is the problem with incest stories, incest doesn't happen in the usual sexual way, they are rarely strangers who meet in the pub, most incest builds for years, it almost never just happens one day. I'm affraid you may have to riddle the beginning with cliches to get it going, it you're careful you can disguise them though.

pops........

 

[Guest]

I have a feeling you may be right. But, it's nice to get a fresh look on this by hearing what other people have to say.

 

[pointless]

if they're camping why not just have it rain? they'll get all cold and wet, only their blankets in that nice, waterproof tent will be dry. they'll strip, huddle together for warmth, blah blah blah they fuck.

it's not the most original, but it'll work. especially if you set in the spring. i know up here in michigan it rains like a motherfucker in spring and no matter how warm the air is the rain is always bitterly cold.

i'm sure that isn't just up here, but it could work very well. weather is a wonderful plot device.

you could also add a lot of thunder and lightning to a bit of fear into it. i know many full grown adults who are scared shitless of thunderstorms.

if your familiar at all with the great lakes or any large body of water you could throw in the visuals of a thunder storm over the water. i've seen a few and it is a beautiful, frightening thing to see.

 

[Guest]

Great ideas, Pointless.

The story will be set in spring since it's an Earth Day story. (And Earth Day is on April 22th.)

 

[pointless]

didn't know if the rules were that specific. i thought it might just have to be outdoors.

 

[Guest]

Well, I'm not certain, but I think mentioning the holiday in the story is needed for the holiday contest?

 

[pointless]

either way, it is always best to err on the side of caution.



(please excuse the cliche)

 

[Guest]

 

[SexyChele]

I've never done incest before either, but I can understand the desire to stay away from the cliche. How about this:

Brother and sister have always had an attraction for one another, and on their 18th birthday decided to just go for it. Since then (it could have been a couple of months or almost a year before) they have been going at it every chance they can. Now, they are stuck on this family vacation with mom and pop and are dreading the idea of having to give up their nooky sessions because the parents might find out. So, they devise a plan to put mom and pop out for the night so they can fuck like bunnies. Problem is, whatever they give mom and pop doesn't put them out, but makes them high. Mom and pop might be wondering what's happening, but hey, it feels good, so go for it. Just as mom and pop are about to settle in for a major fuckfest, they hear something from the other side of the tent. (perhaps one of those ones with a couple of rooms?) They go to investigate, thinking there is a problem with the kids. What they find is incredible to them - junior and sis engaging in activities that are not normally considered "normal" between bro and sis. However, rather than being upset or angry, mom and pop find they are getting a little turned on at the sight of their kids going for it. Maybe mom decides to suck pop off, makes a noise, gets kids attention. At first there is some embarassment, yada, yada, yada, but mom and pop are so fucked up they don't care - they just want sex. It begins with brother and sister going for it while mom and pop go for it. Eventually, partners shift, etc.

Long, I know, but that's the first thing that popped into my head.


Edited to add: maybe mom and pop used to be part of the whole hippie/earth day thing, but are now respectable. They take the kids camping as a way of introducing them to value of nature and to appreciate Earth Day. Just a way to get the day mentioned in the story. Plus, mom and pop won't be all that wigged out when they find they've been doped up.

 

[Guest]

Ooooo, I like! The parents are still clueless so they can seem like a "normal" family, etc.

Thanks!

 

[SexyChele]

Ooooo, I like! The parents are still clueless so they can seem like a "normal" family, etc.

Thanks!

You're welcome! And good luck!

 

[Guest]

Thank you.

 

[Maxwe11]

Camping has a lot of possibilities.

Nudity is one of my favorite ones. Swimming in a lake or river. Losing clothes for some reason. Having to use only one shower. The old hypothermia, gotta get people in a sleeping bag together naked trick. I don't like making this direct connection, but in erotic stories, nudity can easily lead to sex, just find a way to get them naked together, maybe one at a time. Maybe all at once. And hey, maybe they discover naturism, it is Earth day isn't it?

 

[GentleKinky]

They're good ideas so far. They'd all work I think.

I''ve got a slightly different angle.

There's a guy on the run from the law who comes to their tent.

He takes control. He is not all that aggressive, just as much as he needs to be to convince them to hide him and not go for help. He even lets one or two out at a time under the threat if he suspects them of going for help he will kill one of those hostage.

The fact that some can go out allows a different setting where he isn't present, which could add interest.

Eventually he shows interest in the women. Firstly with the daughter then the mom. Of course it all happens in close quarters so those not participating see it all. At first they are horrified and repulsed. But after a while they get really turned on by it. Because they are a normal family they feel very ashamed that these feelings they've never had before reveal themselves. But they can't help it can they? That's the beauty of it. There's nothing they can do.

Dad, brother and mom get turned on watching the fugitive have sex with the daughter. The daughter's ashamed too because she gets very aroused herself having the whole family watch her. The fugitive notices all this happening, says nothing, but really enjoys it. He then gets the idea of having them perform for him.

He gets daughter doing an erotic strip and masturbating in front of them all. Posing, displaying herself. He gets their digital camera to record it all. He gets her to go up to dad and rub herself against him. Then tells dad to kiss his daughter on her lips and then on her pussie lips. Etc etc etc

Endless possibilities.


Good luck.


Oh I think you could possibly roleplay this to h\get the story developed.


Michael

 

[Guest]

And hey, maybe they discover naturism, it is Earth day isn't it?

That will be good for Lit's next Holiday in the contest... National Nude Day.

 

[BlackSnake]

Okay, I need your help.

On April 1st, Laurel will start to accept submissions for Earth Day in the Holiday Contest. I already have ideas, but I'm trying to figure out how they fall into place.

There's this "average", "normal" family... Two parents, two kids. Ages 43, 41, and 18 year old twins (one boy, one girl). This family is camping on the weekend of Earth Day. They have never engaged in incest before, as I said...they're a "normal" family.

So, what I want to know is "how" and "why" would they engage in incest during this camp out?

Also, if anyone has any ideas for a title please share!!!

As soon as I read this I thought about being one with nature, freedom, naturalism, nudism, joy, and love. The 60's flower children.

The happen to camp among a group of naturalists. Not hardcore protesters. They fall in with the group singing praises for nature and mother earth.

Gathered near the lake, the group is professing their oneness with nature, stripping away the ways of society in celebration of mother earth.

The family is caught up in the ideas of the group and fully participate, stripping away their clothes and cleanings themselves in the lake with the rest of the group.

Solidarity is stressed, as the group give each other hugs as signs that they have stripped away the inhibitions.

The group is fairly large, and the family loose each other in the crowd of naked joyful people. Strangers, hugging and kissing each other.

Free-love, the gathering turn into an orgy along the banks of the lake. Young with old, the family gets caught up in the drama, having sex with strangers, moving from one partner to another.

The father licking, sucking, and poking strange women, something he would have never thought of doing before. The wife, like wise is taking one cock after another into her mouth and cunt, as welling as having her cunt licked by strangers. The son is having the time of his life, poking his cock into young and old women of every shape, size, and color. The twin sister is experiencing sex like she had never before, actually cumming on more than several occasions. A sea cocks rolling over her.

The son was so hyped that he didn't realize that the woman he was pounding doggie-style was his own mother. He only knew that, this one felt better than all of the ones he had tried previously. He was giving all he had, while comer-bys feed his mother their cocks.

The son, getting the opportunity, turned the woman (his mother) on to her back, lifting her legs up to his shoulders as he began thrusting his cock into her again. As he had just begun a steady hard rhythm, he looked at the woman's face. He froze, as did his mother. Seeing the predicament they were in, the mother gain to laugh. The son also laughed, but nervously. The son lowered his mother’s legs, but she wrapped them around her waist to hold him in place. She pulled him down on top of her and held him tight. With his cock throbbing and still buried deep inside his mother’s awesome cunt, it was next to impossible to remain still. The mother began rolling her hips, encouraging her son. More and more the son began pushing his cock into his mother until he was thrusting into her like he had been before.


I began thinking of something like this….

The father happened upon a young woman with her face buried between the legs of another young woman. The young woman who was getting her cunt licked had an older man straddling her chest getting feed his cock. The father slid his thick cock into the cunt-licking young woman and began pumping into her tight snatch.

As the young woman raised her head from the pussy in front of her another man had his cock waiting, which she took into her mouth. The father withdrew his cock, wanting to enjoy as much pussy as he could before he came. The young woman was sucked away into another crowd of men. The young woman who’s cunt had been eaten was still spread at the ready. He drove face first between the young woman’s thighs. The air was filled with moans and grunts, which seemed to make the taste of the young woman’s pussy taste all the better. After a short while, he felt the fingers of the young woman combing through his hair. This encouraged him to continue, using a couple of fingers in an attempt to add to the young woman’s pleasure. Her tightening grip on his hair told him, that he was succeeding. He continued as long as he could until he had to fill her with cock. As he lifted himself to drive his cock into the young pussy, another man presented her with his cock in her mouth. The father proceeded to insert his cock. As he began to pump her with his thick cock, the other man moved away. The father buried his face into the young shoulders as he raced towards his finish. With each stroke it felt as if the young woman’s pussy was squeezing his cock. He thrust his cock as deep as he could as he released his cum without care.

The father relaxed and rolled off the young woman, just as his wife and son knelt at their feet.

“There you two are,” the mother said. “We thought we had lost you.”

The father popped up on his elbows looking at his wife, son, and the young woman he had enjoyed, who turned out to be his daughter. It took him a few seconds to suck in the entire scene. The smiles his wife, son, and daughter’s faces, the way the group began to break into smaller groups of families, and the joy that seem to span from one end of the lake to the other.

“This is some experience,” the son commented.

“Everything, is so perfect and joyful,” the mother commented.

“I wish it could be this way at home," the daughted said.

 

[BlackSnake]

I visualize the four of them making their way back to their camp. they pass by other camper. some having sex in their tents, other fonding each other around small camp fires as the day grows long.

What is obvious and unspoken is their incesuous acts. Unable to find the clothes they had on previously, they dig through their bags trying to find some to cover their nakedness.

The son's ass is sticking up, too temping for the sister to pass up. She swats his bottom. Popping his head up he grabs his but. The mother swats the daughter's ass, and play engulfs their tent. They forget about their clothes as they wrestle around in the tent.

The daughter gets hold of her brothers cock and stuffs it into her mouth.

I visualize that at the camp sight, inhabitions are casted out. If no one says its wrong, then it must be OK. At least at the camp site. Everyone is doing it, making it acceptable.

Earthday turned naturalist day.

 

[BlackSnake]

I can see all four of them being disappoint when it's time to go home. Back to their real lives, controlled by social rules.

Non of them speak of their incesuous acts. They all think about it, but after sometime, things get back to normal where incest is taboo.

 

[Guest]

Thanks for the input BlackSnake. But, I don't think I'll be going that route. I'm not looking for a "cliche family fuck fest" that can be found on most all incest stories at Lit.

A suggestion SexyChele made caught my eye already. The twins have been intimate somewhat already. It's a new found passion for them and when they discover they are going on a family vacation they are discouraged.

Once at the camp out, late at night, they are going to sneak off for some alone time...

 

[BlackSnake]

Thanks for the input BlackSnake. But, I don't think I'll be going that route. I'm not looking for a "cliche family fuck fest" that can be found on most all incest stories at Lit.

A suggestion SexyChele made caught my eye already. The twins have been intimate somewhat already. It's a new found passion for them and when they discover they are going on a family vacation they are discouraged.

Once at the camp out, late at night, they are going to sneak off for some alone time...

That sounds like a good plot. Thanks for letting me get those thoughts out. SexyChele's idea sounds like it may have some real depth to it. Lots of tension. The making of a great story.

BTW, I've been checking out your AV. Anything you want to share?

 

[Guest]

Anything I want to share?

 

[BlackSnake]

Anything I want to share?

Does the cock in your AV belong to someone special to you?