LitRiter
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Jul 6, 2003
- Posts
- 292
Hi Everyone,
I've posted two new stories, and have not received much in the way of feedback, though the Ratings are good in general. What I'm looking for is some real feedback about things I can keep an eye out for to make my future tales better. I've gotten some praise, but not really any criticism.
I am not masochistic, and I'm not looking for people to bash me or my writing, I only want to make future endeavors better. The two tales I'm interested in receiving the feedback for are:
"The Road Home" (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=429815)
"April and Kimber" (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=428857)
The April and Kimber story actually kicked around for a while, in a devlish rejection cycle, which is one of the things that I'm attempting to avoid in the future.
Thank you in advance for your scrutiny, and I look forward to hearing your opinions.
LitRiter
PS: Has anyone else run across their older stories in people's blogs?
I've posted two new stories, and have not received much in the way of feedback, though the Ratings are good in general. What I'm looking for is some real feedback about things I can keep an eye out for to make my future tales better. I've gotten some praise, but not really any criticism.
I am not masochistic, and I'm not looking for people to bash me or my writing, I only want to make future endeavors better. The two tales I'm interested in receiving the feedback for are:
"The Road Home" (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=429815)
"April and Kimber" (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=428857)
The April and Kimber story actually kicked around for a while, in a devlish rejection cycle, which is one of the things that I'm attempting to avoid in the future.
Thank you in advance for your scrutiny, and I look forward to hearing your opinions.
LitRiter
PS: Has anyone else run across their older stories in people's blogs?
