I'm wondering if anyone wants to edit my story...

Elenia26

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It's just a quick little story on public masturbation. I don't need anyone to critique the story, necessarily, unless there's something glaring. I just want someone to check the tenses, make sure it doesn't end too abruptly, etc. It's a male-female story.

Anyone?
 
Ah, that's what I want, even more than an editor - a proofreader, to catch glaring and annoying mistakes. Would I be able to ask you sometime?
 
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