Elenia26
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Oct 28, 2002
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It's just a quick little story on public masturbation. I don't need anyone to critique the story, necessarily, unless there's something glaring. I just want someone to check the tenses, make sure it doesn't end too abruptly, etc. It's a male-female story.
Anyone?
Anyone?