i'm thinking of submitting my first story today.

[metal_minx]

i wrote it for a friend of mine who likes role playing. its pretty hot i think but i wrote it in first person-second person, which is not really the style i'm used to but i guess it worked because he really liked it. '-)

anyway, i'd like to know what subject i should submit it under, here's a sample:

“Don’t make me wait, asshole,” I say firmly. “Get naked now.”
“Yes mommy…you bitch,” you say as your boxers hit the floor.
My eyes go wide when I see your big cock starting go get hard. I walk over to you and reach up, kissing you deeply and shove your shoulders down so you hit the ground on your knees. “Don’t talk to your mommy like that,” I say as I slap your face.
You gasp with excitement, shivering when my hand leaves a stinging mark on your face. Your cock is getting hard as you realize its finally real, after all our talking. I spank your ass hard and tell you you’re bad for getting hard.
“Look at your cock, you horny slut…you’re getting hard for me when you have a nice girl friend at home…you asshole,” I reach down and slowly tease my fingers up and down the shaft.

tell me what you think, please.

 

[freakygirl]

Well if it's about mother/son

I'd say it goes in incest..

 

[desert spike]

OH God, that inspired me......no I got a hard on. That's inpiration isn't it.

Hmmmmmm. I must have liked it.


Slap me, beat me, pull on my cock just like you wrote in your story. hehe,

 

[Mellon Collie]

The subject is not something I'm into at all so I can't comment on that without being biased but grammatically it's great.

 

[metal_minx]

well its not really mother/son just role playing...i would never write or even fantasize about real insest...its just a domination thing

 

[metal_minx]

OH God, that inspired me......no I got a hard on. That's inpiration isn't it.

Hmmmmmm. I must have liked it.


Slap me, beat me, pull on my cock just like you wrote in your story. hehe,

lol thanks spike...*slap*

 

[mtelobo]

well its not really mother/son just role playing...i would never write or even fantasize about real insest...its just a domination thing

the dom thing is what i guessed when i saw it.. a mistress/slave boy if i am not mistaken

 

[metal_minx]

the dom thing is what i guessed when i saw it.. a mistress/slave boy if i am not mistaken

you get a gold star '-)

 

[mtelobo]

you get a gold star '-)

awwww thanks lady... its a subject near and dear to my heart

 

[metal_minx]

so i should go for bdsm?

 

[mtelobo]

so i should go for bdsm?

yes go for bdsm.. its a field that needs more female outlooks and not some guy writing like a woman...

 

[metal_minx]

yes go for bdsm.. its a field that needs more female outlooks and not some guy writing like a woman...

cool '-) i'll do that then thanks for the input

 

[JLatino]

uh...

if i didn't know what i know about myself...i might question some of the things you've told me ...your imagination is incredible!

*kiss*

 

[Private Vasquez]

It's about hot butt-waxin' at the carwash, isn't it?

 

[metal_minx]

It's about hot butt-waxin' at the carwash, isn't it?

you're a little off...