I'm new here and am ready to submit my first story but...

[rikaaim]

Before I do, can I ask a few volunteers to read it so I can get some personal feedback? It's somewhat long. Let me give a brief description. It's about a college girl who fantasizes about her wedding night at home. Anyone interested? Anytype of help would be great since this will be my first sumbmission. I know there is a volunteer edit program, but I just really need a few quick reviews. I can send it e-mail by pasting or however if you are interested.

 

[rikaaim]

If anybody is interested PM me. I may be off for the night soon, but will be back tomarrow. If you leave me a message, I would greatly appreciate any help and send you an e-mail if you would like to assist me.